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A Continuation of a Story
Unit 8 Writing Workshop
高二英语精耕团队 范冬烨
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Learning
objectives
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analyze the story’s main elements.
learn the skills on continuation writing.
apply what you have learnt to the Continuation Writing.
Use evaluation list to help you polish the draft.
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Basic Information
In November
Johnsy, Sue
and Behrman
Greenwich
Village
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When
Where
Where
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Basic Information
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RisingAction
Climax
Falling
Action
In November, Johnsy _____________________________.
The doctor said _____________
________________.
got sick with pneumonia
she might not get better
She counted the ______ out
the window. She thought she must go when the last leaf ____
leaves
fell
Behrman and Sue looked out the window and found _______________. The next morning Johnsy ______________________________
one leaf left
saw the leaf was still there
The doctor __________________
_______________________. Mr Behrman___________________________________
said she would
live and get better
was sick with pneumonia
The next day, Mr Behrman _______. The last leaf was painted by Mr. Behrman.
died
What happened to Johnsy ?
Why she became a famous painter?
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Clue
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The Leaves
falling
one left
negative
positive
healthy
died
awful
Johnsy’s feelings
Mr . Behrman
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Key sentences
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Continuation
Para.1.Tears came to Johnsy’s eyes as she knew what Mr. Behrman had done for her._________________
Para.2.Ten years later, Johnsy became a famous painter due to her dedication and hard work. _______________________________
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Predict the story
What were her feelings
sad, heartbroken,and grateful
What did she do?
Went to see Mr.Behrman immediately and said goodbye to him.
What would she say to Mr.Behrman?
Expressing her deep gratitude and told her future dream
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Para.1 .Tears came to Johnsy’s eyes as she knew
what Mr. Behrman had done for her.
Feelings
Words
Behaviors
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Predict the story
What would she do when she realiz