内容正文:
【冲刺2024高考】高中英语应用文写作
(创新话题命题类)新题速递10
审题+框架搭建+范文+话题表达总结+同话题应用文练习
2024年4月江西南昌二模高三英语应用文
创新点:发帖类、消防演习、分享经历
假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校组织的消防安全演习,请你在校英文论坛发表一篇帖子,分享此次经历,内容包括:
1.活动过程;
2.个人感悟。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:消防安全演习 fire safety drill
第一部分 审题
体裁:发帖类
内容:分享上周参加学校组织的消防安全演习经历
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时
第二部分 框架搭建
第一段:帖子开头= 报道开头(引出活动)
Last week, I had the opportunity to participate in a fire safety drill organized by our school, which proved to be an eye-opening and educational experience for me.
句式Last week witnessed my participation in ....
第二段:活动过程
过程部分也有两种写法:
①用活动类活动套句:讲座+演习;
②纯演习的过程,更突出细节描写的能力。
【写法1】
演习以一场关于消防安全重要性和火灾期间应遵循的正确程序的信息性讲座开始。接着我们将分组,每个小组被指派了特定任务,如疏散大楼、灭火或提供急救。
The drill commenced with an informative lecture on the importance of fire safety and the proper procedures to follow during a fire. We were then divided into groups, each of which was assigned a specific task such as evacuating the building, extinguishing a fire, or administering first aid.
【写法2】
演习以一声突如其来的火警开始,标志着演练的开始。随后,我们被指示迅速而有序地疏散大楼,使用指定的逃生路线。最重要的是要尽量贴近地面行动,以避免吸入烟雾。
The drill began with an unexpected fire alarm, signaling the start of the exercise. We were then instructed to evacuate the building quickly and orderly, using the designated escape routes. The most important part was to stay low to the ground to avoid inhaling the smoke.
第三段:个人感悟
Personally, /On a personal level,...
This experience taught me the importance of being prepared and aware of potential dangers and also emphasized the significance of teamwork and calmness during emergencies.
Through this experience, I realized that fire safety is not just about knowing what to do during a fire, but also about taking preventive measures to avoid one.
第三部分 范文
【参考范文】
Last week I participated in a fire safety drill organized by our school, which left me a deep impression.
We were having a maths class when suddenly the fire safety alarm rang. Under the guidance of our teacher, we immediately left the classroom. With my hands covering my mouth, I b