内容正文:
Language points
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Stephen Hawking
Para 1 Introduction
Para 2
Para 3
personalities
descriptive words
Personality /
qualities
Personality /
qualities Supportive examples
⑤ gifted
⑥ brilliant
⑦ brave
⑧ sometimes careless
in what he said or did
2.stood up and pointed out that Hoyle had made a mistake
3.was willing to say what others were afraid to say
3.to dream of what others were afraid to dream about
3. was willing to admit his faults
2. Hawking’ s own work on the big bang theory
was soon proven by astronomers with telescopes
⑨ determined
3.as a scientist
3.his fight against his disease
This odd combination of characteristics had made him one of the greatest thinkers of the 20th and 21st centuries.
courageous
his success not only in scientific research
but also his fight against disease
supportive examples
How to write an article about an outstanding figure?
【审题谋篇】
体裁 记叙文
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时,一般过去时
话题 介绍著名人物
框架 第一段:指明介绍的人物;
第二段:详细介绍人物;
第三段:首尾呼应。
Writing
基本框架
对人物进行简要的介绍,比如生平、事件、职业等
挑选出人物一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写,要尽可能地详细,因为这影响人们对他/她的整体评价
对人物进行客观的评价,包括其人格、贡献以及闪光点的评价
1. 介绍概况:同位语结构、分词结构,使文章简洁。如:
(1)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. [同位语]
(2)Sun Showier, a world champion in diving , is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. [同位语]
(3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985, Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.[分语短语]
2. 描写外貌:巧用with短语。如:
My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long hair and big eyes .
3. 生平事迹:尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如:
(1)In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award . [定语从句]
(2)In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal , he became the idol of the youth.[分词短语]
介绍著名的科学家。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。
人物身份 杰出的../...先驱
生平活动、成就 出生/教育背景/工作/著名事件/成就/逝世...
评价 被誉为...;被尊敬...
题目:A Brief Introduction of ...
【写作要求】
请你根据下面的提示,用英语对钟南山作简单介绍。
1936年10月出生于南京;1960年毕业于北京医学院;2003年春,钟南山在抗击“非典”中做出了巨大贡献;2020年初钟南山再一次投身到新型冠状病毒的抗疫前线。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使