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WELCOME UNIT 第三部分　高分写作案 PART Ⅱ　 读后续写 读后续写的伏笔与构思 掌握写作微技能 常考话题 目录 CONTENTS 1 2 ３ 创作园地 4 读后续写的伏笔与构思 伏笔照应 找准伏笔，续写照应。什么是伏笔？什么是照应？作者在文章的什么地方设置伏笔与照应？伏笔与照应在读后续写中的作用是什么？ 请看例文： 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As the mother of an eleven­year­old girl, I have read several books that tell parents how to bring up a girl to be beautiful, elegant, confident, and rich. However, I have always believed that girls need to be brave above all else, but this is easier said than done. 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 I still remember I couldn't see the screen directly when my daughter switched to the animal channel, which was broadcasting a show about snakes. I stood as far away from the TV as possible, too scared to open my eyes. However, my little angel was not scared of the snakes. In fact, she watched the show with a keen interest. I was relieved that my daughter didn't get too many genetic phobias (遗传恐惧症). Even to this day, she is still obsessed (痴迷) with challenging herself with new things. This year, I got a chance to study in Singapore for six months. After the novelty of the first few days had gone, I found myself missing my family. With the summer vacation approaching, my husband agreed to make good use of the fact that I was staying in Singapore. He brought our daughter out to visit me and to enjoy the new experience in a new country. 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 The reunion day finally came. My husband and my daughter arrived in the second week of July. I was so looking forward to seeing them. I had made many preparations for their visit. On the first day, I arranged for us to see Gardens by the Bay. When we walked out of the MRT station, we were amazed by the sight of the Super Trees. When my daughter saw lots of people walking on the Skyway, she couldn't help shouting excitedly that she wanted to have a try. The Skyway is a 22­meter­high suspension bridge from which you can enjoy a bird's eye view. Last time I came here with my friends, I firmly rejected their repeated attempts to challenge me to go up there. It was like the day with the snakes all over again. But could I really reject my little angel? 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 My daughter was waiting for my reply. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 （一）读原文　找伏笔 如何寻找伏笔点？ ①留意人物的语言、动作、神态、外貌和心理等细节描写，以细节描写为伏笔点；②留意文中对续写部分有推动或暗示作用的特定情节或背景，以情节或背景为伏笔点；③留意文中反复出现或重点描写的特定物品，以特定物品为伏笔点；④留意续写部分的段首句，以续写段首句为伏笔点。 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 段落 伏笔 Para.1 伏笔句：______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 关键信息词：be brave above all else; this is easier said than done Para.2 伏笔句：I stood as far away from the TV as possible, too scared to open my eyes；However, my little angel was not scared；she is still obsessed (痴迷) with challenging herself with new things. 关键信息词：too ________ to open my eyes; ____________________ new things However, I have always believed that girls need to be brave above all else, but this is easier said than done. scared challenging herself with 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 段落 伏笔 Para.3 伏笔句：______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 关键信息词：enjoy the new experience in a new country Para.4 伏笔句：When my daughter saw lots of people walking on the Skyway, she couldn't help shouting excitedly that she wanted to have a try; ____________ _____________________________ 关键信息词：made many preparations; couldn't help shouting excitedly; have a try; firmly rejected He brought our daughter out to visit me and to enjoy the new experience in a new country. But could I really reject my little angel？ 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 （二）思首句　顺情节 理顺情节可以提高续写部分与所给句子的融合度。 My daughter was waiting for my reply. 问题链1： 1．What would I have in my mind first? 2．________________________? 3．How did I make my first step on the bridge? Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop. 问题链2： 1．________________________? 2．How did I overcome my fear and finish my walk? 3．What did I learn from the experience? What would be my reply Why did I have to stop 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 （三）求融合　显照应 先根据阅读中的伏笔点写出照应思路，体验与内化伏笔相照应这一写作技巧；在激活写作思维的同时，为后面的续写搭建了语言和内容的支架，使得续写内容丰富的同时不偏离原文主题，又与阅读部分高度契合。 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 （四）伏笔与照应在读后续写中的作用 1．在阅读部分的人物细节描写中寻找伏笔，然后在续写中予以照应，不仅能合理运用符合语境的语言，将语言的输入和输出紧密结合，而且能使文章的情感更加细腻丰富。 2．在阅读部分特定的情节、背景或特定物品中寻找伏笔，为下文的情节变化发展做伏笔，使续写不偏离主题，同时突出主要人物或事件，增加情节张力，使情节更具合理性。 3．以续写部分段首句为伏笔，在续写的结尾部分与之呼应，有助于故事情节在故事发展的高潮之后更加意味深长，给读者留下更深的印象。 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 答案 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 答案 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 情节构建 从图中可以看出，文章的情节发展总是一波三折。但是，无论情节如何跌宕起伏，文章从头到尾总是围绕一个主题进行。所以，情节必须为主题服务。因此，首先要通读并理解原文，确定文章主题、主要人物以及可能的结尾句。在第一步，可以提出以下问题： 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 1．What does the author want to tell us? 2．What's the main idea of the passage ? /What is the story mainly about? 3．Who is the main character of the story and who are the secondary characters? 4．What is the theme revealed to you in the story ? /What's the theme of the story? 5．What lesson can you learn from the story? 6．Can you predict how the story ends after reading it? 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 通读原文，把握主题之后，研读并分析原文最后情节以及所给段落开头语，确定续写第一段第一句和最后一句，确保合理衔接，上下连贯。续写第一段的情节应与续写第二段开头提示句高度融合。 然后，根据续写第二段开头提示语以及文章的主题，确定第二段续写第一句和最后一句(也是全文结尾句)。续写部分可以通过以下问题展开： 1．What is likely to happen according to the last paragraph of the text and the given sentence of Paragraph 1? 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 2．According to the given sentence of Paragraph 1, what should be mentioned at the end of Paragraph 1? 3．According to the given sentence of Paragraph 2, what will happen next? 4．What should be mentioned at the end of the story? 5．What might be the ending of the story? 6．Are you satisfied with the ending of the story? 7．Do you think it logical to end the story in this way? 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 根据记叙文的特点，可以通过5W1H(who, what, when, where, why, how)设问法，挑选紧扣文章主题并推动故事情节发展的关键要素，完善故事内容。具体地说，可以通过以下问题打开思维：某人何时何地做了什么事情(who/when/where/what)；怎样做(how)；为什么这样做(why)；出现了什么问题；看到了什么；听到了什么；说了什么；如何解决这一问题；有什么感受等。续写第一段的情节发展最终指向第一段的结尾句并与续写第二段的开头提示句衔接。可以通过设问进行头脑风暴，选择可以使用的关键内容。例如：What did he/she do? Why did he/she do ... ? How did he/she do ... ? What did he/she say about it? How did he/she feel ?等等。 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 续写第二段的情节构思可以运用同样的方法，不同之处是情节发展到第二段时，故事已接近尾声，结尾部分一般是：问题得到解决、误会得到化解、观念得到转变，或者是感悟启发，或者是主题升华。有时，可以在结尾安排呼应前面的内容，关注观点和感情的变化。 总之，情节安排要避免平铺直叙，避免记流水账，要设立对立面，要有冲突波折。总体上可以这样构架：出现问题——解决问题——再次出现问题——终于解决问题——然后深有体会或感悟。 读后续写的伏笔与构思 目录 掌握写作微技能 (一)外貌描写之容貌、体形、衣着 1．(人教XB1­U1)To the public, he was seen as a slightly odd­looking but kind and funny man. He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. 在大众眼中，他是一个外表有点古怪但生性善良、风趣幽默的人。他胡须浓密，头发又长又白，有时会像刚遭了电击似的竖起来。 2．(人教XB1­U5)Indeed, his slim but strong body was just like that of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he had devoted his life. 确实，他瘦削但结实的身躯看起来和他为之奉献了一生的千千万万的中国农民一样。 掌握写作微技能 目录 3．For as long as I can remember, he always wore his half­new blue blouse with the sleeves rolled up. 从我记事起，他总是穿着他那件卷起袖子的半新的蓝色上衣。 4．Her beautiful hair fell over her shoulders like a little brown waterfall. 她那美丽的头发披散在肩上，像一股褐色的小瀑布一样。 5．She was slender and straight, like a young tree in early spring. 她身体纤巧挺拔，就像早春的小树。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二)神态描写之脸色、表情 6．(外研B1­U3)In his thirties, he was quite thin and pale, and he had red, bushy hair. 他三十多岁，非常消瘦，脸色苍白，有一头浓密的红发。 7．(外研B3­U4)One moment she seems to be laughing at me, but then again I catch a sense of sadness in her smile. 上一刻她仿佛还在取笑我，而下一刻我却能从她的微笑中捕捉到一丝悲伤。 掌握写作微技能 目录 8．(外研XB3­U4)Jimmy held Robutt tightly. He was frowning, too, and the desperate look on his face meant that he wouldn't change his mind. 吉米紧紧抱着罗布特。他也皱着眉头，脸上的坚定表明他不愿改变心意。 9．She smiled happily, the wrinkles on her face like a blooming golden chrysanthemum. 她愉快地笑了，脸上的皱纹宛若一朵盛开的金菊。 10．Her face was like a white orchid in full bloom, and the smile was written on her face, brimming with contentment. 她的脸好像盛开的白兰花，笑意写在她的脸上，洋溢着满足的愉悦。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (三)动作描写之脚部动作 11．(外研B3­U2)A shocked Winton watched as the majority of people rose to their feet. 温顿震惊地看到在场的大多数人都站了起来。 12．(人教B3­U2)One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. 其中一个女人被石头绊倒，水罐也摔到地上。她从地上爬起来，噙着泪一瘸一拐地走了。 掌握写作微技能 目录 13．She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。 14．I dragged my heavy feet and moved tiredly forward. 我拖着沉重的双脚，疲惫前行。 15．She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents. 她不情愿地跟在父母后面，磨磨蹭蹭地走着。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (四)动作描写之手和手臂动作 16．(外研B1­U4)Doubtfully, Bob unfolded the note. His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading. 鲍勃疑惑地打开纸条。当他读完的时候，他的手在颤抖。 17．(外研XB1­U2)I reached down, expecting rice and vegetables, but instead stuck my hand into a bowl of warm, thick soup. 我伸手去拿米饭和蔬菜，却把手伸进了一碗热腾腾的浓汤里。 掌握写作微技能 目录 18．The golden leaves danced in the cool autumn breeze as we strolled/wandered leisurely arm in arm down the tree­lined path. 当我们手挽着手漫步在林荫小路时，金色的树叶在凉爽的秋风中翩翩起舞。 19．Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms. 她无言以对，灿烂地笑着，把儿子拥入怀中。 20．Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug. 我惊呆了，站起来给了她一个尴尬的拥抱。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (五)动作描写之头部动作 21．Nancy shook her head, frowning and turning her head away. 南希摇摇头，皱着眉头把头扭向别处。 22．He felt his head jerk reflexively. 他感到自己的头部突然反射性的抽动。 23．He dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。 掌握写作微技能 目录 24．She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。 25．His head drooped and tears fell onto his lap. 他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (六)动作描写之腿部动作 26．(人教XB4­U4)My muscles were aching and my knees shaking as we dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home. 当我们拖着沉重的步伐下山回家时，我浑身肌肉酸痛，双膝颤抖。 27．(外研B1­U1)I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally. 我刚跑出教室就碰到了一个女孩。 掌握写作微技能 目录 28．He suddenly let go of me and darted out of the door with surprising speed. 他突然放开我以惊人的速度冲出了门。 29．When she jumped over a rock, her leg overextended on the landing. The pain was instant. Her right leg collapsed and she hit the dirt hard. 当她跳过一块岩石时，她的腿在着地时过度伸展了。疼痛瞬间袭来。她的右腿发软，重重地摔倒在地上。 30．He was on his knees, searching for the missing ring. 他跪在地上，寻找丢失的戒指。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (七)动作描写之眼部动作 31．(外研XB2­U6)Spotting the car with its window left open, the greedy thief didn't hesitate. 贪婪的窃贼在发现有辆车的车窗未关后，没有丝毫犹豫。 32．(人教XB4­U3)His wife watched the horrible scene, crying hopelessly. 他的妻子看着这可怕的一幕，绝望地哭了起来。 33．I glanced sidelong at you as we walked, taking in every beloved detail—the way you brushed your windswept hair from your eyes, the dimples that appeared when you smiled, the warmth of your hand in mine. 当我们一起散步时，我侧眼看着你的一举一动，记下每一个可爱的细节——你轻拂遮挡眼睛的凌乱秀发的样子，微笑时的小酒窝，还有我手中你手掌的温暖。 掌握写作微技能 目录 34．At a bend in the path we came to a little stone bridge overlooking the stream. We paused, leaning on the weathered railing, watching leaves spiraling downward on the murmuring current. 在小路的一个拐弯处，我们来到一座小石桥，眺望下面的溪流。我们停下来，倚着斑驳的栏杆，目送树叶随着潺潺的水流盘旋而下。 35．John's mouth watered as he eyed the cake hungrily. 约翰贪婪地盯着蛋糕，口水直流。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (八)动作描写之嘴部动作 36．(人教XB4­U2)The didgeridoo player has to change the shape of his mouth in order to change pitch. 吹奏迪吉里杜管必须靠改变嘴形才能改变音高。 37．(外研XB1­U4)The girl is looking over her shoulder. Her eyes are wide and her mouth is parted, just as if she were about to speak. 那个女孩正在回头看。她的眼睛睁得大大的，嘴巴张得大大的，好像要说话似的。 掌握写作微技能 目录 38．“It isn't funny, really，” she said between her teeth, as she bent over her book. “这一点都不好笑，真的，”她弯腰看书时咬牙切齿地说。(小公主) 39．Lisa smiled brightly, mouth stretching from ear to ear. 丽莎灿烂地笑着，嘴巴咧到耳朵边。 40．“The very best of evenings to you！” he said, smiling broadly, his arms opened wide as though to embrace the whole room. “祝大家晚上好！”他咧嘴微笑着说，一边张开双臂，似乎要拥抱整个礼堂。(《哈利·波特与混血王子》) 掌握写作微技能 目录 (九)动作描写之细化过程 41．I opened the door, reached out my foot, trying to find a proper land point. 我打开门，伸出脚，试图找到一个合适的落脚点。 42．After confirming the safety, I inched forward in the muddy water and eventually rushed frantically towards my husband. 确认安全后，我在泥水中一点点前行，最终疯狂地冲向我的丈夫。 43．Cassie looked at me, and her glare softened. I grinned. She giggled. 凯西看着我，她的目光柔和了下来。我咧嘴一笑。她咯咯地笑了起来。 掌握写作微技能 目录 44．I grinned dazzlingly, raced to them and embraced them tightly. 我咧嘴一笑，跑到他们身边，紧紧地拥抱着他们。 45．I packed my suitcase and folded away the light and airy sundresses I had worn in warmer days. 我收拾着行李，折叠起我曾在暖日里穿的轻盈透气的背心裙。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十)心理描写之感受 46．When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的眼睛因兴奋而闪闪发光。 47．But as the sun dipped lower in the sky, casting long shadows across the grass, the weight of our approaching parting darkened our hearts. 然而，当太阳西沉，在草坪上投下长长的影子时，即将分离的忧虑笼罩了我们的心头。 掌握写作微技能 目录 48．The very thought of separating after so many perfect days together was almost too much to bear. 分开的念头几乎让我无法承受，我们度过了太多美好的日子。 49．Then we both burst into uncontrollable tears, but I tore myself away and got into the car without looking back. If I looked back, my courage would fail entirely. 然后，我们都情不自禁地流下了眼泪，但我用力挣脱，头也不回地钻进车里。如果我回头看，我的勇气就会完全丧失。 50．I was anxious, thinking it was impossible to arrive at the classroom in time. 我很焦虑，认为不可能及时到达教室。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十一)心理描写之回忆 51．I stood on the stony beach and his words rang through my head—I shall be with you. 我站在多石的海滩上，他的话在我脑海中回荡——我会和你在一起的。 52．Childhood life is rich and colorful, and at that time I always felt curious about things. 童年生活是丰富多彩的，那时候我总是对事物感到很好奇。 53．But the splendid days we savoured would not be dampened by distance—their light would endure. They would have to be enough to sustain me in the lonely city winter ahead. 但是我们所享受的美好日子不会因距离而失色——它们的光芒将永恒长存。这些记忆必将足以支撑我度过前方寂寞的城市冬天。 掌握写作微技能 目录 54．Looking back, he remembered his dad, who had taught him the importance of hard work, integrity and seeing the good in people. 回首过去，他想起自己的父亲，父亲教会他努力工作、 正直和看到别人优点的重要性。 55．I remember when I was a child in the yard of my hometown, I used to sit in a chair, gazing at the blue sky. 我记得当我还是个孩子的时候，在我家乡的院子里，我常常坐在椅子上，凝视着蓝天。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十二)心理描写之克制 56．Tears welled up in her eyes as if she could not contain her emotions. 她的眼中涌出泪水，仿佛无法抑制自己的情感。 57．Her voice trembled uncontrollably, as if out of control. 她的声音不由自主地颤抖着，似乎失去了控制。 58．Burying his face in his hands, he tried to control his weeping. 他用手捂住脸，试图控制自己的哭泣。 掌握写作微技能 目录 59．She held back her anger without saying a single word. 她压抑着怒火一句话都没说。 60．I moved numbly, trying to keep myself calm against the constant ticking of the clock. 我麻木地移动着，努力保持镇静，抵抗着时钟不知疲倦的嘀嗒声。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十三)心理描写之思考 61．His face was grave, as if he were thinking of something important. 他的脸色凝重，好像在考虑着重大的问题。 62．His expression was cold, as if something had been reflected and decided in his heart. 他的神情冷漠，仿佛内心已经思考并决定了什么。 掌握写作微技能 目录 63．An idea flashed across his mind. 他脑子里闪过一个念头。 64．He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking. 他看着窗外，咬着嘴唇，仿佛在思考。 65．The opportunity had gone and his mind scrabbled for alternatives. 机会已经失去了，他苦苦思索别的方案。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十四)心理描写之愿望 66．Her wish for the river had come true, and now she had a very good friend named Run. 她对河流许的愿望实现了，现在她有了一个非常好的朋友，名叫润。 67．The whole world will give assistance to those with aspirations who persistently work for them. 有愿望并为之不懈努力的人，整个世界都会施以援手。 68．How I longed to play in the meadow or stand dozing in the shade of the trees. 我多么渴望在草地上玩耍，或者站在树荫下打盹。 掌握写作微技能 目录 69．As long as you firmly maintain your own beliefs, you will be able to achieve your own aspirations through your efforts. 只要你坚定自己的信念，通过努力就一定能够实现自己的愿望。 70．In order to achieve the desire to travel with his parents during the holidays, he worked hard, striving for good results. 为了实现假期和父母一起旅游的愿望，他发奋学习，争取好成绩。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十五)心理描写之尴尬 71．(外研B3­U1)Embarrassed and ashamed, I can't concentrate on anything. 我既尴尬又羞愧，做什么事都无法集中精力。 72．There was an awkwardly long silence. 有一段令人尴尬的长时间的沉默。 73．You rescued me from an embarrassing situation. 我正感到尴尬，你为我解了围。 掌握写作微技能 目录 74．The man stood there clumsily, embarrassment written in his red face. 那人笨拙地站在那里，涨红的脸上写满了窘迫。 75．She blinked sheepishly and laughed dryly, trying to hide her embarrassment. 她不好意思地眨眨眼睛，呵呵地干笑着，努力掩饰她的尴尬。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十六)情绪描写之悲伤 76．Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly. 听到这个坏消息，她感到一阵悲伤，忍不住痛哭起来。 77．The thought of losing this, of losing you, filled me with quiet sorrow. 一想到失去这一切，失去你，我内心充满了莫名的悲伤。 掌握写作微技能 目录 78．Grief almost overwhelmed me when I realized this. 当我意识到这一点时，我感到极度的悲伤。 79．Rocking back and forth, he couldn't help submitting to the overwhelming ache. 他摇晃着，根本无法抵抗这深沉的悲痛。 80．Seated on the couch, John was frozen with sorrow, his body drained and depleted from hours of miserable weeping. 约翰坐在沙发上，心如死灰，数小时痛哭流涕使他的身体精疲力竭。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十七)情绪描写之紧张 81．(人教B2­U5)On the day of the concert, I was so nervous that I woke up with butterflies in my stomach. 音乐会那天，我非常紧张，以至于醒来时心里七上八下的。 82．He sat down at his desk, his palms sweating. 他在桌旁坐下，两手出汗。 83．She felt like she was drowning in a sea of anxiety, unable to find a lifeline to cling to. 她感到自己正溺毙在充满焦虑的海洋中，不能找到一条可以抓住的生命线。 掌握写作微技能 目录 84．She was so nervous, her insides were like jelly. 她紧张得六神无主。 85．It was the morning of the big exam. John woke up with butterflies swirling in his stomach. He felt lightheaded and his heart pounded as he got dressed with shaky hands. 这是一次重大考试的早晨。约翰醒来时，忐忑不安，头晕眼花，穿衣服时手在颤抖，心跳加速。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十八)情绪描写之喜悦 86．To our delight, it turned out that every one of us received a gift. 使我们高兴的是，结果所有的人都收到了礼物。 87．Bubbling with overwhelming ecstasy, Hunter couldn't help bouncing ups and downs. 亨特欣喜若狂，情不自禁地蹦蹦跳跳。 88．We had great fun rolling, galloping or standing together under the apple trees. 我们在苹果树下打滚、奔跑或站在一起，玩得很开心。 掌握写作微技能 目录 89．I was overjoyed, hardly able to believe in my good fortune. 我欣喜若狂，几乎无法相信我的好运。 90．The words on the Admission Letter came into focus, and a surge of relief and joy washed over him. He had passed the exam with flying colors! 录取通知书上的文字逐渐清晰，一阵宽慰和喜悦涌上他的心头。他以优异的成绩通过了考试！ 掌握写作微技能 目录 (十九)情绪描写之恐惧 91．Her face turned pale and sat there tongue­tied. 她脸色苍白地坐在那里，舌头打结。 92．Fear slowly creeps upon her. 恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。 93．She turned to me, with her eyes full of horror. 她转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。 94．A flood of fear welled up in her./Fear flooded over her. 她心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了她。 95．Filled with fright, I dragged my exhausted body inching forward. 我拖着疲惫的身躯向前挪动，内心充满恐惧。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十)情绪描写之愤怒 96．He clenched his fists, trembling with rage. 他握紧拳头，气得发抖。 97．Suddenly the captain exploded with rage. 船长勃然大怒。 98．All at once I charged at him, burning with anger. 突然，我怒火中烧，向他冲去。 掌握写作微技能 目录 99．John's hands trembled, his knuckles white as he clenched/firmly grasped/tightly held/squeezed his fists/balled up his hand. His jaw ached from grinding his teeth in anger. 约翰双手颤抖，紧握的拳头指节发白。咬牙切齿让他的下颌酸痛。 100．John felt the rage bubbling/welling/building up/mounting inside him, on the verge of boiling over as he stared at his grandmother's shattered antique vase. 约翰看着他祖母的破碎的古董花瓶，心中的怒火快要烧遍全身。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十一)情绪描写之失望 101．(外研B3­U1)Disappointed by his behaviour, I said all this to my best friend. 我对他的所作所为感到失望，就把这些全部告诉了我最好的朋友。 102．He gazed up at the bright moon hanging in the dark night sky and let out a deep sigh. John's heart felt heavy with disappointment and self­doubt. 他望着黑暗夜空中悬挂的明月，深深地叹了口气。约翰的心因失望和自我怀疑而沉重。 掌握写作微技能 目录 103．But no moment, however perfect, can last forever. I was sunk in such depression and sadness. 然而，再美好的时刻也无法永恒。我因此陷入失望和悲伤中。 104．It wasn't at all what I was expecting. My heart plunged down to my boots. 这完全不是我所期待的。我失望透了。 105．To his disappointment, his classmates failed to appear after two long hours. 令他失望的是，在漫长的两个小时之后，他的同学们并没有出现。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十二)情绪描写之愧疚 106．I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously. 我低声道歉，反思自己应该认真对待他的警告。 107．Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. 我如释重负地抽泣着，心头涌上一波又一波的内疚和悔恨。 108．Whenever I think of my mistakes, I feel suffocated, as if the burden weighing on me is becoming heavier and heavier. 每次想起自己的过错，我都会感觉到一阵窒息，仿佛压在我身上的负担越来越重。 掌握写作微技能 目录 109．I feel like I've let down everyone, especially those who have trusted me, relied on me, and loved me. 我感到自己对不起每一个人，特别是那些曾经信任我、依赖我、爱我的人。 110．At the thought of it, my head felt like a stone, and I was too ashamed to lift it. 一想到这件事，我感觉头上就像压了块石头似的，羞愧得抬不起来。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十三)情绪描写之惊讶 111．He sprang to his feet, his eyes wide with astonishment, his mouth agape. 他跳了起来，吃惊地瞪大眼睛，嘴巴大张着。 112．Stepping further into the room, John embraced his beaming friends, still struggling to wrap his mind around this thrilling turn of events. 约翰走进房间里，紧紧拥抱着笑容灿烂的朋友们，仍在努力让自己平复下来，接受这个令人振奋的意外。 掌握写作微技能 目录 113．John couldn't take his eyes off, as this was beyond belief. Words failed him in the face of this breathtaking scene. 约翰目不转睛，因为这是令人难以置信的。他被这令人目眩的景象惊得说不出话来。 114．This was unbelievable and mind­blowing! He was absolutely astonished and amazed. 这简直难以置信，令人震惊！他惊呆了。 115．His mouth fell open in astonishment and his eyebrows shot up as he stood frozen in disbelief. 他惊讶得张大嘴巴，眉毛高高扬起，难以置信地呆立当场。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十四)情绪描写之困惑 116．Torn by his conscience (良心), he was totally at a loss what to do. 受到良心的折磨，他完全不知所措。 117．I shook my head. My puzzled face made him shout with laughter. 我摇了摇头。我迷惑不解的表情使他放声大笑。 118．Staring at her with confusion, I hesitated. 我茫然地盯着她，犹豫了一下。 119．“Do you really think so？” I asked cautiously, still in doubt. “你真的这么认为吗？”我小心翼翼地问，心里仍然有些疑惑。 120．I was at a loss for words when she told me the news. 当她告诉我这个消息时，我不知道该说什么。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十五)环境描写 121．(人教B2­U4)And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. 海边波浪咆哮，海鸟鸣叫，奏响了海岸交响乐。 122．(人教XB2­U4)The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red, gold, and orange, and there was frost on the ground, confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada. 窗外的灌木丛和枫树林呈红色、金色和橘黄色，地面覆盖着一层霜，表明加拿大已进入秋季。 掌握写作微技能 目录 123．The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds. 天空乌云密布，黑云压顶。 124．The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds. 伴随着我的脚步声的只有优雅地摇曳着的芦苇。 125．When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber­like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下，感觉就像琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十六)倒装句 126．In the small space was the brightest and most beautiful Christmas tree I had ever seen. 在那狭小的空间里是我见过的最明亮、最漂亮的圣诞树。 127．Not until/Only then did I become aware of the significance of family. 直到那时我才意识到家庭的重要性。 128．The black dot grew larger and larger against the orange sky, so was their hope of being rescued. 黑点在橙色的天空中越来越大，他们获救的希望也越来越大。 掌握写作微技能 目录 129．So overwhelmed was I that I almost wanted to dash out of the stage. 我不知所措，几乎想冲出舞台。 130．Not only did I use my unicycle and hula hoop performance to win the first prize, but also I had proved it to others that even a weak girl like me could win, just through my practice! 我不仅用我的独轮车和呼啦圈的表演获得了一等奖，而且我也向别人证明了，即使是像我这样弱小的女孩，只要通过练习，也能赢！ 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十七)with复合结构 131．(2023·浙江高考1月)With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. 我捧着那只鸟，环顾四周，想看看它是怎么进来的。 132．He was a delivery man with his hands full of parcels. 他是个快递员，手里满是包裹。 133．Holding the note tightly, I was on the verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading across my body. 我紧紧握着那张纸条，眼泪快要掉下来，一股暖流在我身上蔓延开来。 掌握写作微技能 目录 134．I stood there and stared at it with tears rolling down my cheeks. 我站在那里，看着它，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落下来。 135．With his father at his side, Jack felt ready to take on the world. 在父亲的陪伴下，杰克做好了面对整个世界的准备。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十八)强调句 136．Patting them gently on their shoulders, Father said in a warm voice, “Darling, it's love that counts.” 爸爸轻轻地拍着他们的肩膀，暖声说道，“亲爱的，重要的正是爱。” 137．During their pleasant chat, they learned it was exactly the message in the bottle that saved them. 在轻松的谈话中，他们知道了正是瓶子里的消息救了他们。 138．It was Joe that shouted and waved violently. 是乔伊在大喊大叫，拼命地挥手。 掌握写作微技能 目录 139．It's not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters. 在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。 140．When trouble comes, it's your family that supports you. 当麻烦来临时，是你的家人在支持你。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (二十九)独立主格 141．The night falling, they put up a tent and wolfed down a simplified dinner. 夜幕降临，他们支起帐篷，狼吞虎咽地吃了一顿简单的晚餐。 142．Suddenly a low, buzzing sound appearing, Whiston raised his head, glanced around and spotted a helicopter in the distance. 突然，出现了低沉的嗡嗡声，惠斯顿抬起头环顾四周，发现远处有一架直升机。 143．Eventually, I sat beside the stream, my arms and legs aching. 我终于在溪边坐下，感到胳膊和腿酸痛。 掌握写作微技能 目录 144．My brother made his way to me, his eyes filled with concern. 我哥哥向我走来，他的眼睛里满是担心。 145．“Joe, I'm here！” I wound down the window, tears of horror mixed with rain streaming down my face. “乔伊，我来了！”我摇下车窗，惊恐的泪水混合着雨水一同从我脸上流下来。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (三十)无灵主语 146．(外研B3­U5)The solar rays shone through the watery mass easily, and consumed all colour, and I clearly distinguished objects at a distance of a hundred and fifty yards. 阳光轻易地穿透水团，并消除了所有的色彩，我能清晰地辨认出150码以内的物体。 147．(人教B1­U4)Wednesday night saw the destruction of the very heart of the city. 星期三的晚上，城市的中心被摧毁了。 掌握写作微技能 目录 148．Great excitement and surprise flooded in—I rushed to the tree. 巨大的兴奋和惊喜涌上了心头——我冲向那棵树。 149．A tide of exhaustion and despair washed over him. 一股疲惫和绝望的感觉向他袭来。 150．The night wind howled ruthlessly, nameless creatures murmured in the dark and the moonlight shone weakly on the ground. 夜晚的风无情地咆哮，无名生灵在黑暗中低语，月光微弱地铺洒在地上。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (三十一)定语多样性表达 151．My whole world began to cave in and suddenly it seemed as if I had no friends. 我的整个世界开始崩塌，突然间我好像没有朋友了。 152．Fear gripped me as I realized I was alone, trapped inside the dimly­lit nurses' station. 当我意识到自己独自一人被困在昏暗的护士站时，恐惧笼罩着我。 153．As he removed the hat from Chris' head, a look of surprise, sympathy and remorse all filled his face at the same time. 当他摘下克里斯的帽子时，他的脸上瞬间浮现出了惊讶、同情和懊悔的神情。 掌握写作微技能 目录 154．Her simple words, spoken from her heart, found their way straight into my mind. 她简单的真心话直击我的心里。 155．A sweet peace flooded into me like a blessing, which made me hopeful again. 一种甜蜜的平静像祝福一样涌入我的内心，让我再次充满希望。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (三十二)状语多样性表达 156．Shocked and proud, their mother said in a sweet whisper, “Thanks, my kids.” 他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，甜蜜地低声说道，“谢谢，我的孩子们。” 157．“Let's do this again together！” To their relief, with the guidance of Father, they successfully made the breakfast. “我们再一起做一遍！”使他们欣慰的是，他们在父亲的指导下，成功地做好了早餐。 掌握写作微技能 目录 158．Thankfully, my dad had raised me to have a lot of confidence. 谢天谢地，我爸爸把我培养得很有自信。 159．Daisy softly whispered the words in Jay's ear. 黛西轻声在杰的耳边说着这些话。 160．She didn't know it was also the most unforgettable moment in their children's life because it was the first time for them to show gratitude to their mother. 她不知道这也是他们的孩子一生中最难忘的时刻，因为这是他们第一次向母亲表达感激之情。 掌握写作微技能 目录 (三十三)主题句升华与结尾 161．(人教B1­U1)Distance tests a horse's strength. Time reveals a person's character. 路遥知马力，日久见人心。(友谊主题升华) 162．(外研B1­U4)There's just one sure delight：Friendship, like sunrise, warm and bright. 只有一种肯定的快乐： 友谊，就像日出，温暖而明亮。(友谊主题升华) 163.(外研B3­U1)Don't always complain about people. Try to look on the bright side. 不要总是抱怨别人，试着往好的方面看。(误解主题升华) 掌握写作微技能 目录 164．(外研B3­U6)Even though we had lost a lot, moments like those gave us hope for the future. 尽管我们损失惨重，但这样的时刻重新点燃了我们对未来的希望。(困难主题升华) 165．(外研XB3­U5)In the same way, we need struggle to grow strong and survive. We must go through some difficult things if we really wish to spread our wings and fly. 同样，我们需要努力来变得强大和生存。如果我们真的想展翅高飞，我们必须经历一些困难的事情。(逆境应对主题升华) 掌握写作微技能 目录 166．Sometimes, only a little kindness can light something shining, making the world more beautiful and harmonious. 有时，仅仅很微小的善意便能点亮一些东西，让世界变得更加美好和谐。(好人好事主题升华) 167．Adversity is inevitable, but difficulties or misfortunes don't have to keep us from achieving our intended goals. 逆境是不可避免的，但困难或不幸并不一定会阻止我们实现预期目标。(梦想主题升华) 掌握写作微技能 目录 168．Your attitude will make a difference on how you view the facts in your life. 你的态度会影响你看待生活中的事实的方式。(积极的态度主题升华) 169．The world always makes way for the dreamer. 这个世界总是会给梦想家让路。(梦想主题升华) 170．Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life. 家庭是人生惊涛骇浪中的救生衣。(亲情主题升华) 掌握写作微技能 目录 常考话题 目录 建立友谊类 1．与建立友谊有关的环境描写 ①The soft light was coming in through the kitchen window onto my new friend's face. 柔和的光线透过厨房的窗户照在我新朋友的脸上。 ②The friends laughed happily, and skipped in the yard like birds. Enormous joy welled up in every corner of the yard. Stars appeared in the sky, twinkling their eyes at them with happiness. 朋友们开心地笑着，像小鸟一样在院子里雀跃。整个院子喜气洋洋。天空开始出现闪闪的繁星，高兴地向他们眨眼睛。 常考话题 目录 90 2．与建立友谊有关的情绪描写 (1)与友谊有关的感激描写 ③Looking back, I am always grateful for her stepping up to make up with me. 回首往事，我总是很感激她站出来和我和好。 (2)与友谊有关的开心描写 ④I'm quite thrilled to know that we'll have dinner together. 知道我们要一起吃晚饭，我很高兴。 3．与建立友谊有关的嘲笑描写 ⑤Fahad laughed out so loud that other kids also heard and made fun of the situation. 法哈德笑得声音很大，以至于其他孩子也听到并取笑这种情况。 常考话题 目录 91 4．与建立友谊有关的尴尬描写 ⑥The embarrassment was heavy like a dark shadow and then two friends departed. 尴尬像一个黑影一样沉重，然后两个朋友离开了。 ⑦I don't like to travel with people I don't know. It's too awkward. 我不喜欢与不认识的人一起旅行。那样太尴尬了。 ⑧We met at the home of a mutual friend, for we still not familiar with each other. 我们在彼此都认识的朋友家中会面，因为我们对彼此还不熟悉。 常考话题 目录 92 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·云南省昆明市高三第一次质量检测)Fiona and I had been classmates since kindergarten. She was always wherever I was and she was always ahead of me. Dance performance needed a big finish? Fiona was picked. Selling cookies for charity? “Oh, I'm sorry，” the lady living next door to me would say, “I just bought twenty boxes from Fiona. Such a nice girl.” And the school plays? Fiona would have the leads while I was cast as her mother or neighbor. I even played her dog once. Yeah, whatever. 常考话题 目录 93 Then the day of the choir concert audition (面试) came. We waited while Ms Jones called us one at a time into the choir room. When Ms Jones got to the C's, my heart sped up each time she came to the door. By the time she actually called my name, my whole body was shaking. When I came back, Fiona smiled at me. Ms Jones called her name and Fiona followed her. She was still calm and smiling when her audition was over. When Ms Jones made the announcement of who had made the special choir group, I wasn't surprised when Fiona's name was on the list and mine wasn't. “So，” I said under my breath, “what else is new？” 常考话题 目录 94 Sudden clapping brought me out of my thought. Everyone was looking at me. I must have missed something here. Ms Jones walked towards me and said, “Celia, you will have to start practicing with me. The lead singer takes extra preparation.” Lead singer? I got the lead singer? I glanced over at Fiona. She smiled and gave me the thumbs­up sign. She was always so nice. Now the big day had come. We stepped onto the stage and took our places. I was front and center. Ms Jones raised her baton (指挥棒) and we began to sing. The spotlight flashed over me and then circled me in its bright light. Ms Jones nodded and pointed her baton at me. That baton must have shot out a secret ray because I froze right there on the spot. 常考话题 目录 95 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 I couldn't think and most of all, I couldn't sing.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ The rest of the performance went well. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 常考话题 目录 96 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者和Fiona (菲奥纳)从幼儿园就是同学，Fiona处处领先于作者。在一次音乐会面试中，Fiona理所当然在名单中，出乎意料的是，作者被选为领唱。在演出当天，紧张的作者表现如何？作者和Fiona之间发生了什么？ 常考话题 目录 97 答案 常考话题 目录 98 答案 常考话题 目录 99 促进成长类 1．与促进成长有关的环境描写 ①The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife. 寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。 ②It was a large white Victorian home, where I spent my childhood. 这是一栋维多利亚时代的白色大房子，在那里我度过了童年。 ③The scenery along the journey is just like a breathtaking landscape painting. 沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。 常考话题 目录 100 2．与促进成长有关的人物描写 ④I looked down to see a little girl with a deep cut on her forehead beaming at me. 我低头看到一个额头上有个深深的伤口的小女孩正朝我微笑。 ⑤Growing up, I wanted to be just like my mother.Kind and caring, she always seemed to make people comfortable in her presence. 长大后，我想和我妈妈一样。她善良而有爱心，似乎总是让在她面前的人们感到舒服。 常考话题 目录 101 3．与促进成长有关的情绪描写 (1)与促进成长有关的孤独描写 ⑥I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. 我从不轻易交朋友，有一段时间我只不过是和一些男孩寒暄而已。 (2)与促进成长有关的伤心描写 ⑦A wave of disappointment and sadness struck him. 失望和悲伤如潮水般涌向他。 ⑧Looking around anxiously, I almost burst out crying. 我焦急地看了看周围，几乎哭了起来。 常考话题 目录 102 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·辽宁省沈阳市高三一模)When school was over, the day was fading and it started to drizzle (下毛毛雨). I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again: a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste, a weekend at home. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers' warm and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy, but something like dismay (沮丧). I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly­oiled chain creaking (嘎吱作响) against the wheel to announce her arrival. 常考话题 目录 103 Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up for the weekend, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the numerous cars and saw my friends' faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T­shirt. To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache once in a while. She just looks a homely middle­aged housewife. Being a practitioner of DIY, she knits most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I'd force a smile and reply in a half joking manner: homemade. 常考话题 目录 104 I couldn't remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been much fun riding with mom. But just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 常考话题 目录 105 Today she showed up in a raincoat.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 常考话题 目录 106 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者妈妈总是骑自行车接他放学，这让作者感觉尴尬，因为其他父母开车接自己的孩子。一个下雨天，母亲穿着雨衣来接作者，作者对妈妈说了什么？妈妈尽力将作者用雨衣包裹起来，作者有什么感悟？ 常考话题 目录 107 答案 常考话题 目录 108 答案 常考话题 目录 109 珍惜亲情类 1．与珍惜亲情有关的开心描写 ①Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Carter felt a surge of happiness. 看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感到一股幸福的热潮。 ②“I wanted to surprise you, Mom！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming. “妈妈，我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。 常考话题 目录 110 ③A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, the mother kissed the two sisters gently. 一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲吻两姐妹。 ④Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music. 欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在美妙的音乐中。 ⑤He raised his head, bounced to fetch the red car, and handed it to Jim, his younger brother, with a big smile spreading across his face. 他抬起头，蹦跳着拿来红色的小车，递给他的弟弟吉姆，脸上露出灿烂的笑容。 常考话题 目录 111 2．与珍惜亲情有关的紧张描写 ⑥However, in the face of her son's nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members, Ben's mother remained calm. 然而，面对儿子紧张的眼神和其他家庭成员疑惑的神情，本的母亲面不改色。 ⑦Soon, it was the curtain time. I peeked out at the audience and noticed that the darkened theatre was full.My heart beat faster. My father offstage seemed to be more nervous. 很快就到演出时间了。我偷偷向外看了看观众，注意到黑暗的剧院里挤满了人。我的心跳得更快了。我的父亲在台下，看起来比我更紧张。 ⑧She was weepy and nervy, anxious about her baby. 她动不动就哭，而且神经紧张，总为她的小宝贝担心。 常考话题 目录 112 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·山东省多校高三检测)Thursday was the day of the class spelling bee (拼字比赛), and Maria had studied all week long to make sure she was ready for it. Maria was a very good speller. She wanted to win the spelling bee so she could represent her class in the school­wide spelling bee at the end of the month. When Maria woke up, she felt very cold. She sneezed six times when she got dressed. At breakfast, she didn't feel like eating her toast. 常考话题 目录 113 “What's wrong？” asked her father. “Are you nervous about the spelling bee？” “I don't feel good，” answered Maria. Her father put his hand on Maria's forehead. “You have a fever，” he said. “I'm sorry, but you must stay home from school today.” Maria was very sad. Now all her hard work would be wasted, and she would not get to win the spelling contest. She wouldn't even get to try! Disappointed and tired, Maria went back to bed and closed her eyes. When she opened them again, her room was much brighter. She must have fallen asleep. Maria went to the living room and saw her grandmother Abuelita walked into the room. 常考话题 目录 114 “Grandma! What are you doing here？” Maria's grandmother gave her a hug. “I came over to make you feel better since you couldn't go to school today. Are you hungry? It's already lunch time.” Abuelita didn't wait for Maria to answer. She went over to the stove in the kitchen and stirred a big pot. Maria sat down at the kitchen table, and Abuelita brought her a bowl of soup. “This is a special soup, just for you，” she said. Maria looked into the bowl.It was full of steaming meat and chicken. “Where are the noodles？” she asked. 常考话题 目录 115 “Look harder，” Abuelita said. Maria used her spoon to scoop up a small bit of the delicious­smelling soup. On her spoon she saw the letters A, R, S and T. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 常考话题 目录 116 “It's alphabet (字母) soup！”she cried. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Abuelita smiled. “I see a word, too, S­T­A­R spells star.”﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 常考话题 目录 117 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Maria (玛丽亚)为拼字比赛准备了许久，却在比赛当天因生病而只能待在家中，她感到十分失望。外婆做了“字母汤”，这能让Maria振作起来吗？外婆还说了什么鼓励她的话？ 常考话题 目录 118 答案 常考话题 目录 119 答案 常考话题 目录 120 乐于助人类 1．与乐于助人有关的环境描写 ①The icy wind howled across the empty street and it was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on the twenty­fifth December. 冷风呼啸着穿过空旷的街道，12月25日，急诊室里异常安静。 ②The darkness was gathering as she wobbled in high heels along the side of the highway. 当她穿着高跟鞋在公路边摇摇晃晃地走着时，夜幕渐渐降临。 常考话题 目录 121 ③But one day, a hurricane hit the area where he lived, completely destroying his home. 但有一天，一场飓风袭击了他居住的地区，彻底摧毁了他的家园。 2．与乐于助人有关的情绪描写 (1)与乐于助人有关的感谢描写 ④The mother nodded her head, and murmured, “Thank you！” 母亲点点头，喃喃自语道：“谢谢！” ⑤Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand. 现在，我非常感谢她伸出援手。 常考话题 目录 122 ⑥Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she said she couldn't thank him enough and everyone involved for what they did for her. 莫莉和肖恩星期二见面了，她说，她对他和所有参与者为她所做的一切表示万分感谢。 (2)与乐于助人有关的感动描写 ⑦Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. 不用说，他们深受感动，尤其是伯纳德，他终于找到了一种为家人赚钱的方法。 ⑧I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held­back tears. 我感激地点了点头，强忍的泪水在眼中闪烁着。 常考话题 目录 123 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·河南省南阳市TOP20高三联考月考)We sat on the bus waiting while other passengers piled on. A blond­haired girl, about fifteen years old, took the seat in front of us. The bus driver followed behind her. He demanded her fare (车费). “You should pay $40, young lady，” the driver said. “I paid already. Yesterday, online.” the girl said. “No, no record of it，” the bus driver pointed to the paper in his hand and waved it in her face. “See? No pay. You pay, or you must get off，” the bus driver pointed to the exit door. 常考话题 目录 124 “But I don't have money. And I paid already，” the girl insisted. The bus driver picked up his mobile phone and made a call to find out if there had been an error with the paperwork. And a few minutes later, he cut the call and said to the girl. “You haven't paid. You must pay now.” “But please, I don't have any money on me now. I must get to Los Angeles today. Please ... ” the girl begged. Tears streamed down her face. John and I had boarded the bus heading to Los Angeles. I was excited about experiencing Los Angeles. But while I was sitting there comfortably in my seat, thinking about my next adventure, this girl was in tears, with a man standing in front of her to demand money. 常考话题 目录 125 I wasn't sure what I should do. Was she telling the truth? It wouldn't be the first time that someone had asked for money by telling a sad story that turned out untrue. Was she really short of money? Maybe the bus driver would show some sympathy and allow her to sort the payment out later? But no, the bus driver continued to demand that she pay $40 or get off the bus. The girl insisted that she didn't have money for the fare and had no one she could contact for help. It seemed that the driver would throw her off the bus. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 常考话题 目录 126 Suddenly, a messy grey­haired woman with a weathered face stood up. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ I was touched by the kind act done by the old woman who looked in need herself. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 常考话题 目录 127 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者坐公交时遇到了一个因车费和司机发生争执的女孩，女孩坚称自己在网上付过了车费，但司机却说她没有付钱。如果女孩不付钱，司机似乎要把她赶下公交。这时一个灰白头发的老妇人站了起来，她会帮助这个女孩吗？作者被老妇人的善行感动，又会怎样做呢？他又有什么感悟呢？ 常考话题 目录 128 答案 常考话题 目录 129 答案 常考话题 目录 130 生活趣事类 1．与生活趣事有关的开心描写 ①We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy. 我们都跳起来，开心得欢呼雀跃。 2．与生活趣事有关的后悔描写 ②With every angle tried in vain, I was overwhelmed by a feeling of extreme regret and annoyance. 每一个角度都尝试过，但都是徒劳的，我被一种极度后悔和恼怒的情感所淹没。 常考话题 目录 131 3．与生活趣事有关的紧张描写 ③So nervous was he that he dropped the electric carving knife. 他如此紧张，以至于把电动雕刻刀弄掉了。 ④Sweating and nearly tearing, I could imagine how silly and nervous I was at that moment. 我汗流浃背，几乎要哭了，可以想象我当时是多么的愚蠢和紧张。 ⑤I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. 当我紧紧地靠在桌子上，扭动着头，试图找到正确的角度，但这没有用时，我陷入了恐慌。 常考话题 目录 132 4．与生活趣事有关的尴尬描写 ⑥Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely. 她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。 5．与生活趣事有关的感激描写 ⑦They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her and she was grateful for that. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰，她为此感激他们。 ⑧“Thanks.” Her hands clinging to the bag opening, and she was overwhelmed by gratitude and warmth. “谢谢。”她的手紧紧抓住打开的袋子，感激和温暖让她不知所措。 常考话题 目录 133 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·重庆市第八中学高三适应性月考卷(一))There is a story from many years ago of a primary school teacher. Her name was Rose. On the first day of school, as Rose looked out over her new fifth grade class, her attention was immediately drawn to two boys, Mark and Charlie. Mark had a high energy that filled the room, his voice echoing even in casual conversations. He laughed loudest and answered questions with enthusiasm that was impossible to ignore. Charlie, Mark's partner­in­crime, had a naughty grin and a twinkle in his eyes. Together, they were perfect. 常考话题 目录 134 While Mark would command attention with his tales, Charlie would comment cleverly, making the whole class burst into laughter. Rose could already tell that these two would keep her on her toes. She smiled to herself, though, ready for an eventful year ahead. She knew she had to find a way to channel their energy positively, turning their enthusiasm into a driving force for learning. One day, Rose had a unique assignment for her students. She asked them to list each classmate's name on two sheets, leaving gaps between. Next, she instructed them to write down the nicest thing they could think of for each student. The assignment consumed the whole period. As they left, each student handed in their papers. 常考话题 目录 135 Over the weekend, Rose wrote down the name of each student on a separate sheet of paper, creating individual lists for every student. On Monday, she handed out the lists. Soon, happiness spread across the room. Mark, known for his naughty behavior, looked astonished. “I had no idea I mattered to anyone，” he whispered, visibly moved. Beside him, Charlie, Mark's partner­in­crime, said similarly.“I never realized others thought so highly of me.” No one ever mentioned those lists in class again. Rose never found out if they discussed them after class or with their parents, but it didn't matter. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 常考话题 目录 136 The atmosphere in the classroom shifted, especially Mark and Charlie.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ On a bright afternoon years later, two gentlemen knocked at Rose's door, holding the lists. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 常考话题 目录 137 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Rose (罗斯)是一名小学老师，Mark (马克)和Charlie (查理)是班级上两个过于“活跃”的学生。一天，Rose让学生们写出他们认为的每一位同学的优点，同学们对Mark和Charlie的评价很高。两人觉得很开心，他们在课堂上会发生什么转变呢？多年以后，来到Rose办公室的是谁？ 常考话题 目录 138 答案 常考话题 目录 139 答案 常考话题 目录 140 关爱动物类 1．与关爱动物有关的情绪描写 ①They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing it to her favourite toys. 他们很高兴看到波比恢复了往常的样子，他们每天带领这只小狗散步，甚至给它最喜欢的玩具。 ②His parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief—Poppy was back to her old cheerful self! 他的父母看着它们四处玩耍，欣慰地笑了——波比又回到了她快乐的老样子！ 常考话题 目录 141 ③Receiving a positive answer, Sam was wild with joy and Roland, wagging his tail merrily, as if intoxicated. 收到肯定的回答后，萨姆欣喜若狂，罗兰也高兴地摇着尾巴，好像喝醉了一样。 2．与关爱动物有关的环境描写 ④It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. 这是旱季最热的日子之一。我们差不多一个月没有看见雨了。庄稼正在枯死。奶牛已经停止产奶了。 常考话题 目录 142 ⑤The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence. 饥饿的熊嗅着气味来到我们的营地，营地周围有一道高高的铁丝网。 3．与关爱动物有关的现状描写 ⑥Effluent from the sedimentation tank is dosed with disinfectant to kill any harmful organisms. 从沉降池流出的废水被加入消毒剂，以杀死一切有害生物。 ⑦Fewer than a thousand giant pandas still live in the wild. 不到1，000只的大熊猫仍然生活在野外。 ⑧Because of the extreme cold, the Antarctic has a uniquely fragile environment. 由于极端寒冷，南极的生态环境尤其脆弱。 常考话题 目录 143 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·安徽省九师联盟高三月考)“She needs me.” Those were the exact words I spoke to my husband when I spotted Dottie, a little dog we found at a local shelter eight years ago. Dottie leaned away when I tried to pet her and refused to let me hold her. While the other dogs jumped and barked, Dottie returned to the back of the cage, curled up in a ball, hoping us to leave her alone. 常考话题 目录 144 On the entire drive home, Dottie was in fear. So, upon arrival at our house, we got right to work. I held her as much as possible, touching her head and softly singing in her ear. We learned that she loved belly touch, so every time we passed by, we would offer a gentle touch. Eventually, we noticed her presenting her belly as we walked by her. I knew we were making real progress when I found her quietly sleeping on a chair one day, her head resting on one of my shoes. My heart melted as I realized she had brought it there because it contained my smell, and she wanted it nearby. 常考话题 目录 145 Ever so slowly, our little dog came to life. She began to play with toys, enjoy walks, and rest on our laps. There was no special treatment, no fancy food or toys. All we did was love her. And she grew well. She was so broken when we first met her that we had no idea what her true personality would be. But now we found a sweet, playful, loving soul. One day, a few years after her adoption, I was busy doing housework around the house, doing laundry and climbing the stairs from the basement up to the main floor. When I finished, I sat down and enjoyed a well­deserved break. That's when I realized I hadn't seen Dottie for a while. I called to her and began searching. My heart raced and my pace quickened as I began checking under beds and behind sofa. 常考话题 目录 146 Suddenly, I remembered the door to the basement. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ I held her in my arms tightly, telling her how sorry I was. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 常考话题 目录 147 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Dottie (点点)是作者和丈夫在流浪狗领养中心收养的小狗，在作者耐心、温柔的引导下，Dottie卸下防备，成了作者家庭的一员。突然有一天，它不见了。Dottie跑去了哪里？深感歉意的作者会做些什么？ 常考话题 目录 148 答案 常考话题 目录 149 答案 常考话题 目录 150 创作园地 一　遭遇困难 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·江苏省百校联考高三第一次考试)John flew to the US from his hometown of Glasgow, Scotland when he was 19 years old. He headed to California for a semester studying abroad. It was his first time traveling overseas by himself, and he was a little nervous. Luckily, he met a young Irish couple along the way. They were going to Venice Beach, which wasn't far from John's final destination of Newport Beach. They decided to make the final leg of the journey together. There was just one problem: None of them knew how to get to either city from Los Angeles. 创作园地 目录 152 “I think we may take three or four, maybe even five different bus journeys, possibly going in different directions each time，” John said. Each time they asked bus drivers for directions, they'd end up more confused. They were getting more and more upset. They hadn't packed much food or water, just not very prepared in every respect. It's not just that they were kind of tired and hungry. There was certainly a level of anxiety growing in their minds as well. Eventually they decided to find a map. They bought one at a gas station and stood outside, trying to make sense of it. “It couldn't be more obvious that we have got lost，” John said, laughing helplessly. 创作园地 目录 153 For about 15 minutes, the group stood outside examining the map. They were on the verge of giving up when a young woman approached them. She was wearing a T­shirt that said “Need help？” “I'm not a person of faith，” John said to the couple. “But I admit that at present I do have a sense of, well, has this person been sent from heaven？” The young woman just looked at them and said, “Do you guys need any help？” The three tired travelers told her how they had got lost on the way to Venice Beach. Pointing to a blue car in which sat a middle­aged woman, the young woman replied，“Maybe my mother and I can help you.” 创作园地 目录 154 They expected the young woman could tell them how to get to Venice Beach but instead she offered something even better. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ The next morning the young woman helped John map out a ride to Newport Beach. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 155 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。19岁的John (约翰)第一次独自出门，途中偶遇了一对来自爱尔兰的情侣，三人遇到了困难。一位友好的年轻女士向他们施以援手，这位女士是如何帮助三人的？从这件事中，John有什么感悟？ 创作园地 目录 156 答案 创作园地 目录 157 答案 创作园地 目录 158 二　鲨鱼来袭 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2023·辽宁省沈阳市第一中学高三第二次模拟) A Narrow Escape A feeling of terror came over ten­year­old Chet Roscow.He had been swimming in the Matawan River by himself. But he had the idea that someone or something was watching him. And then he saw a large gray fin (鳍) slicing through the water like a knife. What was that? Could it be a shark? That was impossible! Elm Hills was miles and miles from the ocean. How could a shark find its way into this little river? 创作园地 目录 159 But now Chet could see it coming toward him.The shark was bigger than Chet himself. The black eyes staring up through the water—killer eyes. Chet dived toward the shore, pounding through the water and kicking with all his might. His feet touched the bottom. He was running now, looking over his shoulder. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open and its white teeth shining in its blooded mouth. Those killer eyes stared at Chet. And then, with a flick of its tail, the shark pushed itself backward into the water, and disappeared down the river. Chet rose to his knees and threw up. When he could stand, he suddenly noticed his friends, Sid，Monty and Dewey, standing on the dock (码头)．Before he could stop them，they had dived into the water. 创作园地 目录 160 “Get out of the water！” he screamed. “Get out! Get out now！” He thundered down the path and onto the dock. “You have to get out! There's a shark！” “You hear that, Monty？” Sid said. “There's a shark in the river! We'd better get out.” Sid lifted himself up on the dock and took a running leap off the edge of the dock. He jumped into the river with such an enormous splash that Chet got thoroughly wet. Monty and Dewey dived in after him. “Oh shaaaaaaa­rrrrrrrk！” Sid called through cupped hands. “Here, shark! Come and get us！” They laughed, and Chet stood there, totally helpless. 创作园地 目录 161 But then he noticed Sid, strangely still in the river.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Before he had a chance to think, Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 162 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。十岁的Chet Roscow (切特·罗斯科)在游泳时遇到鲨鱼，并成功逃离了鲨鱼，但他的朋友们仍然在河里游泳。Sid (赛德)为什么呆呆地站在水中？Chet会如何营救Sid呢？ 创作园地 目录 163 答案 创作园地 目录 164 答案 创作园地 目录 165 三　坚持到底 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·河南省TOP二十名校高三调研)It was 2016 and I was 17. I was searching through online videos for something new to add to my circus skills. Training to be a circus performer, I could already do lots of tricks, but I really wanted to do something rare. A video caught my eye! It was about a circus performer shooting arrows with a bow—using her feet! That was incredible! I decided to do something like that, I bought a bow and arrow and then went straight to my circus school to start practising. 创作园地 目录 166 I was already good at handstands so the idea was that I'd stand on my hands and then shoot the arrow using my toes. I controlled the bow and arrow between my toes and at first I could barely get it to shoot one meter. But I kept at it, clocking in several hours a day. Along with practising my bow and arrow skills, I did weights and yoga to stay strong and flexible. I dreamed of being a great full­time performer, so I kept it up. By the time I left school, I had shot a bullseye (靶心) from around 10 meters away. The world record was shooting a bullseye at 12 meters, so I was determined to beat it someday. 创作园地 目录 167 After I left school, Chayne Hultgren, a famous circus performer, offered to train me. I joined him at a festival in 2018 and had my own little side show. Later, we did a lot of popular shows. “I'm worried about my toe grip (抓力)，” I told Chayne. “Sandpaper the skin between your toes to cause friction，” he suggested. I was determined to make it, so I took his advice. I sanded the skin until my toes bled. It was painful but I held on and gradually the flesh between my toes toughened up, increasing my toe grip. 创作园地 目录 168 Eventually, I could shoot a target further than 12 meters, so I contacted the Guinness World Records to find out what I'd need to do to enter. The trick needed to be filmed from different angles and several people had to witness it. The distance had to be measured by a qualified surveyor. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 169 On August 15, 2022, with all in place, I went to a tennis court where I'd make my attempt. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Then I sent all the information to the Guinness World Records to check on it. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 创作园地 目录 170 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者练习用脚射箭，梦想成为一名伟大的全职表演者，经过不断地练习和努力，作者想申请吉尼斯世界纪录。2022年8月15日，作者去了网球场进行尝试。他的表现如何？作者把所有的信息发送到吉尼斯世界纪录，他会创造吉尼斯世界纪录吗？ 创作园地 目录 171 答案 创作园地 目录 172 答案 创作园地 目录 173 四　收养小狗 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·湖北省腾云联盟高三联考)When my daughters reached the third and fourth grades, I occasionally allowed them to walk to and from school alone, if the weather permitted. One warm spring day, a small friend followed them home after school. This friend was different from any other friends they had brought home. With a yellowish coat and tiny brown spots dropped across her nose, she was the cutest puppy I had ever seen. 创作园地 目录 174 When my husband got home that evening, he recognized the breed—a beagle puppy (猎兔犬), not more than twelve weeks old, he guessed. She ran to him right away and after dinner climbed into his lap to watch TV. By now the girls were both begging me to keep her. She had no collar or identifying marks of any sort. I didn't know what to do. I thought about running an ad in the lost­and­found but I really didn't want to. It would break the kids' hearts if someone should show up. Besides, her owners should have watched her more closely. I tried to find seemingly logical reasons to explain my behavior. 创作园地 目录 175 By the end of the week, she was part of our family. We had named the puppy Molly. She was very intelligent and good with the girls. This was a good idea, I thought. It was time for the girls to take responsibility for another life, so they would learn the nurturing skills they'd need if they decided to become mommies when they grew up. The following week, something told me to check the lost­and­found section in the local paper. One particular ad jumped out at me and my heart pounded with fear at what I read. Someone was asking for the return of a lost beagle puppy near our grade school. They sounded desperate. My hand shook. 创作园地 目录 176 Instead, I pretended I hadn't seen the ad. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ I knew in my heart I had to call that number and see if our Molly was the puppy they were desperately seeking. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 177 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者的孩子们捡到一只小狗，作者希望留下这只小狗，但在报纸上看到寻狗启事，作者的内心发生了怎样的挣扎？作者联系失主后又发生了什么？ 创作园地 目录 178 答案 创作园地 目录 179 答案 创作园地 目录 180 五　社区义工 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2022·浙江高考6月改编)I need to do something in my community (社区) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do. 创作园地 目录 181 I thought that we would just be passing our dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I'd come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn't have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she'd be right there, which I found quite comforting. 创作园地 目录 182 I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had totally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 183 As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 创作园地 目录 184 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者作为志愿者来到社区服务，为需要帮助的人分发餐食，作者的工作进行得顺利吗？作者本打算用这个方式获得学分，除此以外，作者还收获了什么？ 创作园地 目录 185 答案 创作园地 目录 186 答案 创作园地 目录 187 六　坚守梦想 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广东省高三第一次调研考试)It was a dream born in fire. Andrea Peterson was 5 when she was trapped on the ledge (窗台) of a burning building. “Throw the kid down！” said one of the firemen below, whose eyes are firm and courageous, along with professional rescue techniques. Seeing this, little Andrea jumped into lifesaving arms and a life­long ambition: She wanted to fight fires as her rescuers did. 创作园地 目录 188 She told that to the men who had saved her, and they laughed naturally the way grown­ups do when a kid says he wants to be an astronaut or a sports star. But this was back in a time when little girls weren't even allowed to fantasize (幻想) about such grand goals. “You'll be a good mommy，” the firemen told her. “You'll be a good teacher, maybe you'll be a nurse, but you can never be a fireman.” Indeed life sidelined her ambitious dream. She was studying for a degree in aviation technology (航空科技) and that's where she met her husband, Dennis. Unfortunately, Dennis was diagnosed with cancer. Peterson spent 31 years caring for the man she loved, and in 2007, when Dennis was about to leave, he was at peace but worried for her. “But what are you going to do？” “I'll be fine，” she told him. 创作园地 目录 189 At 61, she attended a course for emergencies. She went on an ambulance ride­along from time to time. It turned out to be a life­and­death situation, which reminded her of the childhood experience back in the fire. But every time she saw people who were in need were successfully rescued, Peterson felt that long­ago childhood calling. She earned her emergency medical technician license and responded to fire calls with the ambulance. She found that her years of tending to Dennis had prepared her for dealing with the variety of hurts and ills. The inside calling echoed increasingly stronger. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 190 After a year, she signed up for a training unit for firefighters. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Finally came the written and physical fitness test day. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 创作园地 目录 191 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Andrea Peterson (安德里亚·彼得森)在五岁时经历了火灾，立志成为一名消防员，长大后并未如愿，但她始终没有忘记自己的梦想，以62岁高龄参加消防员训练的她还顺利吗？她的笔试和体能测试结果如何？ 创作园地 目录 192 答案 创作园地 目录 193 答案 创作园地 目录 194 七　亲近自然 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·福建省厦门市第二中学高三检测)This past summer, I joined my sister's family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and sand castle building on the beach. 创作园地 目录 195 By the third day, I had noticed that my ten­year­old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembered from my youth. So, at dinner, I told Jannie we should hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning, which was called Rocky Point because the peak is bare and rock­covered. “Well.” replied Jannie, “Tomorrow there are some shows on the Disney Channel, so I'm going to be pretty busy.” “When your mother and I used to come here when we were your age, we were too busy swimming and hiking up mountains.” 创作园地 目录 196 “Sounds more like punishment than a vacation.” She shrugged her shoulders. “Besides, I don't think I can walk that far.” When I said it only took a half­hour of steady walking to get to the top. She grumbled, “Fine, I'll go.” I knew she was agreeing just to shut me up, but I would take anything I could get. The next morning was a perfect day for a hike, with sunshine and clear skies. I got up early and took some sandwiches and water bottles, which I tucked into my backpack along with the bug spray and the camera. 创作园地 目录 197 Jannie came shuffling downstairs, sighed dramatically, rolled her eyes and announced in a very unenthusiastic, robot­like voice. “I'm ready to go hiking, Uncle David.” Anyway, we climbed into my car and drove to the trailhead about ten minutes away. As we stood at the edge of the parking lot and looked down the shaded trail that led into the woods, Jannie said, “I am still not sure this is a good idea, but if you and Mom could do it, I can too, I guess.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 198 For the moment she was determined to start our journey. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ A while later we did make it to the top. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 创作园地 目录 199 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者发现外甥女Jannie (珍妮)即使在自然环境宜人的地方，也只是坐在电视机前或者在礼品店闲逛，于是决定带她去爬山，体验大自然的美好。Jannie虽然不情愿，但跟着一路前行，途中发生了什么？到达山顶后，Jannie有什么感受？ 创作园地 目录 200 答案 创作园地 目录 201 答案 创作园地 目录 202 八　信守承诺 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广东省湛江市高三检测)Molly and her husband Rex ran a used bookstore in a small town. People, mostly kids, came here to read books, sell books and buy books. The morning had been full of rain, and passers­by were walking with narrow eyes under umbrellas. Molly rested both her hands on the counter and leaned (倾斜) forward to watch the world outside in the rain while Rex was busy sorting out books on the bookshelves. Rick, who sat on the floor burying himself in reading a hardback illustrated book, was the only customer in such a rainy day. Rick was a regular customer to the bookstore and he never sold a book or bought a book. He just read books. 创作园地 目录 203 “Can you keep this book for me？” Molly heard a shy voice and looked down to find it was little Rick that stood before the counter, holding the illustrated book and asked. “Sure！” Molly nodded encouragingly. But the uncertainty remained on Rick's face. “I'll be back really soon. Promise. Tomorrow if I can.” Molly nodded to him as seriously as she was treating an adult. Molly wanted to ask him if there was anything difficult, but she kept silent. Anyway, she put the illustrated book in a drawer in case anyone else would take it. Most of the secondhand books in her store were unique. If it was sold, she would fail to keep her promise. 创作园地 目录 204 Rick didn't return the following day, or the day after that. Molly was somehow disappointed. Rex suggested placing the illustrated book on the bookshelf so that others could read it or take it. In Rex's opinion, children made promises all the time and they promised all kinds of things. When they came to a store and was attracted by something, they promised to come back and they asked the shopkeeper not to let anyone else take the things they wanted away. It happened all the time. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 205 But Molly insisted that they should wait and keep the book. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ Rick pushed the door open and rushed to the counter holding his money box.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 创作园地 目录 206 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Molly (茉莉)和她的丈夫Rex (雷克斯)经营一家二手书店，一天，一个名叫Rick (瑞克)的孩子请Molly为他保留一本书。但是后面两天，答应来取书的Rick没有现身，Rex认为应该把书放在书架上供大家选择，但Molly坚持等Rick来，她会怎样做呢？Rick终于来到书店，故事的结局如何？ 创作园地 目录 207 答案 创作园地 目录 208 答案 创作园地 目录 209 九　友善待人 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·河北省邯郸市高三第一次调研) Be What's Missing Where was that cashier? Angry, I glanced at my watch. I barely had enough time to eat my hamburgers and then dash back to the hospital where I worked. I looked around the nearly empty fast­food restaurant but the cashier was nowhere in sight. A woman whom I guessed to be about my age stood wiping the far end of the counter with a towel. When she thought I wasn't looking, she looked at me with sad, dark eyes. 创作园地 目录 210 I waited, drumming my fingers on the counter. The woman pushed the gray hair from her lined forehead and continued wiping the counter. I glanced again at my watch. I planned to write a letter about the lack of service in this place. But just as I mentally made up my letter, I had a memory of Rosie, a former coworker of mine. I could hear her sweet voice recommend me, “Be what's missing.” “What do you mean, ‘Be what's missing’ ?” I had asked the first time I heard her use that phrase. “Whenever you find yourself in an unpleasant situation，” she explained, “just think about what is missing.” Rosie smiled at my blank stare. “It's really simple when you think about it. If someone is mean, then kindness is missing. If someone is inconsiderate, then thoughtfulness is missing. If someone is hateful, then love is missing. If we will be what's missing, then we'll provide whatever the situation needs.” 创作园地 目录 211 And here I was in an unpleasant situation. How was I supposed to “be what's missing” ? What was missing was service. But then the woman who had wiped the counter walked slowly toward the cash register. With deliberately paced words, she asked, “May I help you ?” I was not satisfied with her service, and I was so angry that I almost lost my temper. But again I heard Rosie's voice, “Be what's missing.” I took a deep breath. It was clear that I was in a hurry to be waited on—by someone who was, no doubt, overworked, underappreciated, and underpaid. With Rosie's words ringing in my head, I gave the woman my order ... and smiled. “How are you today ?” 创作园地 目录 212 My greeting seemed to surprise her. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ After dinner, I placed everything in my tray and wiped the table more thoroughly than usual. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 213 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者在快餐店吃饭时，因为迟迟没有服务员点餐而感到生气。正想发火时，想起同事说过的话“缺少什么，就成为什么”，于是作者耐心等待，并向服务员问好。为什么服务员对于作者的问好如此惊讶？通过这件事，作者有什么体会？ 创作园地 目录 214 答案 创作园地 目录 215 答案 创作园地 目录 216 十　圣诞礼物 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2023·福建德化一中、永安一中、漳平一中三校协作高三高考适应性考试) The Perfect Gift Colin walked through the mall with his head down. He couldn't bear to look at another window display of great Christmas gifts he couldn't afford. There were only a few days left until Christmas, and Colin still didn't have a present for his parents. He had only managed to save four dollars and seventeen cents. He counted the money in his pocket and sighed heavily. 创作园地 目录 217 “You look upset today, Colin. What is the matter ?” Colin's older sister Whitney asked. Colin explained his problem to his sister. “Why don't you make them something ?” Whitney suggested. “Making presents is for babies，” Colin said. “Mom and Dad won't like baby stuff.” “Hey, that is not true. When I was your age, I wrote Mom and Dad a poem for Christmas. They loved it so much that they had it framed (给……做框)，” Whitney said. 创作园地 目录 218 Colin knew that was true. The poem was hanging in the living room right above the fireplace. Mom and Dad often stood at the fireplace and read the poem to him. But Colin wasn't good at writing poems, so that didn't really help him. “It doesn't have to be a poem，” Whitney said, “It could be anything that makes them think of you whenever they look at it. That's why homemade gifts are special—because they make you think of the person who made it.” “But I don't know how to make anything Mom and Dad would actually want！” Colin said, kicking a tiny stone across the parking lot. 创作园地 目录 219 Whitney opened the car door. “Yes, you do! You're always drawing those funny little comics. Why don't you do a family portrait (全家福) as a comic? Mom and Dad would love it.” “Maybe，” Colin said. He thought about the idea the whole way home. He even pictured how he would draw everyone. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 创作园地 目录 220 For the next two days, Colin drew one picture after another. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ After all the other presents were opened, Colin handed his gift to his parents. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 创作园地 目录 221 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Colin (科林)因为没有足够的钱给父母买圣诞礼物而感到十分苦恼，姐姐建议他自制礼物送父母，Colin决定采用姐姐的建议，用漫画的方式画一幅全家福。画画的过程顺利吗？父母喜欢Colin的礼物吗？ 创作园地 目录 222 答案 创作园地 目录 223 答案 创作园地 目录 224 [精彩范文] My daughter was waiting for my reply. I looked at her, then at the Skyway. I felt my heart threatening to burst out from my chest. But my daughter kept begging me and I could not bear to reject her. Bravery was the most significant quality that I wanted her to possess. Her curiosity was so strong that I couldn't resist. I nodded slightly, and my daughter's frowning face slowly broke into a smile. I plucked up my courage and took my first step onto the suspension bridge. I inched forward, all the way holding on tight to the handrail. Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop. I stood there, and my legs trembled despite my fruitless attempt to stay calm. My heart beat wildly, casting scared glances down the bridge. Just then, I heard a familiar voice, and two little hands slipped into my arm. Looking down, I saw my little angel's bright smile, encouraging me to finish the walk. Eventually, we reached the end together. My husband was surprised at my nerve, but I knew the reason why I had felt so brave was for my little girl. [精彩范文] I couldn't think and most of all, I couldn't sing. The note started up but stuck right there in my throat. The choir kept singing softly behind me. “You can do it，” Fiona whispered from behind me. I wasn't as sure as she was. My turn came again. I took a deep breath but then what came out was an off­key sound. But in that same moment, from behind me came the pure tone of the right note. It was Fiona who helped me! My voice lifted and matched hers. The rest of the performance went well. When the concert was over, the applause was thunderous. Walking off the stage, we met with praise and hugs. Fiona was there to hug me as well. It felt awkward. “Thanks” was all I could get myself to say. Fiona flashed me her usual smile. “It was nothing. You've always been there for me.” Fiona gave me another hug. “That is what friends are for！” The feeling of having her by my side drove me to hug her back even tighter. [精彩范文] Today she showed up in a raincoat. Seeing her standing in the heavy rain with all the body wet, I finally could not control myself and shouted at her, “Why do you look so flustered? I don't need you to take me home. I feel ashamed to have a mother like you！” Suddenly, Mom was shocked and silent. Maybe, she had never thought that I would have that feeling of her appearance and our home condition. She said nothing and just covered the raincoat on me. I pushed it away wildly. Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in. With a smile, she said, “Dear son, I'm trying my best to earn our living, and I'm sure that if we work harder, we will get whatever we want in the future.” Hearing her words, I felt embarrassed. I thought of the time when she knitted in the deep night and cooked for me in the early morning. Yes, she had always been doing whatever she could to make me live well. But I was still unsatisfied. I had known that if I wanted to get what others had, I should spare no efforts to study hard and get it by myself. [精彩范文] “It's alphabet (字母) soup！” she cried. Abuelita smiled，“I thought we could have our own spelling bee here in the kitchen. Can you make any words with that for letters？” Maria looked back at her spoon and quickly spoke out a few words coming from the letters in the spoon.“Yes! A­R­T spells art. R­A­T spells rat. T­A­R spells tar. And I can use the S at the end of them to make more than one，” Maria got refreshed and didn't feel bad any more. Abuelita smiled. “I see a word, too. S­T­A­R spells star.” She gently held Maria in her arms, with light shining in her eyes. “You are my little spelling star.” Maria couldn't be any happier this time and felt this was going to be a wonderful day after all. She missed the chance to win the class spelling bee but she really felt the love of family, which would inspire her to be much stronger. [精彩范文] Suddenly, a messy grey­haired woman with a weathered face stood up. Dressed in a ragged shirt and faded trousers, she looked in need herself. She stepped forward and stood directly in front of the driver. Without asking any questions, she didn't doubt the girl as I had. “This is for her, ” she said, holding out forty dollars and pointing to the girl. Surprised, the bus driver nodded, and took the money. The young girl thanked her for her kind offer. I was touched by the kind act done by the old woman who looked in need herself. At the next rest stop, I noticed that woman had no money for food. Approaching her, I said, “That was a really kind thing you did for that girl. Here, I want to share what you paid.” When I gave her the note, she looked at me with gratitude, saying that was her last forty dollars! When I was shocked by her act of kindness, a couple of others came to surround her with their money. Actually, her forty dollars made a great difference! [精彩范文] The atmosphere in the classroom shifted, especially Mark and Charlie. Mark started setting up study groups, and even volunteered to organize school events, where he was busy seeking opinions and looking up for guidance. Charlie, on the other hand, emerged as a thoughtful contributor in discussions, revealing insights that often left the class in awe. Their transformation was evident not only in their academic performance but also in their interactions. The mischievous duo, once the source of relentless energy and disruption, began to channel their enthusiasm into constructive outlets. The list had served as a mirror, reflecting the positive qualities others saw in them, qualities they had previously been unaware of. On a bright afternoon years later, two gentlemen knocked at Rose's door, holding the lists. Rose, a bit puzzled, opened the door to see two familiar faces, now grown and matured. It was Mark and Charlie. “Miss Rose，” Mark began, his voice still holding that trace of energy she remembered, “we wanted to thank you personally.” He held up the aged list, edges frayed but words still clear. Charlie continued, “These lists were a turning point for us. Knowing we mattered, and that we had value in others' eyes changed our paths.” Seeing the profound impact a simple classroom activity had left on them, Rose smiled. [精彩范文] Suddenly, I remembered the door to the basement. I rushed downstairs, with fear gripping my heart. And there she was, lying at the bottom of the stairs, her tiny body trembling. I scooped her up in my arms, her eyes filled with fright and confusion. For the next few days, Dottie was visibly shaken by the incident. She clung to me, refusing to let me out of her sight. I realized that she had developed a sense of dependency on me, relying on me not only for love and comfort, but also for her safety and security. With each passing day, her trust in me grew stronger, and she began to let go of her fears. I held her in my arms tightly, telling her how sorry I was. In the days that followed, I showed Dottie with even more love and attention. I set up a comfortable and secure area for her in the house, making sure she had her own space where she could feel safe. I also started taking her to professional training classes to help build her confidence and trust in me. Slowly but surely, Dottie began to heal. She started venturing out of her safe space, exploring new areas of the house and even playing with toys again. Every day, she showed more signs of trust and happiness. Through this experience, I learned to appreciate the power of unconditional love and the importance of being a responsible and caring pet owner. Dottie not only brought joy and love into my life, but she also taught me valuable lessons about patience, forgiveness, and the resilience of the human­animal bond. [精彩范文] They expected the young woman could tell them how to get to Venice Beach but instead she offered something even better. “Why don't you just get in the car? My mother and I will take you，” the young woman replied. Relieved and grateful, John and his new friends got into the woman's car. On the journey, the young woman discovered that John was going to travel to Newport Beach. “Well, don't worry, I will help you coordinate your trip to Newport Beach tomorrow，” the young woman suggested. Not only did they drop off the Irish couple in Venice Beach, they also provided accommodations for John. The next morning the young woman helped John map out a ride to Newport Beach. The young woman had arranged everything for John, which made him really grateful. John was aware that how unusual that level of generosity was, far beyond his expectation. He wanted to pay money for what they had done for him, but was refused. They just told John to pass this kindness on to whoever needed help. John made his way to Newport Beach, feeling warm in his heart and he wouldn't feel nervous because he knew there would always be someone who was willing to give a helping hand. [精彩范文] But then he noticed Sid, strangely still in the river. His face had gone white. His mouth was open, like he was going to scream. Chet's insides turned to jelly when he saw the shining fin moving slowly through the water. “Hurry！” Chet cried, “Get out！” Monty and Dewey flew out of the water. But Sid seemed stuck. The shark was closer to the surface now, its black eyes almost glowing. They all screamed at Sid, but Sid still didn't move. The shark was getting closer. Before he had a chance to think, Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. He swam as fast as he could toward Sid, grabbed hold of Sid's arm and pulled him. Monty and Dewey were at the edge of the dock, reaching down for them. Sid lifted himself up and Chet planted his hands on the dock. Chet was almost out of the water when something caught his leg. “It's got my leg！” Chet screamed. “Pull！” Sid shouted. They pulled until Chet's leg finally came free! Chet was injured, but to his relief, his friends were safe. [精彩范文] On August 15, 2022, with all in place, I went to a tennis court where I'd make my attempt. At first. I did the trick at 15 meters. The crowds cheered for me. “I believe you can do better than that.” Chayne said. Therefore, we put the target back a bit further. Eventually, after about six goes, I managed to nail the bullseye from 18.27 meters, upside down, balancing on my hands while holding the bow with one foot and pulling back the string with my toes. “You did it！” screamed Chayne, running to hug me. Then I sent all the information to the Guinness World Records to check on it. Finally, five months later, in January 2023. I was up late one night when I received an email from them, so thrilled and relieved. This feat had been several years in the making! From then on, when my performance was introduced, the host could say I was a world record holder. It was a great title! I knew that my dream to be a great full­time performer was going to come true. But I also knew that I wouldn't stop my step to achieving higher. [精彩范文] Instead, I pretended I hadn't seen the ad. I folded the newspaper, put it away in the drawer and tried to ignore what I saw. However, trapped in the dilemma of choice, I hesitated whether I should hide the truth. It was not long before my husband and daughters came home and started to have fun with Molly. At the sight of the scene that they were playing happily, I couldn't help thinking about the owner's sincere lost­dog ad. Though it would be pretty hard to part with Molly, my moral code told me to make the right choice. I knew in my heart I had to call that number and see if our Molly was the puppy they were desperately seeking. I quickly dialed the number and then came a woman's voice. After explaining the situation of Molly, I could feel the embarrassing silence in the phone. Suddenly, she broke the embarrassing air and suggested that our families should raise Molly together. My parting pain gave way to excitement on the spot. I couldn't say a word to describe my gratitude. In the following days, my daughters accepted to give Molly back and kept playing with Molly. We all knew that we did the right thing. [精彩范文] As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. Nervous as I felt, I did my best to keep myself calm and packed bread, salad and meat to those in need. Upon noticing my hurried and trembling hands, the lady next to me smilingly told me that I should first organize these people to queue up and then hand out salad one by one. I immediately sprang into action and the passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. Every one of them including those who looked very dangerous murmured in a cheering voice “Thank you” and bowed to me sincerely, which brought warmth straight into my heart. It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of sun that we finished our community service for the homeless. I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. I was aware that my time spent at the soup kitchen was really a rewarding, enriching and life­changing experience. Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who deserved compassion and support, but also I served the people who were less fortunate than me. In the meanwhile, I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy, and therefore, we should always keep grateful for what life blessed us with. I now felt it a duty to do what I could for them. Since that day, I have spared more time in offering my service opportunity in dining halls, in the streets, in front of grocery stores. [精彩范文] After a year, she signed up for a training unit for firefighters. No sooner had she stepped into the training venue than she found all her classmates were 18－22 young kids. “Could I really make it？” Peterson thought to herself, struggling. At the very moment, she was once again thought of the firm and courageous eyes of the firefighters who came to rescue her over 50 years ago. She instantly rolled up her sleeves and began to learn both theoretical and practical knowledge as her much younger peers. Finally came the written and physical fitness test day. For Peterson, she was at an advantageous situation for the theoretical part, as her past rescue experiences on ambulance ride­along made her a qualified rescuer already. However, the 3­km running, push­ups, sit­ups, etc. all behaved as huge gaps awaiting her to conquer. Though she ranked the last among such items, her persistence, endurance as well as the passion for a childhood dream made her name appear on the list of newly­announced firefighters. This time, tears blurred her eyes, as the dream born in the fire was eventually fulfilled. [精彩范文] For the moment she was determined to start our journey. About 200 yards into the forest, the trail began to climb a steep slope. I pointed out some rarely­seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. She didn't share my enthusiasm. She was thirsty, tired, sweaty and bored. I handed her the water bottle as she sat on a fallen log and took a break. “You know, I think we're almost to the top，” I told her. “You've already said that three times, and we're not there yet.” she replied. She grumbled another complaint as we continued on. She might not have been happy, but at least I was proud that she had the determination not to quit before we reached the top. A while later we did make it to the top. Jannie looked up, noticing we were no longer under the trees. When she stopped, looked around and saw where we were, her jaw dropped, her eyes opened wide and she shouted: “Oh, I don't believe it. We're on top of the world. It's awesome！” A refreshing breeze brushed the mountaintop, not a cloud was in the sky and miles and miles of trees and lakes spread out below us. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying. It had taken us almost an hour to make the climb, but it was worth it. [精彩范文] But Molly insisted that they should wait and keep the book. She didn't place the illustrated book on the bookshelf, hoping Rick would show up soon. A kid might make all kinds of promises and fail to keep them. But Rick was so sincere and eager that Molly believed he wouldn't break his promise. A kid's promise is more valuable than the cost of the book. The book would rest in the drawer still until Rick showed up. Then on one sunny morning, Molly found a little boy running all the way towards her bookstore holding something. The little boy was exactly Rick. Rick pushed the door open and rushed to the counter holding his money box. Molly excitedly pulled the drawer open, took out the illustrated book and walked out from the counter immediately. She knelt with one leg and smiled at Rick, handing the book to Rick. Rick's eyes were shining looking at the book, and he put the box on the floor and held the book.“I think you had better make your deal here at the coffee table，” said Rex. Molly winked at him delightedly. The sunlight came through the glass window and cast on the little customer and the nice lady. [精彩范文] My greeting seemed to surprise her. She eyed me for a second before answering. “Not too good.” “I'm sorry.” I said. “I hope it gets better starting right now.” She almost smiled as she looked at me. “Thanks. I hope you're right.” I thought to myself as I ate my sandwich. We're all the same, really. We have problems and angers, we get tired and we hurt. We need to be nicer to each other. After dinner, I placed everything in my tray and wiped the table more thoroughly than usual. The woman was watching me, a big smile on her face. She walked over and took away the things from the table, saying, “Thanks. You are so kind. You make my day.” I said, “If this can make you happy, what I have done is worthwhile.” I walked out of the restaurant and felt cheerful. “Be what's missing.” It worked. I hoped everyone can be friendly to others. [精彩范文] For the next two days，Colin drew one picture after another. He was so absorbed in his work that he even ignored his sister's calling him from downstairs to have dinner. The waste­paper basket was filled with pictures he was not satisfied with but he wouldn't give up. He was trying to make sure everyone was drawn perfectly. Finally, he had everyone just right, his mother wearing her usual kind smile, his father holding his favorite book, his sister looking good in her red dress, and he himself standing beside them smiling widely. He wrapped the present carefully and put it under the tree on Christmas morning. After all the other presents were opened, Colin handed his gift to his parents. Colin held his breath as his mom carefully unwrapped it. He had expected his mom would be disappointed but the moment she saw the comic, she started to cry. “This is the best present you've ever given us, Colin. You must have spent a lot of time on it，” his mother said, holding the boy in her arms.“I know just where to put it，” his dad said with a smile. He took the drawing and placed it beside Whitney's poem above the fireplace. Colin stared up at the comic. It really was a perfect gift. $$