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Module 4 Home alone
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外研安徽九年级上
一、话题分析
本模块的中心话题是“独自在家”。文章的体裁是记叙文。写这类文章时,可先交代事件的起因,然后按事件发生的先后顺序进行叙述。
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二、写作方法
“三段条陈法”描述自己的独处经历
1. 第一段→开篇点题
2. 第二段→描述过程
3. 第三段→归纳感受
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三、素材积累
(一)“描述独处经历类”作文常用词汇:
look after // be worried about // have fun // tidy up // in a hurry // wake up // on business // by accident // take away
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(二)“描述独处经历类”作文常用句型:
开头句
1. My first experience at home alone was not perfect at all.
2. Although my parents were worried about leaving me, they had to go away on business for a few days.
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中间句
1. As soon as I got home from school the first day, I happily threw my schoolbag on the sofa.
2. I played computer games until midnight, so I didn’t do my homework.
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结尾句
1. I wanted my parents to come back home early.
2. I realised that being home alone was not always perfect. But I was happy that I had learnt some life skills.
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名言警句
More warmth in the family leads to more peace in the society.家庭多一份温馨,社会多一分安宁。
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句子升格(用让步状语从句)
In order to show that I could take care of myself, I cooked dinner the next afternoon. I knew I could wait for Mother to do such things.
→In order to show that I could take care of myself, I cooked dinner the next afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do such things.
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四、写作任务
根据下面提供的信息,写一篇介绍自己独自在家的经历的短文。
在我十二岁时,有一次父母都出差了,我独自在家待了两天。第一天,我在他们离开不久后就起床了。在第一个晚上,我心里有点害怕,所以我打开了所有的灯,我家里的灯亮了一夜。
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为了第二天能早起,我设置了三个闹钟,分别是6:00、6:10和6:15。第二天下午,我洗衣服和做饭。我为自己感到自豪。
要求:1. 所提供的信息必须用上;
2.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范;
3.不少于80词。
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【写作模板】
开篇点题 My first experience at home alone...
描述过程 When I was... The first evening, I...
归纳感受 I really felt proud of myself...
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【高分作文】
My first experience at home alone
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