山东省2023届各地市高三一模读后续写+真题续写分析讲义

23年山东一模 2023山东各地一模读后续写分析 地市 话题 首句 写作思路 高分句型 高级词汇 聊城 主人公Guyo与祖父跟随蜂蜜导游获取蜂蜜的经历 1、Guyo took a deep breath and stretched out his arm. 2、Grandfather put most of the honeycomb inside his container. 勇敢的拿到蜂蜜窝——离开蜂巢——送蜂蜜给蜂蜜导游——祖父表扬 [高分句型1]Reaching as far as he could, he pulled out several large pieces of the honeycomb filled with sticky honey. (非谓语) [高分句型2]Guyo placed the piece at the base of the tree where the honeyguide sat. (定语从句) 行为类 ①伸出:reach/extend/stretch ②装满:filled with./full of 情绪类 ①感谢:thank/showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful 烟台 为右手残疾的Sergio制作机械手 1、Then came the final testing day. 2、The life-changing gift for Sergio drew huge attention. 测试——成功——欢呼——引起关注——报道——捐款 高分句型1]1、 The whole class gathered in the science classroom, watching breathlessly as Jeff carefully loaded their self-made robotic hand onto Sergio's right arm. 2、 Holding the ball, Sergio couldn't contain his tears. (非谓语) 高分句型2] So excited was Sergio that his arm trembled slightly. (倒装) Never in his life did he expect to catch something with his right hand! (倒装) 行为类 放置:put /place 延长:extend/ stretch 控制:contain /hold back 情绪类 激动:excited /thrilled 淄博 阿西里希望他能在游行中最重要的大象的服装上缝一个亮片 1、“What’s wrong, Asiri?” asked his mother. 2、Reaching the workshop, Asiri found the sequins were still there. 妈妈询问原委——阿西里回车间——阿西里收拾残局——萨德叔叔叫阿西里缝亮片 [高分句型1]Hearing mother’s words, Asiri knew what he should do.(非谓语+从句) [高分句型2]Only when the last sequin slipped into the box did Asiri glance up. (倒装句) 行为类 走向:walk towards / head for 情绪类 ①心都提到嘴边了:with heart in his mouth / with the heart on the tip of his tongue ②抬起眼睛望着:glance up /look up with a wave of her hand/with heart in his mouth/with his arms crossed 济南 暴风雪两人都脱险(老人求助作者) 1、I hesitated about what I should do. 2、The next morning, a policeman drove by and found the gate broken. 打开门——取暖——警察询问——帮助——感悟 [高分句型1]. I felt satisfied that I had done everything that I could to help her. (定语从句) [高分句型2]. When he entered the classroom, he found me and Mary still asleep, wrapped in blank