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高考写作全攻略·申请信
申请信主要是工作或入学申请,你想要得到一个工作的职位或是想要得到一个学习的机会,你写信去申请,这种写作的实质是对自己的推荐,即自荐信。
Sample Model 01
假如你是李华,从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
构思过程
亲爱的先生或女士,
从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营,我是李华,一个来自中国的中学生,我很感兴趣。
我爱英语,并学习很多年了。我希望能和不同国家的学生交流。夏令营欢迎各国学生参加,我想参加。只有我成为其中一员,我才能给其他学生介绍中国,并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。
如果我很快收到您的回复,我将不胜感激。
你的,
李华
思维过程
第一段:背景呈现(自我介绍+说明写信的目的)
[1]从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营,我是李华,一个来自中国的中学生,我很感兴趣。
Learning from the Internet that a summer camp will be held in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it.
超级回忆杀 ☆ 非谓语 + 其他,主语 + 谓语 + 宾语.
第二段:个人介绍+参加意图
[2]我爱英语,并学习很多年了。我希望能和不同国家的学生交流。
I am so keen on English and I have been learning it for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries.
[3]夏令营欢迎各国学生参加,我想参加。
Students from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in it.
[4]只有我成为其中一员,我才能给其他学生介绍中国,并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。
Only when I am accepted as a member of your summer camp can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.
超级回忆杀 ☆ Only + 副词/介词短语/状语从句 + be动词/助动词/情态动词 + 主语 + 谓语
第三段:希望获准
[5]如果我很快收到您的回复,我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon.
完整设计
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning from the Internet that a summer camp will be held in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it.
I am so keen on English and I have been learning it for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries. Students from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in it. Only when I am accepted as a member of your summer camp can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures a