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高考写作全攻略·邀请信
邀请信一般考的就是某种活动,介绍下时间和地点,然后邀请某人来参加,有完整的写作
思路可以使用,是一种主要的书信考查文体。
Sample Model 01
假定你是李华,计划和学生去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:
1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
构思过程
亲爱的露西,
我计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。我写信邀请你和我们一同前往。
活动的细节如下。首先,我们应该在早上八点出发,下午四点左右返回。此外,我们会给他们一个精彩的表演,这不仅仅是有意义的和有趣的,并且可以给他们带来快乐和幸福感。最后,我们会有一些其他活动,包括进行一个大扫除和包饺子。只有当我们陪伴在他们身边,老年人才能享受生活,感到幸福。如果你方便的话,我们希望你能接受我们的邀请。
期待着您的回复。
你的,
李华
思维过程
第一段:背景呈现并邀请
[1]我计划和同学去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。我写信邀请你和我们一同前往。
Intending to go to the nursing home with my classmates to spend the Double Ninth Festival with the old people there, I am writing to invite you to go with us.
超级回忆杀 ☆ 非谓语 + 其他,主语 + 谓语 + 宾语.
第二段:活动细节与邀请原因(根据情况添加感谢)
[2]活动的细节如下。
Some details about this activity are as follows.
[3]首先,我们应该在早上八点出发,下午四点左右返回。
First and foremost, we are supposed to leave at 8 o’clock in the morning and return at around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.
超级回忆杀 ☆ be obliged to do sth. = be supposed to do sth.
[4]此外,我们会给他们一个精彩的表演,这不仅仅是有意义的和有趣的,并且可以给他们带来快乐和幸福感。
In addition, we will give them an excellent performance, which will not only be meaningful and interesting but also bring them joy and happiness.
超级回忆杀 ☆ 融合技:主语+谓语+宾语,which will not only+be+adj. and adj. but also+谓语+宾语.
[5]最后,我们会有一些其他活动,包括进行一个大扫除和包饺子。
Last but not least, there is a variety of activities to be held, including doing a thorough cleaning and making dumplings.
超级回忆杀 ☆ There be + 名词,including A, B as well as C.
[6]只有当我们陪伴在他们身边,老年人才能享受生活,感到幸福。
Only when they are accompanied by us can the old people surely enjoy themselves and feel very happy.
超级回忆杀 ☆ Only + 副词/介词短语/状语从句 + be动词/助动词/情态动词 + 主语 + 谓语
[7]如果你方便的话,我们希望你能接受我们的邀请。
We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
第三段:盼复
[8]期待着您的回复。
Looking forward to your reply.
完整设计
Dear