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专题12 应用文之慰问信
写作要点
写作结构
首段:知悉困境,表示同情
1. I'm sorry to know that you are having a hard/tough time at the moment.
获悉你目前身处困境,我深表遗憾。
2. I'm sorry to hear about your difficulties in..... I know it can be really tough at times.
听说你在…方面遇到困难我很难过。我知道,这件事有时候真的很难。
3. On behalf of.....,I would like to express our sincere concern and care for you.
我谨代表……,对表示诚挚的关心和关怀。
主体部分:表示理解与同情,给予安慰和劝导
1. As we all know,failure is the mother of success.I do hope you won't lose heart and will get ready to
try again. 众所周知,失败是成功之母。我真希望你不要灰心,做好准备再试一次。
2. You shouldn't/are not supposed to do sth. 你不应该做某事。
3. Be brave/Pull yourself together.You will surely overcome the difficulty.
勇敢一些/振作起来。你一定能克服困难。
尾段:表达期望、祝愿
1. I hope things will get better soon. 希望事情会很快好起来。
2. I'm sure you will get over your difficulties in a short while. 我相信你很快就会克服困难。
写作模板
Dear ___人名____,
I’m shocked/ sorry to hear that you__________________(对方遇到的不好的事情). I quite understand how you feel now. / It's understandable that you sink into sadness. (表示能理解对方处境)
My suggestions are as follows: First and foremost, we should _________________(建议1). In addition, _____________(建议2). Only in this way can we ________________(解决问题并且取得成功). / Therefore , if your dream endeavors to rise above the disadvantage, you will win sooner or later.
I hope that you______________________(祝愿对方). Let’s go all out together to turn our dreams into reality. / If you need any help, please don't hesitate to contact me. We shall be happy when you are back.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作素材
Writing1:2021·天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
(1) 表示感谢并问候;
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾巳给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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