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专题14 应用文之投诉信
写作要点
写作结构
投诉信开头部分表达写信目的:投诉
I am writing to complain about a pair of shoes I bought /purchased/ ordered from your website.
I am writing to make a complaint about ...
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about...
I am writing to draw your attention to the awful fact that + 句子
I am sorry to send this letter to you to express my disappointment.
投诉信中间部分陈述要投诉的问题以及希望对方进行补救
陈述要投诉的问题
I am totally/completely disappointed to find hat+句子(如: you sent me a pair of shoes of wrong size.)
There are some serious problems that deserve your close attention. For one thing, ...; for another, ...
There are some problems with ... that I wish to bring to your attention. First, .../In addition, .../Worse still, ...
表达心情
I can hardly put up with/bear /tolerate it any longer.
I am really annoyed about it.
I am really disappointed by the quality of the...
I am reluctant(不情愿的) to complain, but this really bothers me.
I hate to have to say this, but...
提出要求或补救建议
I would like to get my money back. 或I have to ask for/demand claim a( full) refund.要求(全额)退款
To solve the problem , I demand/request that......(should+do)
To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measure.
To remedy(补救)the matter ,I suggest making the following changes.
投诉信结尾部分表达希望对方能尽快解决上面提出的问题
I trust you will take my complaints seriously and solve the problem as soon as possible.
I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration.
I would appreciate it if you are kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.
I would be highly appreciated if you could.....
I appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.
写作模板
Dear manager,
I am Tom, one of your customers. (自我介绍) I am writing to lodge a complaint about
______. (表达写作目的) / I am Li Hua, a senior high school student. I am extremely sorry to disturb you, but I have to write a letter to convey my complaint and di