10.巧用Tea Meat构思续写框架-【爱疯大课堂】2024年高考英语读后续写晨读晚练一月通

第三部分 读后续写 爱疯大课堂 AIFENG 《爱疯大课堂读后续写晨读晚练一月通》配套课件，严禁抄袭盗用! 爱疯大课堂版权所有，侵权必究!如需修改，请联系我们！ part AIFENGDAKETANG xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 精准备考，高效提分！ 名师谈续写 精准备考，高效提分！ 巧用Tea Meat构思续写框架 在读后续写中，构建出好的框架是写出逻辑合理、语 意衔接的文章的前提。因此，我们在写作前要构建好续写 框架，写作时才会思路清晰，写出与原文衔接合理、符合 逻辑的续文。 一、策略概述 精准备考，高效提分！ 笔者通过研究近几年的高考真题，总结出操作性强的读后续写 框架：Tea Meat 框架。即： Transitional sentence衔接句→Emotion or Environment心理描 写/环境描写→Action 动作一→Monologue or Conversation独白/ 对话→Emotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写→Action 动 作二→Transitional sentence衔接句或者Theme主题句。 框架中的具体描写可根据故事情节需要适当调整顺序。 精准备考，高效提分！ 读后续写常用的写作框架： 第一段：首句(已给出)。第一句：Transitional sentence衔接句承上(回应首句的内容)→第二句：Emotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写→第三句：Action 动作一→第四句：Monologue or Conversation独白/对话→第五句：Emotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写→第六句：Action 动作二→第七句：Transitional sentence衔接句启下(结合第二段首句，结束第一段)。 精准备考，高效提分！ 第二段：首句(已给出)。第一句：Transitional sentence衔接句承上(回应首句的内容)→第二句：Emotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写→第三句：Action 动作一→第四句：Monologue or Conversation独白/对话→第五句：Emotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写→第六句：Action 动作二(解决问题)→第七句：Theme回归主题，感情升华。 本文以高考题为例，分析如何在Tea Meat框架下，完成续写。 精准备考，高效提分！ 阅读下面短文 ，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个 完整的故事。 二、实例分析 (2020年7月浙江卷) One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. 精准备考，高效提分！ Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled a