读后续写情节框架构思2 清单-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写(二） 好故事来源于好结构 亮点---刻画细节 1. 环境、语言、心理、动作 2. 丰富句式：非谓语，从句，倒装，独立主格，虚拟，强调，感叹 3. 修辞丰富：比喻，夸张，拟人 情绪描写 原则：Don’t tell! Show me. 1. A flush of (表情绪的名词)=A wave of...=A feeling/sense of...joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame...flooded over sb=swept over sb = seized sb= took control of sb 2. A sense of ______welled up within/inside sb(涌上心头） with tears rolling down sb’s cheeks.（with复合结构） Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her（涌遍全身）. 3. 因...颤抖： ...tremble/shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) 4. 流泪： (1) Tears blurred one's eyes. (2) One's eyes got misty. (3) One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊 (4) ...be close to tears几乎要哭了 (5) tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 5. 心跳，手掌：One’s heart pounded / thumped (最后用独立主格) 环境描写 1. Immediately/Suddenly,an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her. 2. Seeing the moon shining in the dark sky, she couldn’t help thinking of the days that she spent with Tom and her family. （分词） 3. A ray of sunlight shines through the dark clouds, bringing warmth and hope to the world.（分词） 4. With the cold wind blowing, Jane had to quicken her pace to catch up with them.（With 结构） 5. The sound of the stream sounded relaxing, which relieved Jane’s anxiety.（which 定从） 6. The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered（闪光） on its looking glass-clear surface. 动作+心理描写： 1. Her heart pounding（怦怦跳） fiercely and her palm（手心） sweating（独立主格）, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. 2. Tired and terrified as she was（as, 虽然，倒装）, Jane struggled to her feet, trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.（分词作伴随状语） 3. Eager and excited(形容词作状语）, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others attention（动作描写） 4. He whispered into my ears. 5. He breathed a sigh of relief. 6. He struggled out of the bed. 万能