又困电梯了（T8联考）读后续写解析 讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习

又困电梯了T8联考续写解析

 

When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse.

 

The lift lobby （电梯间） of my flat was old and dirty. The walls, which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat’s lobby, and pressed the lift button and went in. Just then, Mrs Lim, my elderly neighbour, hobbled （蹒跚） in. She looked ancient with tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open, flashing a friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride.

 

      The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard several times, but it was of no help. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical （歇斯底里）.“We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but what other choice did I have? Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried

my very best to comfort her, telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar.

 

Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came.

Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door.

 

续写作文：

Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came. Each minute witnessed the dead silence in the lift, broken only by Mrs.Lim’s sniffles. Then I noticed the emergency call button, something that usually appeared as a mere decoration, yet it held my last glimmer of hope at that very moment. After pressing it, I was somewhat relieved when the faint crackle of the connection signaled that help was on the way. I leaned against the dirty wall, putting on a brave face and chatting about our neighbors and our daily routines with Mrs.Lim, hoping to distract her from the unease, as well as mine. But it took so long that I was about to sink into despair again when there finally came some voice.    (122 words)

 

Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. They did come to our rescue! It was my turn to burst into tears, tears of relief, for I no longer needed to pretend to be strong. The door opened, the light of dusk wasn't overpowering, but as we stepped out of the cramped lift, it still momentarily dazzled our eyes. It was a beacon

of life, a gentle yet profound reminder of our survival. It was at that moment that I had a thorough understanding of the significance of cherishing the uneventful days, for in their simplicity lies a preciousness we often overlook. I promised myself, I would never again fail to find joy in the ordinary.   (126 words)

 

与原文协同的表达思路：

It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. ➡

 

1. It was at that moment that I had a thorough understanding of the significance of cherishing the uneventful days, for in their simplicity lies a preciousness we often overlook.

2. It dawned on me that I should never take my blessed uneventful life for granted, and I must cherish what I have with a heart full of gratitude.

 

The lift lobby of my flat was old and dirty. The walls, which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. ➡

As I leaned against the grimy/dirty walls of the lift, the peeling paint mirroring the chaos of my mind, I felt an oppressive weight closing in around me, making it difficult to breathe.

 

She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride. ➡

 

I guess our bonds would never be limited to mere politeness again.