2024届河北省衡水中学高三英语一调下水作文讲义

衡水中学2024届高三一调下水作文 第四部分 写作(共两节，满分40分) 第一节 (满分15分) 假定你是校英文社社长李华，上周外教James参加了你社举办的“城市漫步”(Citywalk) 活动，徒步游览了湖边绿道(lakeside greenway)。请给他写一封邮件邀请他对这次活动做出反馈，内容包括： 1. 活动感受； 2. 改进建议。 注意； 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 下水作文 Dear James, How’re things going? As the head of our English Club, I’d like to express my thanks for your participation in our Citywalk event along the lakeside greenway last week. We are truly welcoming your feedback in the activity. What’s your overall impression of the event? Does the hike provide an enjoyable way to explore our city's natural beauty? Is there any room for improvement? Compared with your kind words, your critical voice is more earnestly expected from us so that we can enjoy a better experience in future. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (101 words) 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Philip found himself at a crossroads. Although Mrs.Ford,his head teacher, appreciated his stories, the label of “nerd (呆子)” from his classmates cast a shadow over his passion for writing. Discouraged and feeling that his writing served no purpose in the eyes of others, he thought about giving it up. One day, during recess(课间), as Philip was absent-mindedly taking down some random events of the day, he heard an anxious voice calling out for help. He put down his pen, glanced out of the window and saw a gathering of people near the playground fence.With concern,he walked over and joined the crowd. In the centre of the crowd was Robin, a sporty boy in the class, who was injured on the knee and bleeding heavily. Robin was playing kickball when the ball unexpectedly shot over the playground fence, landing in the old park next to the school. As he ran to get the ball, he tripped over the overgrown weeds,his left knee crashing into a broken bench. Robin's face paled, perhaps from both pain of the bleeding knee and his panic. Concerned classmates surrounded him, and Mrs. Ford hurried to