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Unit4 Why don't you talk to your parents?
By Summer Li
Section B Writing
[写作主题]
本单元以“沟通和烦恼”为话题,要求学生针对学生是否要上课后补习班这一话题进行议论。因此,本单元作文是写议论文。
话题分析
A magazine interviewed some parents about after-school classes. Some parents talked about their opinins.
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Why should children take after-school classes? Your opinions
1. “After-school classes can help kids ...”
2. Agree:
Disagre:
Here are some top 3 opinions
After-school classes can help kids get into a good university.
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I want my child to be a successful person.
It's good for children to start learning from a young age.
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What do you think of these opinions? Do you aggre or disagree?
Pre-writing
Let's try奥利奥(OREO)写作法
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Opinion: Tell your parents how you feel about something.
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Reasons: Tell the readers why you feel that way.
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Example: Give some examples of why you feel that way.
Opinion: Restate your opinion and feeling.
Agree
Kids should take after-school classes to compete and win.
After-school classes can help students improve their grades and do better in study so that they can be more competitive.
One of my friends got bad grades at first in middle school. His parents then sent him to after-school classes to learn exam skills. Finally, he got into a good high school and university.
So after-school classes can help kids be more successful in study.
O
R
E
O
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Disagree
Too many after-school classes are not good for kids' development.
Too many after-school classes could make students stressed out.
They don't have their own time to relax such as listening to music or watching a movie. They don't have time to think for themselves, either.
After-schol classes are not good for kids mental and physical health.
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E
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Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Brainstorm more reasons
Agree
Disagree
learn exam skills
get into a good high school
develop the hobbies
make more new friends
be good for future
get into a good university
too much pressure
cause a lot of stress
don't have time to relax
not good for kids' heal