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Uint 4 Why don't you talk to your parents?
Writing(3a-3b)
Learning Objectives
At the end of this class, we will be able to:
1.We are able to write a passage to express our opinions(观点) and reasons(原因).
2.We can master some writing skills,such as the outline(框架), good linking words(连接词) and better sentence patterns(句型结构).
Lead in
Watch a video and answer the questions:
1.What is the matter with the girl?
2.What does the girl’s parents ask her to do?
Pre-writing
2mins
He didn't pass the math test again.
They ask her to take after-school classes.
1.What after-school classes do you usually take?
2.What do you think of after-school classes?
Should children take after-school classes?
3mins
Time for debating(辩论)
Should children take after-school classes?
If you have yellow card, you think children should take after-school classes,discuss(讨论) and write down at least 3 reasons.
If you have red card, you think children shouldn't take after-school classes,discuss and write down at least 3 reasons.
(Try to use first,second,third...)
help us get better grades.
help us compete better in study.
learn more exam skills.
should spend more time and get into a better university.
Too much pressure is not good for children's development.
We won't have time to do the things we love to do.
Life should be colorful,not just about grades.
After-classes are too expensive for some families.
After-classes reduce children's learning indepence
We can be a successful person.
3a
A magazine interviewed some parents about after-school classes for children.Read the opinions below and make notes on your own opinions.
1."After-school classes can help kids get into a good university." Agree:
I think Kids ________take after-school classes.
Disagree:
I_______think kids should take after-school classes.
2."I want my child to be a successful person.
3."It's good for children to start learning from a young age."
Why should children take after-school classes?
Your opinions
should
don't
Let's write to the magazine to show your opinion on after-school classes.
Learn the writing outline(写作框架)
Do you know Hamburger Structure?
a good structure for argumentation
(议论文)
(总结)
Opinion
Sample
As a junior high student,I don't agree kids should take after-school classes.
Firstly, too much pressure is not good for childen’s development.Nowadays, childen get enough stress from school,such as taking tests, taking classes and doing much homework. Secondly, We won't have time to do the things we love.I have a good friend who loves drawing,however, she gave up drawing because she was busy with after-school classes.Thirdly, Life should be colorful,not just about grades.After school,we can exercise or do things we love.For example, we can go to the movies,hang out with friends,and go to the nature to feel its beauty.
In short,Athough it is normal to want successful children,it is even more important to have happy children.
shouldn't
pressure
development
stress
have time
gave up
colorful
grades
exercise
hang out
Can you "make" your own "hamburger"?
Reason2
5mins
As a junior high student,______ kids shouldn’t take after-school classes.
___________, too much pressure is not good for children’s development.Nowadays, childen get enough stress from school,such as taking tests, taking classes and doing much homework.______________,We won’t have time to do the things we love to do. ___________, I have a good friend who loves drawing,however, she gave up drawing because she was busy with after-school classes.___________, Life should be colorful,not just about grades.After school,we can exercise or do things we love.For instance, we can go to the movies,hang out with friends,and go to the nature to feel its beauty.
__________,Although it is normal to want successful children,it is even more important to have happy children.
I think
In my opinion, I think/agree/believe...
It is important/necessary/fair/unfair for sb to...
There is no need for sb to do sth.
Although....
...so that....
If I....,I will/ won't...
We can/should...
For example/instance,I have...
In my opinion,I agree kids shouldn’t take after-school classes. Here are the reasons.
First of all, having too much pressure is not good for childen.Nowadays, childen get enough stress from school,they take tests,take classes and do much homework.Also,
We won’t have time to do the things we love to do. What's more,I have a good friend,she loves drawing,however, she gave up drawing because she was busy with after-school classes.Last but not least, Life should be colorful,not just about grades.After school,we can exercise or do things we love.For instance, we can go to the movies,hang out with friends,and go to the nature to feel its beauty.
All in all, it is normal to want successful children,it is even more important to have happy children.
用it作形式主语来改写句子
用such as 改写句子
改写成定语从句
用although改写句子
It is not good for chilren to have too much pressure.
children get enough stress from school,such as taking tests, taking classes and doing much homework.
I have a good friend who loves drawing.
Although it is normal to want successful children,it is even more important to have happy children.
3b
Write a letter to the magazine to express your opinions on after-school classes for children. Use the following expressions to help you.
As a good saying goes:"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."
(只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻)
Study is important, but don't forget to have fun.
(劳逸结合,事半功倍)
Emotional goal
Must do:
1Write a letter to your friend to tell him or her your opinion on after-school classes.
Choose to do:
1.As a reporter, you ask at least 3 classmates about the opinion on after-school classes,and the reasons why they think so.
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