读后续写之动作、情绪、环境和主旨描写讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写完整版资料包 一、动作描写 1.精选动词，精准描述 glance stare gaze glimpse shout cry yell scream smile laugh whisper murmur rush dash jump/spring to one's feet/struggle to one's feet 2.添加副词和介词短语来修饰动词 adverbs:tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/desperately/fiercely(fight) violently/swiftly in+n:in terror/excitement/shock/sorrow/in a low(weak/sweet) voice with+情感名词：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fear with+身体部位：with its sharp eyes/her shaky hand/her pale lips 例子：Suddenly，a moving dot(点) was spotted. As it drew nearer，Jane saw it clearly."The helicopter,“Jane murmured, sprang up and rushed to the center of an open area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately and yelled at the helicopter with excitement. To her great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon afterwards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out. The moment Tom's eyes fell upon her, Jane threw herself into his arms."Honey, Never will I leave you again."Jane sobbed. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly. 3.构造动作链：并列谓语动词A and B或者A，B and C。 （1）上车=拦车+上车+告诉目的地 He stopped the taxi, jumped into it and told the driver,“Go to the police station, please.” （2）跳入湖里=冲向湖边+脱掉衣服+跳入水中 The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water. （3）抱住儿子=冲向前+蹲下+一把抱住 She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms. （4）歌手唱歌=扫视观众+深吸一口气+开始演唱 The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. 5. The little boy said sorry to his mother. （5）The little boy hung his head and said sorry to his mother. （6）Jane rush to the rock, climb onto it and waver her yellow blouse mayly. 4.构造动作面：把动作和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。 （1）Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling,“You're such an idiot.”(burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。） （2）Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, cold and hungry. （3） They sat on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy. （4） Looking straigh