2024届3月长沙四区一模读后续写精讲--陌生人的相互治愈 讲义

分析材料哪些信息可以呼应 - 筛选可以使用的词汇：一般是和线索、引起矛盾出现的事物、导致矛盾升级的事物有关的词汇 - 找出矛盾（要解决的问题） - 明确氛围和环境 - 找到“续写两句话”没有提到的情节，但是却可以点明、反衬、暗示某种品质，比如值得庆祝、纪念和令人悲伤、后悔的事情 - 找到是否有值得主人公反思、牢记的（某个亲人、朋友、同学、老师说的话，可以在关键情节时激励主人公） - 找到是否有值得主人公怀念的情形 读后续写原题目呈现： The notice was posted next to the mailboxes in the apartment building I had just moved into. “A Mitzvah (善行) for Mrs. Green,”【主题词】 it read, “Sign up to drive Mrs. Green in 3B home from her chemotherapy (化疗) treatments twice a month.”【Mrs. Green是谁？】 Since I wasn’t a driver, I couldn’t add my name, but the word “mitzvah” was always wandering in my thoughts after I went upstairs. It’s a Hebrew word that means “to do a good deed”. But according to my grandma, it also had another meaning. This was the one she was always pointing out to me because she noticed that I thought it a shame to let people do things for me. “Linda, it’s a blessing to do a mitzvah for someone else, but sometimes it’s a blessing to let another person do something for you.” 【融洽 - 呼应材料“引起主人公思考和启发的话语”】 【思考：为什么让别人帮你的忙也是一种善意？】 One evening, snowflakes had been falling past my window for several hours when the time to leave for class came. I labored to the bus stop, reaching it just as a bus went by. For an hour, I prayed desperately that a bus would come. Then I gave up. The wind at my back pushed me towards home. Even if I wanted to ask someone for a good deed, which I did not, there wasn’t a soul on the street.【你会注意到：到这里都没提到Mrs Green】 But as I pushed the door of my apartment open, I found myself face to face with a woman at the mailbox with a set of keys in her hand. Obviously she had a car and was going out. In that split second, desperation overcame my pride and I blurted (脱口而出), “Could you possibly give me a lift?” An odd look crossed her face and she agreed without hesitation. l【融洽 - 呼应了前文“sometimes it’s a blessing to let another person do something for you”】 l【你会注意到：到这里都没提到Mrs Green，但是却提到了这个a woman，还不是可以猜测她就是Mrs Green】 On our way to my school, she spoke so warmly that I felt comf