2024届3月天域全国名校协作体读后续写讲评- 自画像讲义

读后续写真题呈现： Self-Portrait     Alia was disappointed to find herself in the drawing studio. She had been sick with the flu during the week when everyone else got to pick their classes. She had hoped for Astronomy or Marine Biology, but they were full by the time she got to choose. She loved everything about science, from the way it used facts and formulas to how it revealed the basic nature of things. But art was so . . un-scientific.     The first class project was self-portraits. Some students were drawing self-portraits using mirrors. Others were working from photographs. Alia glanced at the incomplete sketches, feeling like a cat in a dog show. But she had no choice. Hesitantly, she lifted a pencil, only to pause before the canvas. Confusion and reluctance were evidently written on her face; she had no idea how to proceed with her strokes.     The teacher came up to Alia's easel(画架). Seemingly having noticed her trouble, he sat next to her.     "Every portrait begins with a circle, " he said. "Then you create a series of lines.”  老师展示To demonstrate, he drew a group of small, quick portraits. He began each one with a circle, some straight lines, and a triangle to determine where the eyes, nose, and chin should go. To Alia's amazement, each portrait on the paper took form. Alia had never thought about it, but the features of everyone's face were in the same spots. "Go ahead and give it a try." The teacher handed the pencil back to her.     Taking a deep breath, Alia began her own self-portrait. She drew the basic form of a head, the way she had been shown. From there, she used lines to plot the features of her face. She had to take note of each detail, with each stroke, line and curve demanding her close attention. One wrong measurement could throw off the whole portrait. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The process took patience and precision. _____________________________________________________________________ Admiring her work, Alia suddenly realized