内容正文:
中考作文分类练习之写人叙事类
(2023·江苏省盐城市·历年真题)
在人生的旅程中,亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行,助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛,请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with?
2. Why do you like being with him/her/it?
(Give two or three reasons.)
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注意事项:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You've always been my sunshine. I like being with you,
参考范文
Being with You
You've always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. ①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.
Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don't feel nervous any more.
You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. ②I hope I'll be with you forever.
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文;时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
【结构布局】
引言:承接短文开头,引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品;
中心:按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因,至少给出两、三个原因,可列举具体的事例;
结尾:表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
【高分词汇】
①be ready to help sb.乐于帮助某人
②thanks to多亏,由于
③not…any more不再
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【高分句型】
①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)
②I hope I'll be with you forever.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
(2023·江苏省·同步练习)学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will