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读后续写 考前突击
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结构 内容 语言
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叙事 衔接
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灵魂拷问:这个动作什么时候发生?
《Right here, right now》
现在,立刻,马上
immediately in a flash
at that moment without delay/hesitation
《后来》
然后
..., (and) then... /afterwards after that/later on before long,...很快
Finally, … /Eventually, …
《卡路里》
“每天起床第一句”
early in the morning the next morning/day
Before long, an ambulance arrived!
It wasn’t long before an ambulance arrived!
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一… 就… as soon as
the moment +句子
On/Upon doing sth, …. when… / No sooner… than…Hardly…,
The moment we arrived at the farm,
On/Upon arriving at the farm, what came
into sight were varieties of fresh vegetables and
fruit trees.
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突然
A was doing xx, when B did xx …
I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around
when something unpleasant caught my eye.
I was about to leave when something unpleasant caught my eye.
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《Right here, right now》
《后来》
《卡路里》
4. “一…就…”,好“突然”!
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点睛 升华
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① 幡然醒悟,花式REALIZE,告别一“I”到底
经历作主语This special experience in someone else’s room made me realize
made me realize that forgiveness is a
forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
主从作主语What happened that day kind of virtue.
强调句 It was the special experience
that
made me realize forgiveness is a kind
of virtue.
倒装句
Not until then did I realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
Only then did I realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
强调句+状从
Now I’m proud of what I look like and
much happier because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.【人与自我】
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REALIZE升级
It suddenly
dawned on me that
…
Only then did
it dawn on me that
…
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From then on, I would
people like ... Only in this way could
try my best to help
help ach other in
② From then on 落实行动
more and more people
the future.
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From then on,
Bernard(视角转换) made up his mind to help someone who
needs help. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.【2020年山东卷】
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From that day on
, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach
out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness th