突破11 读后续写-决胜高考·备战2024年高考英语考试题型专项击破（新高考专用）

突破11 读后续写 第一部分：重点难点 重点掌握读后高分标准 故事要围绕主要人物展开。详细刻画人物角色及其情感。有效使用连接成分,结构紧凑。运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动。第一段和第二段的内客衔接自然,逻辑合理通顺。续写内容与所给短文融洽度高,语言风格保持一致,思想积极上。 重点掌握运用描写 环境描写，肖像描写，动作描写，语言描写，心理描写 掌握语言升级 非谓语动词/with 复合结构/双形容，虛拟语气，倒装句/强调句/定从，What和 It句型 常用修辞（比喻，拟人，排比，夸张等） 掌握写作步骤 Step1浏览所给信息,确定大意主题一落点 Step2梳理已知段落,确定主要情节一重点 Step3借助段落开头,确定续 Step4刻画细节冲突,优美连表达一亮点 Step5做到首尾呼应,结构完整合理一基本点 第二部分：易错失分 不注意读后续写高分标准而失分 故事没有围绕主要人物展开了，不能够详细刻画人物角色及其情感，没有有效使用连接成分，结构不紧凑，没有运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写不够生动，第一段和第二段的内容衔接不自然，逻辑不合理不通顺，续写内容与所给短文融洽度不高。 没有掌握写作技巧而失分 环境描写；肖像描写；动作描写；语言描写；心理描写在文章中找不到。人物和人物之间的冲突；人物和环境之间的冲突。 文章没有升格语言而失分 非谓语动词；with复合结构；形容词作状语；特殊句式；虚拟手段；常用修辞手法没有正确应用。 没有亮点句子而失分 情节设计不符合生活实际和文章逻辑，太过离奇，叙述力不精炼、不生动、不连贯，对话太多，书面化的长句太多。 第三部分：猜题押题 猜题押题理由 根据新高考三年的考情分析，读后续写的阅读材料一般以350词以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主，偶有少量议论文。考生要在此文的后面续写约150词左右的文字与前文构成一个完整的故事。读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是要在所给段落开头和所标出关键词的帮助下完成续写部分(150词左右)。其中，段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导你的思路向某个方面发展，所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶，要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。体裁多为记叙文，时态为过去时，预计2024年高考读后续写考查形式仍会延续其考查形式。为此，特推出以下读后续写题，达到事半功倍的效果。 （一） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was eight years old and wasn’t aware of all the arrangements being made for our journey as a family to London in 1950. My mother was in great pain and wished to visit specialists in London. My father reluctantly had to sell our property in Queensland. The day before we boarded the ship, Father unwillingly said goodbye to his five-year-old cattle dog, Spider, who was loved by us all. Father’s friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas, as he had been getting to know Spider for many weeks. Six weeks later, an airletter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. Sandy had advertised constantly on ABC and other regional newspapers. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never found. It seems Spider just kept running and searching for us. As he was cattle dog, my father thought he would shoe or dingo-trapped, because of his appearance. But our family thought that Father held a secrets