应用文专刊寄语倡导低碳生活讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习

假定你是校英文报的主编李华，最近准备出一期关于“倡导低碳生活”的专刊。请为专刊写一篇寄语，内容包括: 1.专刊的意义; 2.专刊的内容: 3.寄予的希望。 注意: 1.写作词数应为 80 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答 Dear Readers, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Warm regards. Li Hua Editor-in-chief 一. 写作思路： 1. 激活话题词汇：  （1）低碳生活-环保词汇： • eco-friendly, environmentally friendly, green• 3Rs: reduce, reuse, recycle• reduce energy consumption• cut down on carbon footprint （2）专刊- 报刊词汇• issue 报纸杂志的某一期• edition 版次；一期• column 专栏• section 板块 2. 翻译题干中的关键信息：倡导低碳生活 -Advocating a low-carbon lifestyle 3. 语言风格：formal被动语态，主从复合句，非谓语 4. 谋篇布局： ①意义：略写- aim, mission, meaning ②内容：详写practical tips, inspiring stories, latest researches, online discussion forum, etc. ③ 希望：略写对专刊的希望- wish the issue to be well received 对读者的呼吁- call on readers to take actions 期望主要为：为实现绿色未来服务 二. 范文润饰 【官方范文】 Dear Readers,    As the chief editor ofour school’s English newspaper, I’m pleased to introduce our latest issue focused on advocating a low-carbon lifestyle. This edition’s significance liesin its aim to inspire a commitment to environmental conservation among us.     Featuring articles on the benefits of reducing carbon emissions,tips on sustainable living, and success stories of individuals and communities making a real difference, we provide a comprehensive guide to eco-friendly practices.   We aspire for this issue to serve as a catalyst for positive change, encouraging everyone to  take actionable steps towards a greener future. Warm regards, Li Hua Editor-in-chief | 官方范文评析 1. 谋篇布局： 个人觉得，范文的第一段过长，第二段略短，建议把第一点“专刊意义”放在第二段（body paragraph）当中。 2. 措辞简洁： 范文中第二段的“Featuring articles onthebenefits ofreducing carbon emissions,tips on sustainable living, and success stories of individuals and communities makingareal difference”这个非谓语句子本身很长，又涵盖了三个例子。 作为阅读理解的语篇是没问题，但是是作为参考范文，对于学生的背诵和仿写，太难了。It's not quite student-fri