UNIT 2 Section Ⅴ Part Ⅰ WRITING WORKSHOP-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（北师大版2019）

　 Section Ⅴ　WRITING WORKSHOP，VIEWING WORKSHOP， READING CLUB 1 & READING CLUB 2 Part Ⅰ　WRITING WORKSHOP UNIT2 学范文 教材原文 Iron Hammer Lang Ping is one of China's most recognised athletes. She has been a volleyball star for more than thirty-five years and has contributed greatly to① the sport, which has made her the most popular figure in China's volleyball history.[1] Lang Ping played on China's national volleyball team during the 1980s. Her strong and powerful② playing style earned her the name “Iron Hammer”③. Lang was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics, the 1982 World Championship and the 1981 and 1985 World Cups.Lang Ping became a star in China because of her success, her positive attitude and her ability to take on challenges④. After retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.However, Lang Ping's commitment to Chinese volleyball brought her back home. In 1995, she returned to become the coach of the women's national team when the team was struggling⑤. Under her leadership, the team came back to the top, winning the 2015 World Cup.[2] That year, Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards. She was also named “Touching China Personality”of 2016.She is loved not only because of her devotion to her career, but also because of her huge influence on the sport of volleyball.[3] 学结构 第一部分开门见山，引入话题。 第二部分具体介绍了郎平的生平事迹。 第三部分总体评价了郎平这个人物。 学语言 一、句式美 [1]which引导非限制性定语从句，并且其中含有“make＋宾语＋宾语补足语”的结构。 [2]动词-ing形式短语作状语。 [3]not only...but also连接并列成分。 二、词汇美 ①contribute to 贡献于，用greatly修饰加深程度。 ②两个形容词体现了郎平打球之强。 ③earn sb sth为某人赢得某物 ④take on challenges承担责任 ⑤使用struggle，表明当时的中国队还不强大。 仿写作 题目要求 假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史感兴趣，并请你介绍你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 1．该人物是谁； 2．该人物的主要贡献； 3．该人物对你的影响。 注意： 1．词数80左右，文章开头和结束语已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 解题步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：________________； 第二段：______________； 第三段：________________。 表明文章的主旨 介绍人物故事 表达自己的感想 2．二仿语言规范美观 (1)我知道你对中国历史感兴趣。 I know that _______________________________． (2)我写信是想向你介绍一位名人。 I'm writing ______________________________． (3)那时，皇家人民从农民和商人那里掠夺食物和财富。 At that time，the royal people ______________________ from the farmers and businessmen. you are interested in Chinese history to introduce a famous man to you took food and treasures (4)当情况变得严重时，他挺身而出，带领穷人进行反击。 When the situation became serious，he stood out, _______________________ ______. (5)他充满正义，渴望给人们带来和平的生活。 He _________________ and ____________________________________. (6)我被他的精神所感动，我总是以他人为先，帮助他们，甚至为他们而战。 I _____________________ and I always think others first, _________________ ____________________． leading poor people to fight back was full of justice had a desire to bring people a peaceful life was moved by his spirit helping them and even fighting for them 3．三仿句间过渡自然 (1)用含有动词-ing形式短语作状语的句子升级句(1)和句(2)。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2)用动词-ed形式短语作状语升级句(6)。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Knowing that you are interested in Chinese history, I'm writing to introduce a famous man to you. Moved by his spirit, I always think others first, helping them and even fighting for them. 4．誊写 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Dear Jim， Knowing that you are interested in Chinese history, I'm writing to introduce a famous man to you. He is Caocao, the leader of Wei. At that time，the royal people took food and treasures from the farmers and businessmen.When the situation became serious，he stood out, leading poor people to fight back. That was where he amazed me. He was full of justice and had a desire to bring people a peaceful life. Moved by his spirit, I always think others first, helping them and even fighting for them. Yours， Li Hua 沙场点兵 假定你是某校高二学生李华，将要参加一场市里举办的以“我有一个梦 想”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下： 1．自我介绍； 2．你的梦想； 3．说明理由(至少两点)； 4．如何实现。 注意： 1．词数80左右，文章开头和结束语已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good evening，everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all.Thank you for your listening. I am Li Hua.My dream is to be a writer.I dream of one day being able to write a heart-pounding text that locks all my joys and sorrows.One day I will become a writer like Mo Yan and win the Nobel Prize for literature，winning honour for our country.In order to realize my dream，I must insist on writing，study hard and be admitted to my ideal university，which will lay a solid foundation for realizing my dream of being a writer.I believe that as long as I don't give up，my dream will come true. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ U N I T 2 　 S U C C E S S $$