Unit 5 Section Ⅴ Writing—— 动物介绍类说明文-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高一英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 5 Into the wild Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Section Ⅴ　Writing—— 动物介绍类说明文　 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre high is grey in color and has a long trunk and two big ears usually lives in valleys Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 There are enough grass or leaves Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 谢谢观看！ Unit 5　Into the wild 英 语 必修 第一册 [文体感知] 本单元的写作任务是描写一种动物，属于事物说明文；以具体事物为说明对象，将事物的“是什么”作为说明重点，对事物的状态、性质、类别、结构构造、用途功能、发展变化等特征，进行科学说明。写一篇好的说明文应解决好以下几个问题： 1．要抓住说明对象的特征； 2．要合理地安排说明顺序； 3．要采用恰当的说明方法； 4．要运用合理的说明结构； 5．语言要准确、简洁、通俗。 有关动物介绍的说明文，主要介绍动物的形态、习性、分布、品种、功用、饲养以及历史发展状况等。具体来说主要包括以下几个方面： 1．外貌； 2．栖息地； 3．迁徙情况； 4．食物； 5．其他信息。 [增分佳句] 1．Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost, making animals lose their homes to live in. 2．The giant panda is an animal that/which lives in the mountains. 3．The giant panda feeds/lives on bamboo shoots. 4．As forests are being cut down, its habitat is becoming smaller and smaller. 5．To protect pandas, measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves. 6．If we don't protect them, they'll probably die out soon. 7．Finally，we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals. 8．Many fields are being turned into desert, which makes the animals living there have no place to find food to eat. 9．Many animals are being killed so that some of them are in danger of dying out. 10．In a word, we must take some measures to prevent rare animals from extinction. [典题示例] 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想了解大象。请你给他写封邮件，根据下面的提示介绍一下大象这种动物。 1．是陆地上最大的动物，出生时约有90千克重，一米高。 2．到12岁时，就不再生长了。皮肤是灰色的，有长鼻子和两只大耳朵，通常生活在河谷中，以草和树叶为食。每天喝大量的水。 3．经常群居，互相照顾；非洲大象每年迁徙。 4．大象现在是并且将来也会是最伟大的生物之一。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　学会审题谋篇 第二步　保基础分——会写基本句 1．大象出生时重约90千克，高约1米。 The elephant ______________________________________________ ___________ when it is born. 2．大象的皮肤是灰色的，有长鼻子和两只大耳朵。 The elephant ___________________________________________． 3．大象通常生活在河谷中。 The elephant ________________________． 4．这些河谷中有足够多的草或者树叶。 ________________________________ in these valleys. 第三步　创设亮点(包括词汇美和句式美) 5．用省略句改写句1 _________________________________________________________________________________ 6．用定语从句改写句2 ________________________________________________________ The elephant weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born. The elephant，whose color is grey，has a long trunk and two big ears. 7．用where引导的定语从句把句3和句4合成一个句子 _____________________________________________________________________________ 第四步　衔接成篇得满分 Dear Peter， The elephant is the largest animal on land today.It weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born.When it is 12 years old，it does not grow any more.The elephant，whose color is grey，has a long The elephant usually lives in valleys where there are enough grass or leaves. trunk and two big ears.It usually lives in valleys where there are enough grass or leaves，for it mainly feeds on grass and leaves.It drinks a lot of water every day.The elephants in Africa migrate to find nice food every year.Usually living in groups and caring for each other，the elephant is and will continue to be one of the greatest creatures. Yours， Li Hua 根据要求写一篇有关濒危动物——金丝猴的短文。 1．栖息地：中国。 2．外貌：金黄色，有点灰；尾巴和身体一样长。 3．生活环境：海拔1 500－3 000米的森林。 4．生活习性：群居，吃水果、干果等。 5．它们的数量减少了，呼吁人们保护金丝猴。 注意：词数80左右。 【参考范文】 The Golden Monkey Golden monkeys live only in China. They are protected by Chinese government. Their fur is golden and a bit grey. Their tails are as long as their bodies. The male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller. Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1，500－3，000 metres above the sea level. They like living in family groups. They feed on fruits, nuts and so on. But now their number is getting smaller and smaller. Our government has built some nature reserves to protect them. We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting golden monkeys. We also hope that people will stop hunting golden monkeys. $$