2024年3月苏锡常镇高三一模读后续写爱的传承：小红罐讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习

这篇特点在于没有跌宕起伏的情节，没有非常明显的冲突，也没有变化多端的情感，而是潺潺泉水般的回忆和情感的推进。这反而让学生更苦恼于“无话可说”或“车轱辘话来回转”。 通过近三年的苏锡常镇一模的续写题对比，发现了一个共同点，都是“托物言志”，用一个物件串联起整个故事，成为“意象”，最后续写要通过这一意象所承载的意义来呈现主题。 例如： 1.(2022苏锡常镇一模--原本着迷于潮流鞋的我最终买下一双鞋送给爸爸) 1.I was fascinated by these gleaming shoes and couldn't take my eyes off them. I was about to spend all my ten dollars on them when I recollected Dad's worn-out shoes. The gleam of the loafers started to dull. I took shoes of my dad’s size from the clearance rack and darted to the checkout counter.     Staring at father’s weather-beaten face and tears glistening in his eyes, I felt a strong sense of relief welling up in my heart. It dawned on me that being on trend wasn’t important at all, but giving dad a pair of warm shoes was. 2.(2023年苏锡常镇一模--两个小女孩用帮助老妇人跑差事换来美味的果子) After waving goodbye to the lady, the girls enjoyed their treat happily. The juice that ran down their mouths was as sweet as the feeling they had inside. 过去练习过的续写篇章中也有诸多案例： 3. I was happy that both of them received the best gift for Christmas. For Jane--a scarf to keep warm and for David-- a taste of happiness and giving. 4. Hearing mom’s words, Niesha gazed at the precious blue ribbon, sunk in thought. She imagined the scene where her mom tried her best to overcome her fears and deliver a fantastic speech. 对于这类情节温和、情感细腻，又以一物承载意义的读后续写，关注点在构造情节细节和语言表达两方面。 续写原文： 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写原段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One of my favorite possessions is a little red can. It sits among my collections, looking somewhat old and out of place. But this can is special. It has a history. It was dear to me when I was younger, but mean even more to me now. I've always loved to visit my grandparents in Cleburne, Texas, and as anyone in the family can tell you, there is always a gathering around the dining room table for meals and conversations so that we can keep in touch closely. It is important to keep in touch with the family members since we are busy with our own business, so my family members keep the tradition to have the gat