内容正文:
2024南通二模应用文写作:
假如你是李华。你的英国朋友 Ryan 来信了解你校英语校本课程(the English language school-based curriculum)开设情况。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括:
1. 课程简介;
2. 开设情况;
3. 学生反响。
如果你对校本课程一无所知,那就“望文生义”好了。根据题目给出的英文关键词school-based可知,校本意思就是基于学校,基于学校自身实际情况,也就是以校为本。校本课程就是基于学校实际自主开发的课程。
第一段是写信目的,平时的积累可以用上。
Dear Ryan,
I'm writing in response to your inquiry about the English language school-based curriculum at our school. (17 words)
第二段是课程简介和开设情况。课程简介可以从课程开发目的、内容、意义等抽象角度概括,开设情况则可以从课程名称、实施对象、时间、地点和教材编写等具象方面说明。Eric这样写:
This curriculum is geared towards the specific needs of different grade levels. It is a welcome addition to the otherwise dull national curriculum. Timetabled for one period weekly, the curriculum provides us with a refreshing communication experience. (37 words)
首句说校本课程开发目的是满足不同年级学生的特定需求,使用词块be geared towards。be tailored to也是一个很棒的选择。gear本意是车辆的排挡,tailor本意是裁缝,两个都是隐喻。
第2句说校本课程的意义,它是国家课程的有益补充,避免了课程的枯燥乏味。这一点考生不易想到,otherwise也未必会用。
第3句写课程开设情况。timetable是动词用法,refreshing让你“耳目一新”。
第三段写学生反响,这是考生的强项。Eric这样写:
The curriculum has been received with great enthusiasm. Every time we turn the pages, we feel a connection with our teachers and become more motivated. (25 words)
校本课程使用的教材是全体老师智慧的结晶。当你翻开书页,你与老师之间建立了情感联系。
最后是结尾。作为书信,写信人需要与收信人互动一下:
Do you have any school-based curricula? Write me back. (9 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Ryan,
Learning that you are interested in our English language school-based curriculum, I’ll give you some detailed /relevant information. (I’m more than delighted to learn that you are interested in...)
The curriculum is divided into three parts, which is tailored to all students. There is no doubt that a number of meaning activities have been held to enrich students’ lives and broaden our horizons. Many students get involved in it enthusiastically and think highly of it .It provides a valuable platform to learn English well. The curriculum are available twice a week and gains popularity amo