读后续写易错重难集训-2024届高考英语二轮复习

（6）读后续写——2024届高考英语二轮复习易错重难集训【新高考版】 重难点知识分析 1. 高分标准 （1）故事围绕主要人物展开 （2）详细刻画人物角色及其情感 （3）有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑 （4）运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动 （5）第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑合理通顺 （6）续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风格保持一致，思想积极向上 2. 写作技巧 （1）增加细节 环境描写；肖像描写；动作描写；语言描写；心理描写 （2）营造冲突 人物和人物之间的冲突；人物和环境之间的冲突 （3）升格语言 非谓语动词；with复合结构；形容词作状语；特殊句式；虚拟手段；常用修辞手法 3. 写作步骤 Step 1 浏览所给信息，确定大意主题——落点 (who，what，where，when，why，文章大意，表达主题) Step 2 梳理已知段落，确定主要情节——重点 (beginning，development，climax，ending) Step 3 借助段落开头，确定续写内容——突破点 (研读续写段落的开头语) Step 4 刻画细节冲突，优化衔接表达——亮点 (添加细节，营造冲突) Step 5 做到首尾呼应，结构完整合理——基本点 4. 两个注意 （1）情节设计要符合生活实际和文章逻辑，避免太过离奇 （2）叙述力求精炼、生动、连贯，对话不要太多，书面化的长句不宜太多 1. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 7-year-old Tommy Wilkinson's childish desires got the best of him. He envied his best friend Eric his new fancy bicycle. One day, Tommy gathered the courage to demand the bicycle. His parents refused him. But his dad, Peter Wilkinson, made a suggestion: "You can get the bike if you save up for it." Without a second thought, Tommy decided to set aside money from his allowance (零花钱) every day to raise the amount he needed: $600. Every day, the little boy made sure he placed some money into his piggy bank. After almost two years, the day finally arrived. "Finally!" Tommy joyfully shouted as he dropped the piggy bank to the floor. Inside was S830! More than the S600 he was aiming for! Instantly, the excited boy asked his dad to take him to the bike store. On their way to the store, Tommy accompanied his dad to the supermarket to buy some groceries. They were lining up at the checkout when Tommy noticed an old woman with a little girt in a wheelchair. The old lady dropped her groceries on the road. She looked helpless, and since she was holding the little girl's wheelchair, she couldn't pick them up. Tommy quickly approached the woman. "Hey, let me help you. Where is your car?" he asked the woman whose name was Barbara. The woman told him that they lived across the street and didn't have a car. "I'll carry them for you," Tommy said. On the