读后续写 常用写作技巧 讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习

读后续写的常用写作技巧 2024 一.读后续写的错误反思: 1. 原材料理解有偏差 2. 给出的两个首句理解有误,导致情节偏差 3. 主旨偏差/挖掘不够/结尾不精彩 4. 情节详略不得当 5. 随意添加人物 6. 对话过多 7. 动词时态错 8. 谓语非谓语错 9. 缺时间衔接,动作衔接 10. 句式简单,未使用从句/非谓语/with/无灵主语/独立主格/倒装句/强调句 11. 缺必要的动作描写,心理描写 12. 字数不足 13. 书写不工整 二.Tips: 1. 每段先设计好三个微情节,这样续写时才能够详略得当,避免某个细节着墨太多。 2. 分析给出的两个首句,确定接下来的人物、地点、情节走向。 三.读后续写的常用写作技巧 ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1. 现在/过去分词作状语 2. 形容词(短语)做状语 3. with+n.做方式状语 4. 独立主格结构做状语 5. 无灵主语 6. 动作链 7. 动作+情绪描写 8. 时间/动作衔接 9. 非限定从补充说明 10. 叙事节奏 11. 强调句型 12. 倒装句 13. 思想+行动+(预期的)结果 14. 以同理心来设计人物的语言、动作、表情 15. 哲理感悟式/定格动作式/景色画面式结尾 ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1) 现在/过去分词作状语 她难过地跑回了房间。 Overwhelmed with a sense of sorrow, she ran back to her room in tears. 注意到一个陌生的家庭看起来焦虑和无助,她走近我们,问她能做什么。 Noticing a strange family looking anxious and helpless, she approached us and asked if there was anything she could do. 2) 形容词(短语)做状语 He smiled 不情愿地笑了 He forced an unwilling smile. She came back + hungry and exhausted又饿又累地 3) with+n.做方式状语 本心有余悸地说道。Ben said with a scare still in her voice 4) 无灵主语 father caught sight of the messy kitchen The messy kitchen came into his sight Father felt worried. Thousands of thoughts flooded into the worried fathers' mind. I was shocked by the news The news shot me like a bomb, leaving my brain blank and limbs frozen. 5) 动作链 She patted me on the shoulder She felt my sorrow and patted ..../ Feeling my sorrow, she patted me on the shoulder and said in a gentle voice... 6) 角色切换,多角度叙事 david哭了,我同情他. david的眼泪.. David’s tears triggered a sense of sympathy from the bottom of my heart. 我对于david的哭泣感到... I felt sympathetic to David’s sadness and sorry for my ignorance. 7) 动作+情绪描写 jack向妈妈道歉 悔恨的泪水从jack脸颊落下,jack拉住妈妈的手,低声一遍又一遍地说对不起 Regretful tears rolling down his cheeks, Jack held mother’s hands tightly and mumbled his apologies repeatedly. 8) 时间/动作衔接 Searching the road for stones, my eyes landed upon a brown beef burger/object. + No sooner had I caught sight of that than an idea flashed through my mind. 9) 每段的对话尽量不超过一处 “Thank you. Thank you very much” the old man said The old