内容正文:
读后续写:轮椅篮球
如何写好续写:
情节和主题 (菜谱)
叙事和写作技巧 (烹饪手法)
语料库 (原料)
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审题
One day, Bob took me to a wheelchair basketball game.
我看到的篮球比赛场景---
我的感受,情绪产生了巨大变化---
Bob鼓励我去找到自身价值
With Bob’s encouragement, I decided to have a try at my dream.
怎么尝试---
做的过程中的心理活动---
做的结果---
升华,道理
①It was an eye-opening experience for me.
②As I watched the players
controlling their wheelchairs
with incredible speed and precision,
my admiration for them grew.
③They displayed a level of determination and resilience
that inspired me.
①先整体评价某事物(这次观赛经历),再详细描述。
②某人一边做某事,一边油然而生某种情绪。
As I did(saw/heard/thought of/picked up) sth, my 情绪 grew.
如:看着亲手打理好的花园...,听到他们在身后嘲笑我...,看着乱糟糟的厨房...
③某人展现出的某种品质激励了我。Sb displayed a level of ...that inspired me.
(美好品质如:determination决心 resilience弹力,快速恢复的能力 persistence坚持不懈 perseveranceu不屈不挠)
我看到的篮球比赛场景---
我的感受,情绪产生了巨大变化---
One day, Bob took me to a wheelchair basketball game.
Bob ④quietly told me
that⑤ everything depended on my own attitude towards my disability,
that physical limitations didn’t have to be a barrier to pursuing my dreams,
and that the love for life could triumph over any difficulty.
His words ignited a spark within me.
笔记④平静而有力,深思熟虑后的发言。这同slowly, quickly一样也是一种叙事的节奏。
⑤ 语料:鼓励他人(需要我们自己也具备这样的人生态度,真实的最动人)
【一切取决于态度】
【某个缺陷或不利条件未必是追逐梦想的障碍】
【对生活的热爱能战胜困难】
【点燃火花】
Bob鼓励我去找到自身价值
With Bob’s encouragement, I decided to have a try at my dream.
⑥Instead of withdrawing into myself,
I focused on what I could achieve.
⑦Through endless training and firm commitment,
I began to adapt my skills to the world of wheelchair basketball.
笔记:⑥在付诸行动之前,先转变观念。观念先行,行动跟上。
人物发生变化句型:instead of doing
⑦怎么改变?客观(练习)+主观(投入)
怎么尝试---
做的过程中的心理活动---
做的结果---
⑧ It wasn’t an easy journey,
but with each milestone I reached,
my confidence improved,
and I rediscovered my passion for the game.
I set off on a new chapter of my life,
proving to myself and the world that a positive attitude can conquer any obstacle.
⑧语料 (可整段背诵)
【改变与