读后续写 被老师鼓励的写作 讲义+课件-2024届高三英语二轮复习

写作指导：A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. 得知获奖-- - 颁奖仪式--- 领奖，感受 I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. 老师祝贺--- 我表示感谢 --- 总结升华 读后续写：被老师鼓励的写作 1 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. ①On that seemingly ordinary day, my teacher suddenly informed me that I won the second prize and there would be an award presentation for the writing contest winners. ②It was really a delightful surprise. 笔记：①一种故事感 ②惊讶的情绪，略 得知获奖- 2 ③When the day finally arrived, I found myself standing among a group of talented writers. As each winner was called to the stage, applause and cheers filled the air. Walking up to receive my award, I felt a surge of pride and accomplishment, knowing that my hard work and dedication had been recognized. ③描写重要场景：基本动作+环境描写+心理活动；骄傲的情绪，详 语料【颁奖仪式/取得成就】 颁奖仪式--- 领奖，感受 3 I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. On seeing me, he gave me a sincere congratulation ④and shared his joy in seeing me succeed. I expressed my heartfelt appreciation ⑤for pushing me beyond my comfort zone, for believing in my ability to tell stories, and for exploring my love for writing. ⑥(It was a moment of deep connection and mutual respect.) ④扩句 ⑤扩句。亮点：在内容层面上，有不一样的思考。 语料【感谢，帮助】I expressed my heartfelt appreciation for pushing me beyond my comfort zone, for believing in my ability to tell stories, and for exploring my love for writing. ⑥角色A,B互动后的总结 老师祝贺--- 我表示感谢 --- ⑦That day, I left the office with a sense of confidence to continue pursuing my passion for writing, and the knowledge that with determination/persistence, even the most difficult and painful challenges could be conquered. ⑦升华：自信+热爱+决心=更好的我。 与实际生活产生关联，基于我们自己对生活的热爱、观察和思考。 语料 【特写镜头做结尾：更好的自我】某人离开了某地/朝家里走去/重新开车上路/又一次站上舞台/推开了一扇门，带着...(自信，决心，坚毅，坚持...)。 sb left s.p./hit the road again/stood on the stage，with a sense of confidence to continue pursuing my passion