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9B Unit 3 Task
A complaint letter
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Brainstorming:
What is your ideal robot like?
working
ability
…
batteries
quality
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Pre-writing:
What is Daniel’s ideal robot like?
Daniel wants to have a robot like this.
First, he expects his robot’s batteries to last __________.
Second, He thinks his robot should work _____________.
Next, he wants his robot help him with ____________.
Finally, he thinks his robot should be checked ___________.
2 months
24 hours a day
homework
every 6 months
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satisfied ?
not satisfied ?
Pre-writing:
Predict
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Robot model number HUGO123BB
Two weeks ago, I bought a robot from your shop. However, I am not satisfied with it at all.
First of all, I am unhappy with its batteries. They last for one week at most, so I have to change them often. I think they should last for at least ____________.
I think a robot should work ______________, and I want my robot _______________________. However, this robot is very lazy. I need to give it instructions all the time. Otherwise, I need to do everything myself.
The quality of this robot is not up to standard either. A good robot should only need checking _________________. My robot has already stopped working completely. I do not know what is wrong with it.
I regret having bought a robot like this. I would like to get my money back.
Yours faithfully,
Chen Dan
two months
24 hours a day
to help me with homework
every six months
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Part1 (paras1-2): feelings
Part2 (paras3-5): reasons / complaints
Part3 (para6): purpose / request
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How to write a complaint letter
Coherent 结构连贯不松散
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Robot model number HUGO123BB
Two weeks ago, I bought a robot from your shop. However, I am not satisfied with it at all.
First of all, I am unhappy with its batteries. They last for one week at most, so I have t