内容正文:
【范文学习】
假如你是李华,你校将组织校内留学生参观中国画展,请写一则通知发布在校园网上。内容包括:1.展览的时间和地点;2.展览内容;3.参观时的注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文赏析
To promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to visit the Chinese Painting Exhibition in the City Museum.
Running from Feb. 20 to March 20, the exhibition centers on the history of the traditional Chinese paintings and displays various famous paintings of exceptional beauty from different dynasties, from which you are expected to have a deep insight into the development of Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 pm, Feb. 25. Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
【谋篇布局】:从范文中归纳结构
第一段:介绍通知的目的,开始时间和事件。
第二段:活动介绍(可添加细节,如:时间,地点,活动内容)。
第三段:集中时间/开放时间和注意事项。
【功能句式】:尝试改写范文
第一段: 介绍通知的目的,开始时间和事件。
To promote (目的)......, our school is to arrange for sb. to do sth. (主动)To promote(目的)......an exhibition of (活动主题)...... will be held in (地点)...... on(时间).
(被动)改写:1. To promote traditional Chinese culture, an exhibition on Chinese paintings will be held in our City Museum.2.Aiming to/With the purpose of promote/promoting traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to pay a visit to the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
第二段: 活动介绍(可添加细节,如:时间,地点,内容)
改写: (时间)1. As scheduled, the exhibition will be held at the City Museum from Feb.20 to March 20.2.The exhibition will run from Feb.20 to March 20 in the City Museum.
改写:(内容)1. You will have the chance to explore a wide range of traditional Chinese painting including...........2.The exhibition focuses on the history of traditional Chinese paintings, presenting a variety of famous works of extraordinary beauty from different dynasties. Through this exhibition, it is anticipated that students will have a deeper understanding of the evolution and development of Chinese culture.
第三段:开放时间和注意事项
改写:
1. The exhibition, which is open to the public free of charge, will last a month.
2. The opening hours a