读后续写之动作描写技巧 导学案-2024届高三英语一轮复习作文专项

读后续写之动作描写微技巧 读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。其中最为重要的描写有五类：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言 Part I preview 预习1如何把以下句子写得更生动 (1) 老师表扬了我们。The teacher praised us. ____________________________________________________________________________ (2) 他掏钱给乞丐。He pulled out money to the beggar. ____________________________________________________________________________ (3) 他拥抱父母。He hugged his parents. ____________________________________________________________________________ 预习2 如何把以下句子写得更生动 (1) 女孩静坐 。The girl sat under the sunset _____________________________________________________________________________ (2) 孩子们读英语。The students were reading English. _____________________________________________________________________________ (3) 玛丽期待即将到来的考试。Mary looked forward to the coming exam. _____________________________________________________________________________ (4) 孩子们哭了。The children cried. _____________________________________________________________________________ Part II exercise Exercise A (归纳:_____________________________________________________) (1) 父亲做蛋炒饭。(He made fried rice） _____________________________________________________________________________ (2) 歌手唱歌(the singer sang.) _____________________________________________________________________________ (3) 我匆忙上学。(I hurried to the school.) _____________________________________________________________________________ Exercise C (归纳:___________________________________________________________) (1) 被狗咬过，他不敢靠近那只狗。 ______________________________________________________________________________ (2) 被现场吓坏了，他站在那里一动不动。 _______________________________________________________________________________ (3) 他们享受着美好的时光，聊着天，吃着东西，开着玩笑。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Exercise T (1) 我不假思索地跪在他身边，支持他。 ______________, I knelt down beside him and offered my support. (2)他羞愧内疚地点头。He nodded ___________________. (3)在我的支持和鼓励下，约翰设法站起来，继续一瘸一拐地向终点线走去。 ___________________________, John managed