Unit4 Stories and Poems单元话题写作__描述故事诗歌 练习课件 2023-2024学年冀教版英语九年级全册

单元话题写作 ——描述故事/诗歌 　　假设你是李华,这周你们在学校学习了如何写故事和诗歌,刘老师鼓励你们试着写一个故事或一首诗,你的朋友Tom不知道写哪一种,向你求助。请你根据提示给Tom写一封电子邮件给出你的建议。　 人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时 提示: 1.Which do you think are easier to write, stories or poems? 2.Why? 词数:80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Tom, How are you? I'm very happy to receive your e-mail.  Yours, Li Hua 【谋篇布局】 第一段:引出话题 ①You said you couldn't decide which one to write. ②It's very difficult/hard for you to choose which one to write. 第二段:给出建议及原因 ①Compared with a story, it doesn't have long passages. ②Practice can improve our writing skills. 第三段:表达自己对对方的期望 ①I'm sure you can write a good poem if you write poems because of your love. ②Practice makes perfect, and you should practice more. 【谋篇布局】 巧衔接 ①在写作时可以使用at the beginning, although等词汇衔接上下文。 ②写作时注意使用encourage sb. to do sth., I'm sure...等高级表达来提高文章的得分档次。 【句子升格】 A poem has only a few words. Every word has power and meaning.(用although升格)   【范文赏读】 Dear Tom,  How are you? I'm very happy to receive your e-mail. Ms. Liu encouraged us to try writing a story or a poem. You said you couldn't decide which one to write.   I think you'd better write a poem. At the beginning, I thought it was easier to write a story. But now I believe writing a poem is much easier. Because compared with a story, it doesn't have long passages. Although a poem has only a few words, every word has power and meaning. You are always saying interesting things. I'm sure you can write a good poem if you write poems because of your love. Yours, Li Hua  【学以致用】 　　假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语,在学习过程中遇到"程门立雪"(Cheng Men Li Xue)这一成语,不解其意。请根据下面图片提示,用英语给她回信,简要叙述这个成语故事,并谈谈自己的理解和感悟。 要求: 1. 语言规范,语句通顺,可适当发挥。 2. 词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 提示词:idiom成语;during the Northern Song Dynasty北宋时期;Cheng Yi程颐;have a nap小憩;disturb打扰;moved感动的;respect尊敬 Dear Lisa, I'm glad to hear from you.   Yours, Li Hua 答案 【句子升格】 Although a poem has only a few words, every word has power and meaning. 答案 【学以致用】 Dear Lisa,  I'm glad to hear