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【原题在线】 假如你是李华，你校将迎来一批英国交换生。在欢迎仪式上，就穿校服还是传统服装有不同意见。请你给活动负责人Richard写一封邮件，谈谈你的看法。内容包括： 1. 你的观点； 2. 原因。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Richard, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Mr. Richard, We have different opinions about what clothes to wear at the welcome ceremony. I agree to wear traditional Chinese clothes. Firstly, this is what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture. We Chinese pupils in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive while the school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem. On the contrary, it is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness and fascination of Chinese culture. The traditional Chinese clothes will make the occasion very Chinese . Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【文本分析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给学校欢迎英国交换生的仪式负责人Richard写一封邮件，谈谈自己对于在欢迎仪式上穿校服还是传统服装的想法。 【提示】1.词汇积累 意见：opinion→ idea 同意：agree to do→ approve of doing 首先：firstly→ first of all 展示：display → show 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We have different opinions about what clothes to wear at the welcome ceremony. 拓展句：We have different opinions about what clothes we are to wear at the welcome ceremony. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, this is what the British visitors are expecting.（运用了what引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】We Chinese pupils in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive while the school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give Chinese flavour.（运用了while引导的并列句） 【优秀习作】 （一） Dear Mr. Richard, Hearing that there wi