内容正文:
感谢信
(2023年湖南省部分名校联盟高三联考试题)假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(Work Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束,请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 外教的帮助;
3. 活动的反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Patrick,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Patrick,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.
It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show. It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc. Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. Most importantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence.
Many thanks for your time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信,感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
衷心的:sincere→heartfelt
感激:gratitude→appreciation
惊人的:amazing→fascinating
提供:offer→provide
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.
拓展句:Their performances which impressed prople definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc.(it is...that强调句型)
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