Module1 Unit 2 Writing课件-2023-2024学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

U2 Writing（2） 课前准备：1号本, notebook, exercise book, pens, group card, 作文积累本 1. Edit the passage by yourself and your group members. 2. Learn how to replace the word and use clauses correctly. 3. Learn the structure of introduction of a person. Learning goals Fill in the blanks with the correct forms. Lu Xun, _________ as one of the greatest modern writers in China, was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province in 1881. In 1904, he went to Japan and became a medical student, with the ____of improving people’s health and saving lives. He quit medical school. When he returned to China in 1908, he ____ a teaching job. In 1917, a friend ______ that he help write for a magazine called New Youth. His story made great ________ on people’s mind. He played a ______ role in raising Chinese people’s spirit. What a _____ man he is! goal get consider crucial great suggest influence considered goal got suggested influence crucial great 1号本 荧光笔标画可学习短语 假如明天英语课的主题是“Famous people”, 你想在课堂上介绍你最喜爱的演员—Charlie Chaplin。请你写一篇介绍查理·卓别林的英语短文。 基本信息 1889年4月出生于英国伦敦。 1977年12月逝世。 被认为是世界上最伟大的演员之一。 成就及作品特点 童年时期家境贫穷， 但很有天赋。 14岁起在英国各地剧院参加演出。 1913年到美国开始从事电影表演事业。一生共拍摄80多部影片，其作品总是同情穷人而嘲弄富人。 评价 ？ 参考词汇：有天赋的(talented),同情某人(sympathize with sb.) 剧院 (theater) Peer- editing Does the writer describe the person’s information? Does the writer make a clear structure of the passage? Does the writer say why the person is great? Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person? Correct the grammar mistake including spelling mistakes. 3mins Group sharing 1.Share your good sentence patterns and phrases with your group members. 2. Write down on a blank sheet 3mins Group work 4mins改正错误及画出好句好短语，进行句子提升 G1&G5 Ex.1 G2&G6 Ex.2 G3&G7 Ex.3 G4&G8 Ex. 4 Group presentation 3人任务，1人负责指出错误，1人阐述改正方法或进行好词好句分析，1人写出提升方法。展示时间：2mins Example 1 Charlie Chaplin born in 1889, Apr. in Londun, England. He die in 1977, Dec. He was the most great actor. At an early ago, he was poor, but he was talented. At