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Reading for Writing
How can music help us and change our life?
release our pressure
make us relaxed and peaceful
give us courage and power
keep us company
offer us comfort
Read for the structure of a speech
Greet the audience
Introduce oneself
Propose the topic
Sarah's personal story/experience about the topic(music)
Sarah's personal feeling about the topic(music)
Sarah's advice/hope to the audience
Thank the audience at the end
Ending
Body
Start
Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth, logical and coherent.
function?
(A) Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all? Two years ago, I was told ...
Read for the language features of the speech
I have once faced a time when things looked dark and I had no hope at all. Two years ago, I was told ...
V.S.
A rhetorical question
(设问)
A statement
Involvement of readers
Setting up a connection
Involvement of readers
Setting up a connection
Involvement of readers
Setting up a connection
Involvement of readers
Setting up a connection
Arouse the audience's interest and build a connection between speaker and audience, thus making the audience involved in the speech
Just state the story of speaker and have little connection with the audience.
Read for the language features of the speech
(B)John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.”
As Longfellow says, “Music is the universal language of Mankind.”
In my opinion, I think music is the medicine of the mind.
I think music is the universal language of Mankind.
V.S.
It's more convincing from a famous person. It can add weight to the point you present.
A quote
(引用)
A personal
point of view
It's not authentic and persuasive.
Read for the language features of the speech
(C) Music gave me happiness.
(C) Music gave me strength
and brought me relief.
(C) ...music gave me hope and
a sense of satisfaction.
Repitition
( 重复)
It can emphasize a particular point of view, draw the audie