Unit 1 单元话题写作-如何保持降课件 2023-2024学年冀教版九年级英语全册

单元话题写作 ——如何保持健康 　　中小学生的健康问题一直是全社会所关注的热门话题。请以"Keep Healthy"为题,写一篇80词左右的作文。内容须包括以下要点,可适当发挥。 1.列举中小学生所面临的健康问题,如吃太多垃圾食品导致肥胖,过度沉迷网络游戏导致近视等。 2.谈谈怎样才能保持健康,如营养均衡、睡眠充足等。 人称:第三人称　时态:一般现在时 Keep Healthy   【谋篇布局】 第一段:开门见山,提出当今学生面临的健康问题 ①Today,some students have several health problems. ②Nowadays, there are some health problems among students. 第二段:具体列举健康问题及危害 ①One of the problems is eating junk food. ②Another problem is that they play computer games too much. ③Eating too much junk food may make them fat. ④Watching too much TV can easily make them short-sighted. 【谋篇布局】 第三段:提出建议 ①They should eat more vegetables and fruit and give up computer games. ② It's also necessary to do more exercise. 巧衔接 ①在列举中小学生所面临的健康问题时,可用although,after,besides,because等衔接上下文。 ②在提出建议时,可使用动词不定式作目的状语的结构进行表达。 【句子升格】 1.It's bad for their health. They still can't stop eating it. (用although升格)   2.They should eat more vegetables and fruit and give up computer games. In this way, they can keep healthy.(用不定式作目的状语合并句子)     【范文赏读】 Keep Healthy Today, some students have several health problems. One of the problems is eating junk food. Eating too much junk food may make them fat. Although it's bad for their health, they still can't stop eating it. Besides, some students play computer games too much, which can easily make them short-sighted. After playing for a long time, they can't pay attention to study. To keep healthy, they should eat more vegetables and fruit and give up computer games. It's also necessary to have enough sleep and learn to relax. 【学以致用】 　　[2021营口中考改编] 同学们的健康成长是每个家庭最大的愿望和期盼,也关乎国家和民族的未来。健康的生活是成长、成才的前提和保障。 　　请根据内容提示,以"Healthy Living"为题写一篇英语作文,谈谈你的看法。 内容提示: 　　1.保证睡眠 　　2.健康饮食 　　3.加强锻炼 　　4.保持乐观心态 要求: 1.词数:80 词左右。 2.文中应包含所给提示,可适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Healthy Living   答案 【句子升格】 1.Although it's bad for their health, they still can't stop eating it. 2.To keep healthy, they should eat more vegetables and fruit and give up computer games. 答案 【学以致用】