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神态描写
神态描写专指对人物脸部表情的刻画。描写时要注意脸部的细微的表情和变化,适当运用表示表情、神态的词语。
神态描写
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取胜第一招:神态描写要抓住人物脸部的细微变化
素材摘录:“Who’d be writing to you?” sneered Uncle Vernon, shaking the letter open with one hand and glancing at it. His face went from red to green faster than a set of traffic lights. And it didn’t stop there. Within seconds it was the grayish white of old porridge.
Mrs. Durley,
Aunt Petunia
Dudley Durley
Harry Potter
Mr. Durley,
Uncle Vernon
“谁会写信给你呢?”弗农姨父冷笑着说,用一只手把信甩开。只看了一眼,他的脸色便由红转绿,比交通灯变得还快。而且还没停呢。不久,他的脸色变得像放久了的粥的灰白色。
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素材背景:Harry Potter has been living with the Dursleys since his parents were killed. Mrs. Potter was Mrs. Durley’s sister, but Mrs. Dursley pretended she didn’t have a sister, because the Potters were sorcerers. They didn’t and don’t want to have anything to do with the sorcerers. Nearly ten years passed and no one wrote to Harry. Now he received a letter from Hogwarts.
This is exactly where Harry lives.
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grayish white灰白色
脸色变化
and the
Sorcerer’s Stone
“Who’d be writing to you?” sneered Uncle Vernon, shaking the letter open with one hand and glancing at it. His face went from red to green faster than a set of traffic lights. And it didn’t stop there. Within seconds it was the grayish white of old porridge.
sneer
glance
grayish white
green
red
动作
脸色变化
sneer(v.)嘲笑,鄙视
画面感强
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取胜第二招:神态描写要反映人物的思想感情
素材背景: Uncle Vernon burned all the letters to Harry, for he didn’t want Harry to be a sorcerer. But more and more letters poured in.
素材摘录:On Sunday morning, Uncle Vernon sat down at the breakfast table looking tired and rather ill, but happy.星期天早上,弗农姨父终于可以坐在桌旁吃早餐了。他看上去疲惫不堪,但是非常开心。
“No post on Sundays,” he reminded them cheerfully as he spread marmalade on his newspapers. “今天没有信件。”他开心得把橙子酱往报纸上涂。
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On Sunday morning, Uncle Vernon sat down at the breakfast table looking tired and rather ill, but happy.
“No post on Sundays,” he reminded them cheerfully as he spread marmalade on his newspapers.
anxiety
and the
Sorcerer’s Stone
tired, ill