读后续写如何做好衔接 课件-2022届高三英语二轮复习

读 后 续 写 第二段首句的上下句衔接 读后续写连贯性 1 01 02 03 04 续写与原文在内容情节主题上的衔接 两个续写段落之间衔接紧密 (第二段首句与其上下句的衔接) 第一段首句与续写句的衔接 延迟符 How to be coherent? coherence 衔接连贯 focus 第二段尾句体现正能量主题 2 The corn was all popped, and the paper bags were filled and arranged in the basket when Bernard arrived. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(2020年7月山东卷) Raising her hand, she exclaimed, “The ice-cream granny! We can borrow a handcart from her.” Feeling proud, Mrs. Meredith gave them a hug. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(2020年7月山东卷) Which one is better? The corn was all popped, and the paper bags were filled and arranged in the basket when Bernard arrived. para 2.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(2020年7月山东) conclusion1:关键词为形容词或代词,细化形容词和代词 Why it is better? conclusion2: 关键词为名词,复现特定的人或物 To my great joy, I could breathe the fresh Halloween air. However, what surprised me most was that my beloved mom should film all the things! Para.2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. (2020年11月浙江卷) Why it is better? Similar sentences: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. (2021年全国卷) After the mechanic left, I tried to find the old man.(2021年广东省联考) The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy and his wife.(2021年12月西樵高级中学周测) Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired. We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. conclusion3: 关键词为动词,用近反义词、动作链、引发的动作去衔接。 Why it is better? conclusion3: 关键词为动词,用近反义词、动作链、引发的动作去衔接。 What is action chain?(动作链) cried fell down ignored a stone ran too fast saw his mom wiped out tears stood up hurt his ankle screamed hugged him tightly comforted him Similar sentences: Recalling her mother’s words, Sally was woken from her daydream.(2021年深圳一模) It was daybreak when Jane woke up.(2016年浙江卷) We drove throug