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Top 20 名校质检英语作文分析
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Helen来信说到对你家乡的某一景点具有极大的兴趣。请你她回信,内容包括:
1.介绍该景点;
2.邀请她来游览。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Helen,
第一节 写作(共两节,满分40分)
写作要点
1. Helen来信说到对你家乡的某一景点具有极大的兴趣;
2. 介绍该景点;
3. 邀请她来游览。
Dear Helen,
It's great to know that you are very interested in Huangshan, Anhui Province.
Huangshan, also called the Yellow Mountains, is known for its breathtaking landscape. Impressive peaks, ancient pine trees growing on steep cliffs, and heavenly sea of clouds create a scene straight out of a painting. The sunrise and sunset views are particularly splendid.
I sincerely invite you to visit Huangshan and explore its wonders. You can hike along its trails and experience the peacefulness of the hot springs. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable journey. Yours
Li Hua
范文一
Dear Helen,
I'm thrilled to hear that you're interested in one of the scenic spots in my hometown. Let me introduce it to you.
The spot, known as "Green Lake" , is a breathtaking natural wonder. Its clear waters reflect the surrounding greenery, creating a peaceful and harmonious landscape. In spring, the flowers bloom, adding a vibrant splash of color. It's a perfect place to relax and escape the hustle and bustle (城市的拥挤喧嚣) of the city.
I sincerely invite you to visit Green Lake and experience its beauty in person. I'm sure you'll fall in love with it just as I did. Let's make plans for your visit soon!
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
范文二
第二节 读后续写
“Keep this a secret,” Jessica whispered to me,“and the money is yours, Raelyn."After saying that, she looked me in the eye with a stare that was intense. It looked like it was saying,“Do not betray(背叛) my trust.” Then, she gathered her books from her locker and walked off.
I quickly came to my senses after I agreed to Jessica's strange request. Why did I agree? Just for money? I knew it was wrong for her to lie to her