内容正文:
Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle
Reading for Writing
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
期中作文复习
Now you are going to join the camp. Write a letter to the editor to tell him your own lifestyle that you want to change.
Writing
What is the basic structure of a letter?
Dear Editor,
Yours truly,/Sincerely,
signature
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
body
Complimentary close 信尾敬语
Salutation 称呼
To whom
who
Reading for writing
4
Preparations for the writing.
Write a letter to the editor about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change.
structure
Problem
Decision
Action
Result
What lifestyle habit you would like to change
Why you want to change
How you plan to change
What result you hope to see
past tense
present
tense
本单元的写作任务是写一封关于健康生活方式的信。这类文章属于说明文,正文部分主要包括problem, decision, actions, results等。基本框架第一段:写信的目的第二段:介绍自己的问题,决定,行动和结果第三段:收获和期望时态:一般现在时,一般过去时人称:第一人称
参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后
意识到问题,需要改变
具体的身心健康问题
关于原文Problem:的分析:
参加完夏令营后,你努力摆脱digital addiction,请写信给编辑,描述你的问题,决定,行动,结果。
实战演练
参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices,...
As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices,...
关于原文Problem:的分析:
具体的身心健康问题
I often felt sleepy and dizzy, and lacked passion. Most worrying, though, I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too.
Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards!
审视自己,意识到严重
I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life.
So after the camp, I realised that it was very, very important to adjust my lifestyle
I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally
参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后,我意识到我沉迷于电子设备,在玩的时候让我娱乐,但是之后更精疲力尽。
仿写:problem
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices,...
As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices,...
be addicted to/be crazy