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Section Ⅴ Writing
续写一篇科幻故事
[对应学生用书P95]
科幻故事是开放式作文的一种,在续写科幻故事时,我们可以根据故事前文或提示所呈现的情节,理清写作的主题与写作的主线,然后充分发挥想象力和创造力,将给定材料或提示信息发展成为一篇逻辑衔接合理、情节和结构完整的短文。
(一)常用话题词块
1.look around 环顾四周
2.head for ...向……走去
3.approach v.接近,靠近
4.put a spell on sb.对某人施魔法
5.with the help of ...在……的帮助下
6.set out 出发
7.capsule n.太空舱;航天舱
8.hesitate to do ...对做……感到犹豫
(二)常用开头句
1.Once upon a time,there lived a king.
很久以前,那里住着一位国王。
2.With science and technology developing,our lives have changed a lot in the 21st century.
随着科技的发展,在 21 世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。
(三)常用中间句
1.The ring suddenly began to speak,which made the brave young man very amazed.
戒指突然开始说话了,这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很诧异。
2.No one liked to talk to Wilbur,a weak pig,except a spider named Charlotte,who treated Wilbur as her good friend.
除了蜘蛛夏绿蒂,没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪韦尔伯说话,夏绿蒂把韦尔伯当作她的好朋友。
3.In 2146,we are flying in the air,conveying signals through our minds.
在2146年,我们在空中飞翔,用意识传递信息。
(四)常用结尾句
1.They finally defeated the enemy and established their own country.
他们最终战胜了敌人,建立了自己的国家。
2.They lived happily ever since.
从此,他们过上了幸福的生活。
假定你是李华,你校英语报“Science fiction stories”栏目正在征文。请根据以下提示情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的科幻故事并投稿。
One evening,I was watching a science fiction movie at home when I heard a strange sound outside. I immediately went out and looked around,but I found nothing unusual. When I decided to return to my room,I saw a flying object coming down from the sky.
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第一步:审题构思
(一)审题
1.确定体裁:这是一篇记叙文;
2.确定时态:文章以一般过去时为主;
3.确定人称:人称以第一人称为主。
(二)构思
第一段:简单介绍自己被外星人带走;
第二段:具体介绍在太空的所见所闻;
第三段:表达自己对此次星际之旅的感想。
第二步:核心词汇
1.登陆 land on
2.走出去 step out
3.与……交流 communicate with
4.先进设备 advan