Unit 5 Section Ⅳ Writing—Write a poetry review（word教参)-【状元桥·优质课堂】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册（人教版2019）

Section Ⅳ Writing—Write a poetry review (见学生用书P97) 写诗评就是要求我们就有关诗歌进行分析和评论。当然这必须建立在很好地把握原诗主旨的基础之上，而非罗列原诗的诗句。一首好的诗歌，自然有动人之处。可侧重诗中最打动你的某一方面抒发自己的感想。 【基本框架】 【增分佳句】 ◎第一段：介绍诗歌的作者情况 1．The author loved nature and often wandered in the field. 这位作者喜欢大自然，经常在田野中闲逛。 2．Here is a poem entitled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen, which enjoys great popularity among readers.这首诗的题目是《悯农》，作者是李绅，在读者中很受欢迎。 ◎第二段：介绍诗歌的内容以及主题等 1．The poem is about a farmer who is working in the field. 这首诗是关于一个在田地里工作的农民的。 2．We can learn an important lesson from the poem. 我们能从这首诗中学到一个重要的道理。 ◎第三段：表达自己的感想 1．I'm deeply moved by the love shown in the poem.我被这首诗中的爱深深感动了。 2．I will be encouraged by the poem when getting into trouble. 遇到困难时，这首诗会鼓励我。 【写作要求】 请根据下面的要求写一篇关于唐诗《悯农》的评论。 Sympathy on the Farmers (Li Shen from Tang Dynasty) At noon, farmers are weeding， Down the field, sweat is dropping. Who knows rice on a dish， Every grain is full of moiling? 注意：词数80左右。 【四步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：由词扩句 1．这首题为《悯农》的诗是李绅写的。(title) 　Here is a poem by Li Shen and it is titled　 “Sympathy on the Farmers”． 2．李绅很受中国读者欢迎。(popular) 　Li Shen is popular with Chinese readers.　 3．夏日正午时刻，外面天气炎热。农民依然在地里除草。(weed) It is so hot outside at this summer noon time.The farmers 　are still weeding in the fields　. 4．他们全身湿透，汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。(fall into) They are wet all over and their sweat 　is frequently falling into the soil　.The crops grow there. 5．我认为对今天的年轻一代来说，理解这首诗歌并珍惜每粒粮食是很重要的。(treasure) I think 　it's very important for the young generation today to understand the poem and treasure　 every grain. 第三步：句式升级 6．用过去分词作后置定语以及定语从句将第二步中的句1和句2合成一句话。 　Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who/that is popular with Chinese readers.　 7．用as引导的倒装句改写第二步中的句3。 　Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmers are still weeding in the fields.　 8．用with复合结构和where 引导的定语从句改写第二步中的句4。 　They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow.　 9．用“it is of＋抽象名词＋主语从句”结构改写第二步中的句5。 　I think it's of great importance t