Unit 6 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第三册（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing 写一份安全指南 [对应学生用书P169] 安全指南是上级对下级、组织对成员、政府对民众等布置安全工作、传达安全建议等使用的一种应用文文体，在日常生活和工作中为人们广泛使用。 [写作技巧] 1．构成： 安全指南由两部分组成，即开头语和正文。行文中要注意其语言特点和叙述特点。 2．语言特点： 多用一般现在时、祈使句和简单句；要按类别分层展开叙述注意事项。 [原文示例] 请将教材本单元“Writing safety guidelines”中的课文改写成一篇100词左右的短文。 [审题谋篇] 明确体裁、话题 体裁：应用文 话题：写一份安全指南 明确时态、人称 时态：一般现在时为主 人称：第二人称为主 布局文章架构 首段：洪灾发生前要做的事情； 中段：洪灾发生时要做的事情； 尾段：洪灾发生期间不能做的事情 列出核心要点 1.灾前听天气预报等准备工作； 2．洪灾发生时转移到高处等应急措施； 3．灾后不要喝不干净的水等注意事项 [词块积累] 1．危险的 adj. dangerous 2．要点 n． tip 3．抓住 v． hold 4．电 n． electricity 5．安全指南 safety guideline 6．自然灾害 natural disaster 7．冲走 sweep away 8．为……做好准备 get prepared for 9．天气预警 weather warning 10．急救箱 first aid kit 11．远离 keep away from 12．个人物品 personal belongings 13．放弃 give up [语法运用] 1．洪灾是最危险的自然灾害之一。(one of the ...) Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. 2．学习一些安全指南，为洪灾做好准备是很重要的。(It is＋adj.＋to do ...) It is important to learn some safety guidelines and get prepared for a flood. 3．下面是关于洪灾安全的一些要点。(全部倒装) Here are some tips on flood safety. 4．要做的第一件事是听天气预警。(不定式作定语) The first thing to do is listen to the weather warnings. 5．如果有命令，立刻转移到安全地带。(条件状语从句) Move to a safe place immediately if there is an order. [连句成篇] 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Flood Safety Guidelines Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. It may come suddenly and sweep away everything. It is important to learn some safety guidelines and get prepared for a flood, especially for those living near a river. Here are some tips on flood safety. Things to do before a flood： The first thing to do is listen to the weather warnings. Move to a safe place immediately if there is an order. Prepare enough food and clean water. Remember to prepare a safeguard and a first aid kit. Things to do during a flood： Try to move to a place high enough to keep clear of floodwater, such as the top floor of a building, the roof, etc. Hold to a tree or a wood block if you are in water. It is important to keep away from electricity. Things not to do during a flood： Do not drink floodwater as it is not clean. Do not take too many personal belongings with you. Never give up hope. 假如你是李华。你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”活动，本周校报谈论的主题是“发生地震时如何保护自己”。请你以“Earthquake Safety Guidelines”为题写一篇文章。内容要点： 1．地震来临前，做好充分准备，装备好救生包，里面有手电筒、电池、食物和急救包等； 2．地震来临时，不要惊慌。如果在室外请远离大树、高楼、墙等。如果在室内，要尽量躲在桌子等坚固的家具下面，并且注意用垫子保护好头、颈部。逃生时千万不要选择乘坐电梯。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：救生包emergency kit；手电筒 flashlight ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Earthquake Safety Guidelines Earthquake is unexpected and can break out at anytime. However, read these tips on earthquake safety so you and your family can survive. Things to do before an earthquake： Have an emergency kit filled with flashlights, batteries, food and a first­aid kit in your home. Be sure to plan escape routes and make sense of your environment. Listen to the radio for the latest news. Things to do during an earthquake： Get under a strong table with a cushion protecting your head and neck. Try to get into an open area away from trees，buildings and walls. Things not to do during an earthquake： Don't be nervous and keep calm. Never use the lift. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$