第二部分 第一讲 四大技巧成就满分作文-【勤径学升】2025年高考英语一轮总复习晨背与写作（外研版）

高考一轮总复习·英语·WY 见此图标眼微信/抖音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 第二部分 应用文写作 第一讲 四大技巧成就满分作文 技巧1让词汇高端起来 -It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the 根据高考应用文写作的评分标准，应用词汇的丰 oceans which play a crucial part in global ecosystem. 富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标 When feeling sad.I often choose to enjoy the novel part 淮。所以，在词汇亮化上应遵循以下三个原则： which includes a lot of good stories,.(2021·新高考卷) 原则1求新求变 -+When feeling depressed,I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative 同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而 stories. 不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出 现，要使用不同的表达方式。 原则2求准求精 DLearning that we'll be randomly paired to do the 写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确 oral practice,I want to express my different voice. 使用一个单词或短语就会让整个句子增色。 Besides,only two students in groups can't communicate (2023·新高考【卷】 --Learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the wel.(2023·新高考1卷) -.Besides,only two students in groups can't oral practice,I feel an urge to express my different communicate effectively. voice. In my opinion,each group had better have at least 2He tried to carry out a series of reforms to make his three students according to their levels,which is country prosperous.(2023·全国乙卷) good t0 making conversations well..(2023·新高考 -He spared no effort to carry out a series of 1卷) reforms to make his country prosperous. -From my point of view.each group had better He proposed the establishment of a national school have at least three students according to their system,which had a good influence on the Chinese levels.which is beneficial to making conversations educational system.(2023·全国之w) fluently and fully. -He proposed the establishment of a national During the summer vacation,I planned to surprise school system,which had a far-reaching influence my mom on her birthday by preparing a big dinner. on the Chinese educational system. So I decided to learn how to cook,which was ④Since its launch,“Talk and Talk”,a weekly amazing!(2023·全国乙卷) broadcast program.has gained more and more -During the summer vacation,I planned to popularity among students.(2022·新高考I卷) surprise my mom on her birthday by preparing a →Since its launch,“Talk and Talk”,a weekly broadcast big dinner.So I decided to learn how to cook, program,has gained increasing popularity among which turned out to be amazing! students. First.try our best to fight against global warming, A recent survey suggests that many students being which has become a great threat to sea creatures. interviewed.about 65%.tend to learn English by (2022·全国甲卷) listening to English songs.(2022·全国乙卷) --First.try every means to/spare no effort to fight -A recent survey suggests that a majority of students against global warming,which has become a great being interviewed,about 65%.tend to learn English by threat to sea creatures. listening to English songs. GIn conclusion.we should find a way to study online 6It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans better.(2021·全@乙卷】 which play a very important part in global ecosystem. -.In conclusion.we should find a way to study (2022·全国甲卷) online more efficiently. 68 见此图标跟微信/辞音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 写作专题 原则3短语优先 扩川对点训练 恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有 5.All kinds of activities have been held,the purpose of 助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。 which was to raise our awareness of campus safety. (1)形容词变短语的方法：0+同根名词 activities have been held, very important.useful/valuable/beneficial helpful was to raise our awareness of campus safety. --of vital/great importance/use/value/benefit/help 6.If you work hard,you will realise your college (2)动词变短语的方法：替换升级 dream.I believe a bright future is waiting ①know/realize-→be aware of/be familiar with for you. ②understand-→figure out./make sense of you work hard,you will ③should→be supposed to realise your college dream.I use -"make use of take advantage of bright future is waiting for you. consider -take...into account/consideration 小小- be comingbe approaching/be around the corner 技巧2让句子新颖起来 ⑦master→have a good command of 高考时，一篇书面表达中的句子如果都采用简单 ③thank-→express one's sincere gratitude to 句，背定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读 ⑨represent→on behalf of 起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合 ⑩succeed→make it/.achieve one's goals ①help-dosb.a favour 句，让句子“胜人一筹”，亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能 2value--attach importance to 力。换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不浮夸，多 Bvisit-→pay a visit to 变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。 Blike-be fond of he interested in/be crazy about/be 精彩的复合句 addicted to (1)增加亮点的定语从句 (3)副词变短语的方法：同义短语替换 I felt so proud that I shared housework with my ①very→nore than parents,and that also showed that I had grown ②properly-in place up.(2023·全四之卷) quicklywithout delay I felt so proud that I shared housework with my ④actually-→as a matter of fact parents,which also showed that I had grown up. 川对点训练… (2)吸引眼球的状语从句 用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑词语 My mother is skilled at cooking.so I decided to 1.Surrounded by green trees,the farm is at the learn from her.(2023·全国乙卷) foot of the hill near our school. -Since my mother is skilled at cooking.I decided Surrounded by green trees.the farm to learn from her. the foot of the hill near our school. 2.Therefore.I sincerely call on all of the students (3)提升档次的名词性从句 to learn calligraphy and explore the legacy of His famous philosophy of life,"Be the first to traditional Chinese culture. worry about the troubles across the land,the last Therefore,I all of the to enjoy universal happiness"impresses me most. students to learn calligraphy and explore the (2023·全国甲卷) legacy of traditional Chinese culture. -What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of 3.Since I have planned my career.I would try my life,"Be the first to worry about the troubles across the best to study all the related courses well.I'm land,the last to enjoy universal happiness." sure I will succeed! 2.亮眼的特殊句式 -Since I have planned my career,I would (1)运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子 to study all the related courses well.I'm 的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达 sure I will 方式。 4.Whatever form you take,do remember that your a.强调句型基木结构为“t+is/was十被强调部分 work should focus on the beauty of nature. Whatever form you take,do 十that/who十句子其他部分”。 that b.借助于助动词do'does/did对谓语动词进行 your work should focus on the beauty of nature. 强调。 69 心高考一轮总复习·英语·WY见此图标跟微信/抖音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 Yourh extends my horizons and at the same time.言简意赅的非谓语动词结构 gives me joy and comfort,.(2021·新高考I卷) DIn conclusion,Confucius has a profound influence on the .It is Youth that extends my horizons and at the civilization.and he provides timeless lessons for same time gives me joy and comfort. individuals and societies worldwide.(2023·金国甲卷) (2)运用倒装句，以示强调。 -In conclusion.Confucius has a profound 在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型 influence on the civilization,providing timeless 也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有： lessons for individuals and societies worldwide. ,“only十状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。 2In addition.take an active part in the voluntary b.none,neither,nor,not,never,hardly,little seldom activities which are launched by the ocean 否定词，以及at no time、.by no means等短语置于句 0 rganizati0n5.(2022·全四甲卷) 首时，句子用部分倒装 -.In addition,take an active part in the voluntary c.在so/such-that.结构中，当so./such位于句首 activities launched by the ocean organizations. 时，其后的句子用部分倒装 5委婉的虚拟语气 d.as、though引起的倒装句。 Without your kindness and generosity,I would not ®，表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首 have enjoyed myself so much when visiting England. 且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。 广对点调练 DStudents can be willing to communicate only by 用高级句式升级下列句子 doing s0.(2023·新高考1卷)） 1.Fan Zhongyan was known as a Chinese writer and Only by doing so can students be willing to politician in the Song Dynasty.and was highly communicate. appreciated because he made great contributions to This experience gives me a sense of accomplishment. 0city.(2023·全国甲卷·书面表达) but also helps boost my confidence to do what I used t0fer.(2023·全国乙卷) Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made -Not only does this experience give me a sense great contributions to society..(过去分词短语作状语) of accomplishment.but it also helps boost my 2.Without hesitation the whole class voted for David confidence to do what I used to fear. and said that no one had worked harder for that (3)让句式更加丰言的省略句和感叹句。 award than he,(2022·新高考I卷·书面表达) DWhen you are surfing or boating,never drop -.Without hesitation the whole class voted for 1 litter into the sea.(2022·全国甲卷) David. When surfing or boating.never drop litter (现在分词短语作伴随状语) into the sea. 3.You're considered as an experienced English teacher. We had a wonderful time.Not only did it give We'd like to conduct an interview with you about us relaxation,but it also got us closer to “How to improve English level”on our program.t nature.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷) is scheduled for9 am next Monday.(2022·新高考 What a wonderful time we had!Not only did it 【卷·书面表达) give us relaxation,but it also got us closer to we'd like to conduct an interview with you about nature. As it is scheduled.an art exhibition will be held "How to improve English level"on our program, next Sunday in the local museum .(合并 .As scheduled,an art exhibition will be held 升级为sice引导的原因状语从句和定语从句) 4.Through the activity,I have not only gained an next Sunday in the local museum. awareness of living a healthy life but also enhanced ③.传神的被动结构 the quality of my study as well as life. Recently our school is planning to hold a theme I have not class meeting to introduce traditional Chinese only gained an awareness of living a healthy life cultures.(2021·全国甲卷) but also enhanced the quality of my study as --Recently a theme class meeting will be held in our well as life.(强调句型) school to introduce traditional Chinese cultures. 70 见此图标明微信/拼音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 写作专题 川对点训练… 点拔3增加同位语或定语从句了 .Through the activity, [例1]我是李华 but I have also enhanced I am Li Hua.chairman of the Students'Union of my the quality of my study as well as life.(倒装句) school..(同位语) 5.There are a lot of trees and flowers in our school and Iam【iHua,an exchange student from China..(同位语) our school looks like a big garden. [例2]你最好在课前做好充分的准备，并对唐朝的 历史有一个简单的了解。 .(with复合结构) You'd better make full preparations before class and ++事+，年**中+，年。，+中电++中年年++市+年++。+++中，车。→年 have a brief understanding of the history of the Tang 技巧3让细节丰满起来 Dynasty.which helps you learn more about traditional 英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可 Chinese culture.(定语从句) 少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻[例3]首先，这次展览的主题是环境保护。 译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容：在看图作文中 To begin with.the theme of the show is Environmental 更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内 Protection,which will be not only meaningful but also 容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。 interesting.(定语从句) 适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有 点拔4增加个人感受、评价、期待、倡议等 的表达效果。 [例1门虽然这个#假我觉得很紧，但我为我所做的 点拔通过列举或举例 事情感到很高兴。 有关英语表达：such as…like.:for example./ Although I was very tired this summer holiday,I felt instance;…as well as very happy for what I did because I got a knowledge of [例1门其次，带一个小礼物是个好主意。 farming experience..(增加个人感受) Second,it is a good idea to bring a small gift,such as [例2]我想这样的活动是必要的和有意义的。 a bunch of flowers or a box of chocolate if they have I think such activities are necessary and meaningful, young children. from which I learn that we should help people who are [例2]如今，我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些 in trouble if possible..(增加评价) 坏习惯 [例3]他正在努力学习。 Nowadays,some of us have formed some bad habits He is studying hard in the hope of being admitted to a on campus.For instance,some students leave the lights famous engineering college..(增加期待) on in the daytime:some leave much food on the table [例4们我从这次经历中学到的是，爱护和保护我们 after eating. 的社区是我们的责任 点拔2增加状语成分 What I learnt from this experience is that it is our duty to [例1]今天我们学校在表演中心举行了一场音 love and protect our community.So the chairman of our 乐会。 school suggests our school hold a series of activities to call on In order to enrich the life of teachers and students as students to take action.(增加倡议) well as welcome the coming of Spring Festival.our ”川对点训练川… school held a concert in the performance center today. (增加目的状语) 下面是一名考生的习作（习作见下一页），请增加适 [例2]将安排一系列与环保相关的讲座。 当的细节，以充实文章、突出主题。 A series of lectures related to environmental protection will 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美 be arranged,thus arousing people's awareness of living a 术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿 low-carbon life,(增加结果状语) 者，内容包括： [例3]我愿意与你分享细节。 1.写信目的； Knowing you're interested in our coming graduation 2.个人优势： activity.I would like to share the details with you. 3.能做的事情。 (现在分词短语作状语) 注意： [例4]我直希望你能对中国茶有更多的了解。 1.词数80左右： With the Chinese Culture Communicating Event 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： approaching,I do hope you can have a better 3.结束语已为你写好，不计入总问数 knowledge of Chinese tea.(with复合结构) 心高考一轮总复习·英语·WY 见此图标跟微信/抖音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 川对点训练 用以表达时间顺序 [考生习作] 过渡词irt,second,third,(soon)afterwards Dear Sir/Madam, meanwhile finally、at first、in the beginning I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from subsequently、at last,in the end、eventually等 China,① I'm writing to 典例(2023·全回乙卷)At first,I broke apply to be a volunteer of the exhibition of 3 the eggs and stirred them evenly under the traditional Chinese paintings at the local art guidance of my mother,and then I washed museum.② the tomatoes and sliced them. First of all,I am greatly interested in 一开始，我在妈妈的指导下把鸡蛋打碎搅拌 paintings.③ 均匀，然后把西红柿洗干净切片。 More importantly,I consider it as a good chance to spread Chinese culture and develop 用以表达空间顺序 my ability.So I think I am highly qualified for the 过渡词on one side,on the other side,on the job.④ opposite side,in front of,in the center of,in the Looking forward to your reply. distance、in the middle of、at the back of、on'to the Yours. left./right,close to、next to、nearby,beyond等 Li Hua 典例Down the middle of the valley runs a clear,fast stream in which one may fish.In 技巧4让语篇靓丽起来 4 the low land along the stream are the 缺乏衔接过渡的文章，就好比一串断了线的珍珠， farmlands:beyond them is the grassland. Behind the tops of the first hills are the big 每个词句虽光彩夺目，拿出来却七零八落，不堪受用。 mountains, 要想成就美文，不仅需要高级词汇，还需穿珠之线，这 一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌 个线就是衔接过渡。 着，人们可以在溪中钓鱼。沿溪而下，低地处 序号 语篇衔接的过渡表达及典例 是农田：越过农田是草原。第一层丘陵后是 用在段落起始 一座座大山。 过诫词generally speaking、to begin/start 用以解释说明 with、first of all、in the first place、aswe 过渡词in fact,as a matter of fact,in other know、as is known to all,as is shown in等 words、namely、to put it differently等 典例(2023·新高考I卷)begin with,students 典例To put it differently,.I will try my have different levels of English proficiency.which best to achieve my goal. makes it difficult to practice together. 换言之，我会尽最大的努力实现我的日标 首先，学生们的英语水平不同，这使得他们很 用以表示因果 难在一起练习。 过渡词considering that、owing to、due to、 用在段落结尾进行总结 because、therefore,as a result、consequently、 过渡词to sum up,in conclusion,in a word、 thereby,thus,so等 in summary、all in all等 典例(2023·新高考卷)Therefore,I think it is 6 典例(2023·全✉甲卷)n conclusion, better to assign students to practice in pairs based 2 Confucius's teachings are a proof of the on their language proficieney and interests.rather power of education and personal values. than pair them randomly. 总之，孔子的教导证明了教育的力量和个人 因此，我认为最好根据学生的语言水平和兴 价值观。 趣安排他们成对练习，而不是随机配对。 72 见此图标眼微信/拼音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 写作专题 用以表示强调 用以表示观点 过渡词certainly、indeed、above all、surely. 过渡词personally、from my perspective、in to tell(you)the truth my opinion,I'm fully convinced that,as I see 典例I hope everyone finds your stay here it,as far as I'm concerned 12 an enjoyable experience and your visit will 典例Personally,it would be beneficial if you surely promote our friendship. follow my advice and have faith in yourself. 我希望大家都在这里过得愉快，你们的来访 我认为，如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的 一定会增进我们的友谊。 话，这样做会有益处的。 用以表示递进或补充 过渡词 in addition、furthermore、also、 ”川对点训练 moreover,.what's more、besides、not only 用适当的衔接词完成下列句子 but also,to make matters worse,worse still, 1.(2023·金国甲卷)另外，他不计金钱，全身心地 more/nost importantly、last but not least、 投人到治病救人中，使得贫苦大众生活得更幸 additionally等 福、更健康成为一种可能。 典例(2023·金国乙卷)Photography not 8 he devoted himself to treating only taught me the importance of patience. patients,regardlless of money,making it possible for but also allowed me to take full advantage of the poor to get better and healthier. my creativity and see the world around me in 2.(2023·全国之卷)起初，我发现理解相机的技术 a different way. 方面和捕捉图像很有挑战性。然而，随着不断练 摄影不仅数会了我耐心的重要性，还让我充 习，我开始提高自己的技能，并且加深了对摄影 分利用自己的创造力，以不同的方式看待周 艺术的理解 围的世界 I found it challenging to 用以举例或列举 understand the technical aspects of cameras and 过渡词for example、for instance、.such as.、.be to capture images. with as follows等 constant practice,I began to improve my skills 9 典例 Musical instruments,such as violins and deepen my understanding of the art of and pianos.are very expensive. photography. 乐器，例如小提琴和钢琴，都非常昂贵。 3.(2021·全国乙卷)一方面，网络学习提高了学习 用以表示让步或转折 效率：另一方面，也引起了一些新的问题。 过渡词 but,however、although、though、 online learning improves the yet等 learning efficiency: it also 典例(2023·新高考I卷)1t'sag00d brings about some new problems. 10 opportunity.However.from my perspective, 4.依我看，虽然考好成绩对学生们而言很重要，但 it is a bit inappropriate. 健康也同样重要。 这是一个很好的机会。然而，从我的角度来 看，这有点不合适。 important though it is for students to have 用以表示比较或对比 better performance in exams,health is of equal 过渡词like,unlike,in the same way、similarly、 significance. in contrast,whereas,instead,instead of,while 5.中华传统文化博大精深，体现在各个领域，如中 典例Some of us wanted to go boating,and 国古诗、针灸、书法、太极拳。 11 some advised going hiking,while others suggested Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, visiting the amusement park. which can be reflected in various fields, 我们中的有些人想去划船，有些人建议去远 ancient Chinese poetry,acupuncture,calligraphy and Tai Chi. 足，而另一些人建议去游乐园。见此周标酮微信/拼音扫码添加智能学习伙伴，突破一轮复习难点。 参考答案 第二部分 parents how you are appreciative of what they have 第一讲 done.But have you thought of alternative ways? 技巧1对点训练 You can show your gratitude through some small 1.is located at acts of kindness,such as making a delicious meal for 2.make a sincere appeal to your parents or just throwing yourself into their 3.spare no effort:make it arms.After all,actions speak louder than words. 4.keep in mind Writing a thank-you note on some big days is also 5.Various/A variety of:whose purpose advisable because all parents love that. 6.As long as:hold the firm belief that I genuinely hope that my suggestions can be 技巧2对点训练 helpful to you. 1.Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Yours. Song Dynasty Li Hua 2.saying that no one had worked harder for that 分 award than he [参考范文] 3.Since you're considered as an experienced English Dear Chief Editor. teacher:which is scheduled for 9 am next Monday Hearing that some editors are needed for our 4.It is through the activity that;not only have I students'English newspaper Youth,I'm writing to gained an awareness of living a healthy life apply for the post sincerely.I want to be an editor of 5.With a lot of trees and flowers in our school,our the Growing Up Stories. school looks like a big garden I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior Three.As an 技巧3对点训练 English lover,I have been reading Youth since I became a [考生习作] student of our school.I have learned a lot about English Dwho is studying in London in summer holiday learning skills and foreign cultures by reading it. Here are my advantages Fluent in English writing.I am sure that I will be I have received some professional trainings in my capable of doing well as an editor.Besides,I once worked spare time,hoping that I can work as a painter in as the chief editor of the English newspaper of our class. the future which I believe will be helpful for the job. I would be very grateful if you could give me I would appreciate it if my application could be taken a chance into consideration.Looking forward to your reply. 技巧4对点训练 Yours sincerely, 1.What's more/Besides/In addition Li Hua 2.At first:However 文体二提能训练 3.On the one hand:on the other hand 4.In my view.In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned [参考范文] 5.such as Dear Miriam, 第二讲 News comes that China Daily is launching a 文体一提能训练 short video project,whose targets are foreigners who have been to China before,so I would like to invite [参考范文] you to be involved. Dear Zhang Ming. With the theme of My China Surprise,the project Thank you for letting me know your inner welcomes stories about life in China from foreigners' anxiety.Well,sometimes it is really difficult to tell perspectives.It can be presented in various ways.As you 107