Continuation Writing遇熊脱险 课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

Continuation Writing CONTENTS 目录 01 真答题卡再现 答题卡展示 02 真题再现 2020年7月浙江卷改编 Part 1 真答题卡再现 01 续写内容的质量、续写的完整性，与原文情境的融洽度 02 所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性 03 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性 评分原则 文章 内容 语言 表达 篇章 结构 答题卡展示及常见问题 1. 基本要求不够规范；字数达不到要求；两段的字数比例失调；随意分段；抄袭原文；时态与原文不一致。 2. 内容不合逻辑，缺乏合理的想象，与上下文不连贯，没有充分考虑到各情节之间的逻辑关系。 3. 语法结构与词汇的丰富性、准确性不够。部分考生刻意追求高级、新颖、生僻的词汇及语法结构，未考虑与原文的语言风格是否相符。 4. 脑洞大开，想象不和常理，价值观有争议。 写 读 构 初写+定稿 谋段+回扣 读文 +审题 构思框架：细读两段续写开头语，构思两段段落大意和写作要点，增加次要情节。回扣原文，揣摩续写思路，确定续写内容，使故事完整。 创作故事：拟写初稿，注意语言的丰富性、句子结构的多样性和上下文的连贯性。润色修改，誊写文章。 读懂内容：确定文章体裁，理清文章结构及作者写作意图，捉住线索，明白情节，明确矛盾，揣摩语气，判断作者的情感态度。 Part 2 真题再现 。 2020年7月浙江卷改编：遇熊脱险 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”---the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears--like all wild animals--should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high, wire fence. He clawed, bit, and shoved the wire mesh. He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, banged pots, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws. 。 2020年7月浙江卷改编：遇熊脱险 I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter, I snapped some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fe