读后续写四步走，轻松写出好作文 讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写四步走 第一步:巧用情感句:读后续写一般富有故事性,所以基本要涉及各种情感。 情绪类形容词和名词: 快乐happy-happiness 兴奋excited-excitement 羡慕envious-一envy 宽慰relieved-relief 恼怒annoyed-annoyance 尴尬embarrassed-embarrassment 失望disappointed一disappointment 恐惧horrible-horror 忧虑anxious-anxiety 孤独lonely-loneliness 惊诧amazed-amazement 高兴delighted-delight 满意,satisfied-satisfaction 渴望Eager-eagerness 生气angry-anger 悲伤sad-sadness 羞愧ashamed-shame 绝望hopeless-hopelessness 无聊bored-boredom 困惑puzzled-puzzlement 惊讶surprised surprise 遗憾regretful-regret 万能结构:sb.felt a great sense of+情绪名词+welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.(某人感到一股强烈...在内心升腾,奔涌) 例:He felt a great sense of sorrow welling up in his heart and surging through him.他感到强烈的悲伤涌入心头。 情感句积累: ①The smile on his face shone like a diamond笑容如宝石般闪闪发光<开心> ②wild with joy欣喜若狂<喜悦> ③With tears of guilt flowing down her cheeks,..... 流下内疚的眼泪<内疚> With tears of sorrow rolling down her cheeks,...... 流下伤心的眼泪〈伤心〉 ④His mouth dropping open in astonishment. 他惊奇地张大嘴<惊讶> ⑤His anger was within his eyes, burning like a fire.愤怒在眼里像火一样 (愤怒) ⑥His face went white and a flood of fear welled up in his heart.<害怕> 他脸色苍白,一股恐惧涌上心头 ⑦The initial sadness gave way to joy最初的悲伤变成了喜悦<快乐> 第二步:巧用对话:读后续写因为具有比较强的故事性,其中可穿插对话,写对话时会出现“ 说”,这时要我可多用其他说法来代替“ said”,使得对话情境,人物情绪更加丰满。 ①表示“说”的有: (一般都是用过去式) said/uttered说 shouted/screamed大叫 repeated重复 nodded点头 continued继续说 emphasized强调 Answered/replied回答道 explained解释道 begged乞求说 whispered轻声说 murmured低语 yelled大叫道 ②修饰“说”的副词与短语 sadly 伤心地 bitterly 伤心地 gloomily忧郁地 proudly 骄傲地 politely 礼貌地 quietly 轻声地; 温和地 softly 轻轻地;温和地;柔和地 gently 温柔地;温和地 eagerly 渴望地;热切地 vaguely心不在焉含糊地 meekly 温顺地;逆来顺受地 in a kind voice 以亲切的声音 in a loud, firm voice 以响亮、坚定的声音 in a sweet, musical voice 以她甜美悦耳的嗓音 in a husky voice 低沉沙哑地轻声说话 in a comforting voice 以安慰的声音 in amazement 吃惊地 in desperation 绝望地 写作时将①和②结合起来写 例:"we can't go out", she emphasized in a firm voice. 对话积累: ①Jack cleared his throat and spoke in a low,polite tone. Jack清了清嗓子,低声有礼貌地说, ②The little girl murmured softly,trying to explain what happened to her mo